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Title: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 9/25/15
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 14, 2013, 11:00:00 PM
For my growing work of pieces: http://theirishrogue.deviantart.com/gallery/43679289

Hope you enjoy!! Feedback would be amazing. Poetics....its not my strong suit, but we'll give it a shot.


Order 66: 21st Nova Corp. --- Mygeeto ---


Snow flutters through the smoky gray haze,

Rising to my feet, ice crunches beneath my gear.

The enemy clanking, far across the bridge, eludes my gaze,

The tall Jedi approaches as does the commander; dissolving our fear.

Igniting his blue saber, Mundi stands upon the barricade,

“Forward!” he orders…as many have done before..

Shouldering our rifles we press on to follow the glowing blade,

Fires flair, lasers glaze, missiles burst; battle after battle we’ve endured.

My brothers fall...the payment of an ungrateful republic,

You’ve ordered us again to follow you to hell.

We’ve been told our sacrifice is symbolic,

I’m not afraid to die, but after this…it’ll be you who is the shell.

New incoming order! Our lives are no longer yours to sell!
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/15/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 14, 2013, 11:01:11 PM
Order 66: Master Yoda


Fallen, the shroud of the Clone Wars had.

Void, the essence of the Force became.

Within a moment, an empty swath cut through the galaxy.

Stretched thin through the galaxy we had been,

warn tired, our code challenged, perceptions: tattered and torn.

Vulnerable we were from every direction..most severely from within.

Diverse, vibrant, full of hope was the galaxy..

Now, created chaos and strife the Empire has..

Tightly clenched, order is, by this Sith Emperor,

instability he has brewed.

Rebellion, like a phoenix, will rise from the ash of the republic.

Retreat, bide our time we must..

Squander our hope now if we fight…into exile I go.

Watch over the boy you will..
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/15/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 14, 2013, 11:01:57 PM
Order 66: 327th Star Corp: Commander Bly


We are soldiers and we have orders.


General Secura has led us valiantly from the start of this conflict.
Through dark mountains to fluorescent marshes, from Acklay to battle droids;
She has saved my life countless times and I hers.
Pacification is our mission and our mission is on Felucia.


My hologram projector pinged --
“Execute order 66” it said.
My training is clear,
I am a soldier and I have my orders.

On patrol we scouted ahead of the column.
She approached the crest of the hill,
the planet seemed to go silent..
No ambient plants, no animals, no droids.

Thankfully we had on our helmets that day.
None of us could stand to look her in the eye; until she began to turn.
My rifle already fixed upon her back; my eyes met her glance,
Before her instinct could react we pulled our triggers.
We kept firing..
we kept firing hoping to quicken her end.
It was quicker than the inquisition that would soon come;
quicker than a life lived in a corner, always staring at the door..always with one eye open.

Secura's glance pierced me in a way I will not soon forget.
Always having longed to see her eyes again, to be near her at the close of a battle;
Thoughts I will now bury with her.

I was born a soldier...and we follow orders.
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/15/13
Post by: wraithnine on May 15, 2013, 03:33:11 AM
reminds me of Dulce Et Decorum Est by Wilfred Owen a British First World War poet who served in the trench at the Somme.

Great work Blake  ,youv'e now taken the Clone Wars into a different medium mate  10/10
p.s. Tup is done hopefully will mail this week buddy
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/15/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 15, 2013, 10:45:15 AM
reminds me of Dulce Et Decorum Est by Wilfred Owen a British First World War poet who served in the trench at the Somme.

Great work Blake  ,youv'e now taken the Clone Wars into a different medium mate  10/10
p.s. Tup is done hopefully will mail this week buddy


Awe thanks Jay! That is a killer comment. I just went a read the poem you left..wow was that potent. I studied History in university..probably why I write about the war aspect of the Clone Conflict. ha ha

Thanks again! I've got a string of them I'm working on. Any suggestions for characters, just shout! :)  ()rr
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/15/13
Post by: Tamer on May 15, 2013, 12:36:42 PM
On the front page with an image I gleaned from the internet.
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/15/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 15, 2013, 09:53:12 PM
Tamer,

Thanks for the fp shout-out! ha ha, its much appreciated.
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/16/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 15, 2013, 09:53:57 PM
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Order 66: Shock Troops of the Coruscant Guard -- Commander Thire


Fatigued and weary the troopers of Coruscant are,
An attack on the capital was nothing but imminent,
We held the senate district by the tip of our nails,
Our casualties but a shallow scar.

