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Shadow Squadron
« on: June 25, 2010, 08:17:50 AM »
                                                                                                   the Battle of Kamino


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Emperor Palpatine: Execute Order 66.

Jax: It will be done my lord.

Kad: What did the old chakaar want.

The three V-wings avoid four vulture droids.

Jax: Order 66.

Ordo: I've been waiting for this.

Ordo fires at the nearest jedi star ship.

Kad: Let me show you how its done.

Kad's V-wing fires at the jedi's Freedom's Flag.

Jax picks up his comlink.

Jax: You just killed a hole lot of brothers.

Kad: you're no fun besides its the jedi's.

All three watch as the Freedom's Flag goes down into the deeps of  Kamino!



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 6 days after order 66
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On board the star ship Excel

Lord Vader: I have an an assignment for you.

Jax: What is the misson lord Vader.

Lord Vader: A jedi has escaped an imperial prison on Drakutar. Your job is to hunt down and kill the jedi. Failure is unacceptable.

Jax, Kad and Ordo: Yes sir.
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                                                                                              On the imperial transport

Ordo: "What did you think he means when he says "failure is unacceptable?"

Jax: "Are you that deaf. He means he will kill us if we fail!"

Kad: "Touchy."

Ordo checks his rifle.

Ordo: "We're in for a blast either way."
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                                                                                               On the the Imperial Landing platform
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Ordo: "Look at at all the stormies."

Jax shakes his head.

Kad: "I believe our commander has arrived."

Commander Salvo walks toward Shadow Squadron.

Commander Salvo: "You have your orders. Do them right and you will live, Do them wrong and you will die.!"

Kad: "He's in a cherry mood."

Commander Salvo punches Kad in the face.

Commander Salvo: "I can hear you! Next time the punishment will be much more...painful."

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                                                                                                      later in a Imperial Drop Ship

Commander Salvo: "We are nearing the drop site. Lord Vader has given me strict instructions. Our job is to locate the jedi than report to base! Is that clear."

Shadow Squadron: "Yes sir!"

Clone Pilot: "Nearing the drop site sir!"

Commander Salvo straps on his jetpack. Shadow Squadron does the same.

The floor vanishes as the men drop from the ship!

Ordo: "I hope I get to shoot something!"

The ship behind them explodes!

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                                                                                       On the forest floor

Jax: We got company.

Four scarp metal droids step from the dark letting a volley of laser bolts fly.

Ordo: We never get the easy jobs.

Commander Salvo pulls out two blasters from his belt lighting two of the droids on fire.

Commander Salvo: Fall back.

All four men watch all four droids fall to the ground.

Kad: that was easy.

Commander Salvo: don't get cocky. It will get you killed.

The ship behind them explodes!
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                                                                                Deeper into the forest
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Commander Salvo: "Something was wrong with those droids."

Ordo: "Sorry, all I saw was them trying to kill us.!"

Commnder Salvo pulls a blaster pistol from his belt!

Commander Salvo: "Don't push me!"

Jax pulls out his DC-17.

Jax: "Put the blaster away Salvo!"

Commander Salvo: "Is that a threat I hear!"

Jax: "It is!"

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Kad: "That's  My brother you're talking to!"

Kad draws a lightsaber!

Kad: "Our jedi general was such a giving person! He gave me his life and his lightsaber!"

Commander Salvo: "You all will pa-"

Ordo: "Just shut up!"

Commander Salvo turns a savage look in his eye!

Commander Salvo: "Jango bred us to be loyal!"

Commander Salvo pulls a vibro blade from his leg! He slashes Ordo across the face missing is eye by centimeters!

Kad: "You are going to pay for my brother's blood!"

Kad lunges with the lightsaber cutting Salvo's leg clean off! Salvo howls in pain!

Ordo: "What should we do with him!"

Jax: "Leave him! A slow death is all he deserves!"

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Ordo: "We got company!"

Twenty Scarp Droids rain down blaster bolts on the squadron!

Kad pulls his lightsaber from his belt.

Kad: "Get the charges ready! I'll hold them off till then."

Kad slices down the droids one by one! He doesn't notice them coming back together!

Jax: "I hate my job!"

Unknown voice: "Be still. Welcome to the House of the Forest."   

All the droids fall apart as the hit the  ground.

Kad (to Ordo): "I think that's jedi were after!"

Jedi: "I can hear you. You're only five feet away."

Jax: "What are those droids!"

Jedi: "I call them the forest Guarders. They keep my people safe from The Never Ending Darkness."

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                                                                                inside the House of the forest
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                                                                                                         Inside the Main tent

Jedi: "Believe it is time for an old friend of yours to see you."

A figure steps from the darkness.

Commander Salvo: "You cant get rid of me that easily."

Commander Salvo grins. His new mechanical leg gleams dully.

Jedi: "I found stranded on the forest floor. It was luck that he didn't die from the forest Wamps."

Ordo: "I thought we killed you."

Commander Salvo: "So did I. This jedi found me and gave me this leg."

Jax: "We tried to kill you for a reason!"

Commander Salvo: "This was a suicidally mission from the start. All we were suppose to do was put a beacon on the House of the Forest."

Kad: "I hate the empire."

Commander Salvo: "So do I."

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #1 on: October 18, 2010, 11:15:09 AM »
is this finished if not it should be moved to the fan fiction section

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #2 on: December 27, 2010, 12:59:18 PM »
The second half was never loaded.

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #3 on: January 05, 2011, 01:04:14 PM »
PD please can you load the final part so that this can be a completed work! If not don't worry, I can just switch it back to Fan Fic.