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Mando Assasin presents ARFCs!
« on: April 02, 2012, 02:53:08 PM »
Ok here is fiction witch will be long but i just started on this its called Advanced Recon Force Commandos.
 heres the figs i made of them.

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Re: mando assasin presents ARFCs
« Reply #1 on: April 02, 2012, 04:08:21 PM »
   4 camo covered troopers walk into a briefing room. They are ARFCs {Advanced Recon Force Commandos}. They are called claw company. A 4 man squad made up of Krys {Sargent},Scratch {demo}, Scope {sniper}, and Tech {Technician expert/medic}.

"what did you call us in for sir". Says krys."your'e going to felucia." Says a tall young jedi."Why,whats the deal."The jedi walks over to a hologram."A group of trandoshans have teamed themselves up with the seps. They are smuggling bombs and equipment to droid forces.They have skilled men and no one can penetrate their line of defense. You will be fighting trandoshans of all kinds, commando droids and a new droid prototype that they are manufacturing." A hologram pops up of a commando droid with guns and swords all over it.

"HAH"scratch says."I could take one of those." Then a holo vid of clones getting slaughtered by one pops up."Don't be so sure"says the jedi."You will be with regular ARFCs and a couple of ARCs. Your primary target will be the generator of each station." Wait how many stations are there." blurts out scratch."3 station F,C and Z. You will be deployed at exactly 9:00. Dismissed."

VVVVVVVOOOOOOOMMMMMM, a V19 torrent lifts of the ground and flies into the darkness of space. In the hangar men scatter around getting into gunships. All the sudden gunships start to fly out. They cruise down to the luscious planet with little noise ...........




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Re: Mando Assasin presents ARFCs!
« Reply #2 on: October 01, 2012, 06:41:46 PM »
The men silently stepped out of the ship and scurried into the trees........ but not without a noise. The clones came under heavy fire from enemy forces atop a ridge. The clones quickly returned fire. POW POW POW! A clone is popped with a laser blast in the face. A ARFC quickly returns fire to the Trandoshan culprit. There are 8 Trandos and 21 droids on the ridge. That does not include the 4 heavy laser turrets they are manning. The Trando that the ARFC fired upon is now lying on the ground with four bolts in his chest armor." Scratch and Tech you return fire on the bogeys from down here. Me and Scope will go around and take them from behind." Says Krys."Yes sir". Says the team. POW POW BANG BAM! The squad fires upon the seperatist forces." Alright advance upon the ridge". Continues Krys."Yes sir!" Replies Scope. Scope runs up the hill to a small log and crouches behind it. He rests his gun on a outward branch. He takes a deep breath and takes aim..........FZZZZZTT!
He knocks out a turret. The Trandoshan manning it falls on his back! "AAAKKKKK!!!" He yelps. Two commando droids notice this and charge Scope guns blazin! ZIP ZIP! Two bolts just miss Scope. Scope quickly gets back up with his pistol pulled! But it is to late. The droiuds are right in front of him! FFFZIIIPP! The droids try to slice Scope with there vibroswords. Finally he grabs one of the droids arm and shoots it in the chest three times. Then he takes its sword and takes its partners head off! By then 5 Trandos and 2 droids take notice and open fire upon them. PZOWWW! PZOOWW! He takes down a Trando and a turret. All the sudden Dadaladalalaladalaldaldaldaldla! A huge stocky Trandoshan with a big fat chaingun fires at the commando, forcing him to duck behind cover. Then..........................................
                         


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Re: Mando Assasin presents ARFCs!
« Reply #3 on: October 01, 2012, 07:00:36 PM »
Cool pics and scene you have set up. Awesome that you have created a little story for this. Keep up the good work.

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« Reply #4 on: October 01, 2012, 07:20:59 PM »
Thanks man! SO glad someone liked it! ;D
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« Reply #5 on: October 02, 2012, 05:10:47 AM »
I think there are others who like your story but the sad reality is not many people take time to comment on stuff like this.