Mischievous were the intentions of the Jedi as of late,
Made all too clear as their influence and position spread,
They plotted and tumbled from their moral high ground,
Filling the public and their troopers with animosity and hate.

An alarm has sounded in the chambers of the senate,
A holo projection of our leader fighting off the nimble High Jedi Master,
Their last ditch effort..a final coup de grace..a second attempt to assassinate,
Your temple is in ruin..our success met with the sound of victorious sennet.

I will hunt until you are caught or lie wasted in the gutter,
The great masters, the pacifist protectors, falling grey into memory,
We'll hold your temple as a reminder to those who do not acclimate to strife,
The sight of our ruby Imperium won't leave you without a shudder.
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/16/13
Post by: wraithnine on May 16, 2013, 01:32:48 AM
another excellent poem mate
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/16/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 17, 2013, 09:36:28 AM
This is a sample preview I wrote in conjunction with a piece currently in progress for a competition on deviatart. I'll be going up against pretty pictures with words...it'll be interesting!! The contest is supposed to incorporate Rayn44's OC Aira-ty Nokta. It will be similar to changing tides in format....but 1 volume :p

Characters:

My OC -- A Jedi Guardian: http://rayn44.deviantart.com/art/Commission-for-TheIrishRogue-04-371613118

Her's/ focus of the contest: http://rayn44.deviantart.com/art/Aira-ty-age-meme-273436940?q=gallery%3Arayn44%2F31146607&qo=168

ha ha Enjoy the WIP!     .....FIRST JEDI MEMO EVER!! ;)



Jedi Order  – Padawan Closed Records --                                                                                         Status: Sealed
Name: Aira-ty Nokta                 Age during incident: 16                                                            Training Status: N/A
Case No.  412248. 0011. 11383XT                            Master/Trainer: Nada Athura (Killed during planetary negotiation)

       Padawan trainee Aira-ty Nokta has selected to leave the Jedi Order on her own accord. Upon the death of her master, Nada Athura, the pupil was unable to cope with the grievous loss. Exhibiting signs of rash behavior, unorthodox practices, and continuous questioning of Jedi tradition, it has been heavily debated whether or not the Temple should send a retrieval team. Master Athura has always been her biggest support; now that he has become one with the force, she feels more alone than ever and will not accept his passing. Guardian Kien has volunteered to seek her out in order to settle her mind.

       The future of a padawan is not noteworthy enough to appeal to the higher councils. With the signs exhibited by this particular student, I believe we will be opening ourselves up dangerously by allowing such a rash individual to remain. She may become of note in the future as some have seen during their meditations, but it will not be as a Jedi. I am declining Guardian Kien’s request and sealing her record. Reports suggest she’s began to link with several different mercenary crews.

       Aira-ty Nokta has chosen self banishment from the order; hence fourth from this point on, she will be prohibited from entering the temples inner most sanctums – So ordered.   -- May the force be with her.
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/16/13
Post by: wraithnine on May 17, 2013, 10:05:04 AM
very very clever you give this an air of authenticity  love it!
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/20/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 19, 2013, 09:56:08 PM
Here is a request I had on deviant art--- They requested a piece on Commander Neyo

Hope y'all enjoy!

If you want to see anyone, feel free to leave a comment. My next one is going to be another request:   Ion Team -- Apparently a Commando squad who didn't follow the order. That will make for an interesting piece.


91st Reconnaissance Corp:  CC-8826 -- Commander Neyo


Cold, Calculated, Code, Commanding, and Calm:

Words that describe a successful general.
Words that show there is no equal to me.
Words that prove I am a Clone Commander.