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« Reply #6 on: October 02, 2012, 12:50:51 PM »
Thanks for the support man!
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« Reply #7 on: October 04, 2012, 05:55:43 PM »
Krys comes from behind and POW! Krys shoots the Trando. then POW POW FZZZZZTTT both Krys and Scope make quick work of the enemy forces! KABBOOOOOMM! Scratch explodes the enemy's behind Krys, as he turns around he notices a wounded Trando clinging to life by a thread. he has a huge gash in his leg wich is bleeding green goo onto the grass and mud. The Trandoshan reaches out to Krys begging for life. Krys does not regret his decision. He lifts his gun and unhesitantly puts a bolt in Trandoshan. he turns around to face a mess of clones at the bottom of the hill. He nods at his men, raises his gun in the air and shoots it......... "VICTORY"!!! He yells!"Victory!"The clones chant!




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« Reply #8 on: October 05, 2012, 07:10:34 PM »
Krys walks into a beige tent cozily tucked under a flower tree. His squad and an ARC with red bolt designs are sitting around a hologram table with the hologram of a young jedi by the name of Jeg Ohaken (The jedi who assigned them on this mission.)."Good, Krys your here i was beginning to worry.""I am in tip top shape sir!" Says Krys."Has Commander Strike arrived yet." Asks Jeg."Yes sir." Says a deep gruff voice." I am quite alright."" Good to hear that." Jeg continues." Tonight you will stay at your current position. Tomorrow you will move out and start your jouney to the first base. Get your rest............ You'll need it. More info will be provided."" YES SIR!" Yells the team!
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« Reply #9 on: October 05, 2012, 07:11:21 PM »
Still have like eight more pages and that was just one paragraph.
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« Reply #10 on: November 06, 2012, 07:30:15 AM »
They all leave the breifing room. " How long due you think it will take us to whip these guys?" Scratch asks haughtily to Tech as they walk out. " I am thinking maybe couple days." Scratch says before Tech could even say anything. " I have no clue!" Tech finally responds." But i sure hope it does not take long because i can't wait to get back to our ship so i can finish studying that newly discovered fossil." " Yes. Yes. Sounds very interesting. How do you think it'll take Krys?" Says Scratch as he comes up from behind Krys. " Uhh, Maybe 2-3 weeks." He responds. Strike interrupts them saying. " Yeah General Jeg said maybe 3 weeks."" Hey Strike do you know if any other ARCS will be involved?" Tech curiously asks. " Yep. They will arrive soon on a small troop transport coming our way. As far as i know we will be joined by Blaze, Loader and also Trigger." " Lets go grab some food i am STARVING!" Complains Scratch. Then they all walk to a small table with lunch.
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« Reply #11 on: November 06, 2012, 08:03:28 AM »
    Click! Scratch secures his heavy pack to his back. " Lets go!" Scratch hears commander Strike yell. Scratch walks out of his and Techs tiny tent. He taps Strike on the shoulder. " What do you want Scratch!" "Point sir." He says as he walks past Strike. He then moves to the front.
"Lets move!!" He yells to the men. Strike rolls his eyes secretively under his helmet and moves on. He knows he has a long day in front of him.


        2 hrs later 10 miles from base F
"Alright men drink up and rest." Scratch says to the tired men." Tech whats the head count?" "116" " Alright, we move out in 5 minutes!!"
5 minutes later.........
You can quietly hear the clone troopers footsteps crunching the leaves and wildlife plants. POW! All the sudden a clone gets hit by a sniper shot in the shoulder plate. All the clones duck for cover. They try to scan the flower trees to locate the sniper. Quietly Tech inches over to the wounded clone. He reaches for him and takes of the clones helmet. Revealing the pain stricken face. He was a young clone. Maybe 18. Ucckkk uuckhghgh. The clone chokes on his own spit and blood as he try's to hold in the excruciating pain. "What is your number?" Tech asks very calmly to make the clone forget about the pain." C cccc  c c c......ttttttttt 1111 1 11  cc 5555 UUUHhHHH." The violent shaking stops and the young soldiers stare goes cold. A thing Tech is used to by now but yet it still frightens him. "115" Tech silently whispers under his breath." I GOT HIM!" A clone excitedly yells while popping a shot into the well hidden droid. Then alll the sudden................ POW POW BANG POW KAaBANG! In a split second droids come out of nowhere and it turns into all out battle!




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