Tenacious, Tactful, Thunderous, Tireless, and Tough:

A list describing the 91st Recon Corp.
A list showing how we operate..that our enemy will have cause to fear us.
A list that proves this corp has patrolled system after system, overcoming any threat with diligence.


Caring, Trusting, Idealistic, Thoughtful, Proud, and Invulnerable:

Diverse strengths of the Jedi,
Diverse weaknesses of the Jedi,
Diverse ways to bring them to their knees.


Explosive, Fast, Effortless , Fiery, and Easy

This is how we fight,
This is how it happened,
This is how she, Stass Allie, died.

All too easy…
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/20/13
Post by: wraithnine on May 19, 2013, 11:14:44 PM
Ooooh very very good!
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/20/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 21, 2013, 10:26:51 AM
Here's another request off of DA that I did. I was asked to write about Ion Squad...a squad of Republic Commandos who did NOT obey Order 66. :)

Hope you enjoy


Clone Commandos -- Ion Team -- Captain Climber

Trained to be the best of the best,
We all stand tall.
Alone we are nothing,
Like fingers of a hand we clench the enemy by the throat,
extinguishing their plot with a well placed explosive or perfectly aimed shot.

From the rain covered platforms of Kamino,
Through catacombs of Geonosis,
Trekking deeper into the forests of Kashyyk,
Our missions take us far and wide, but no element is too tough.

The Republic has come to love us,
The Confederation has come to fear us,
our front line brothers nearly resent us,
but all have heard of our legendary efforts.

My brothers, we were Ion Team,
A critical element of the 22nd Air Combat Wing.
To the Corporate Alliance headquarters on Murkhana we were sent,
with Master Jedi Roan Shryne.

Together we flew, landed, and fought.
Forward to the shield generator and on we went!
In came a message: Execute Order 66;
To us this was an invalid command.

None of it made sense:
The droids shutting down,
The quick surrender,
The execution orders.

No..we wont follow the order.
We fought our brothers with non-lethal traps.
Its only right for those poor puppets who have been mislead to their fates.
The Jedi have not become the enemy...instead we have.

The Jedi escaped with the help of our preciously spent time.
Now two brethren of Ion lie dead on the floor,
Not by the work of Commander Salvo,
Rather they were cleaved by the red blade of our new master.

We've fled into the forest,but to what end?
We swore to die another day..and now we will,
Not as heroes, but as fugitives.
Though the hand is broken, Trace and I will push on.

Goodbye my brothers.
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/20/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 21, 2013, 10:48:07 PM
If you follow the letter's down the side...you'll see whose poem this is.


7th Sky Corp. – The 212th Attack Battalion –


Called across the galaxy; following the wake of the Jedi.
Ordered to Teth, Christophsis, Ryloth, Umbara, even back to Geonosis.
Missions have been completed with valorous success.
Missions have also gone awry with tragic costs.
Attacking Coruscant was a desperate measure for the CIS.
Not one planet allied to their cause will elude the souls of our boots.
Down and down their capitals will crumble.
Enigmatic our missions have become.
Rifts are forming in the sand of Utapau as my troops tight-rope down.

Called by the Supreme Chancellor’s Office on my comlink.
Order 66
Destroy the Jedi at all cost with extreme prejudice.
You should have died in that fall… If only that order came in before I handed you that   
                                                bloody saber…
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/20/13
Post by: wraithnine on May 22, 2013, 12:28:24 AM
superb mate ,just superb....
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/20/13
Post by: Tamer on May 22, 2013, 02:51:54 AM
Nice, back on the front page.
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/26/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 26, 2013, 11:19:03 AM
Not necessarily a poem, but this was a prose request from Deviantart.

They asked for written words from the Captain/ Admiral/ future Grand Moff himself...no other than Wilhuff Tarkin!!

Hope you enjoy his post order 66 thoughts on the matter.

REMEMBER: Read with the appropriate amount of "R" rolling ;) ha ha ha




Order 66

Data Entry 2246

Wilhuff Tarkin

The Jedi Order has fallen far from its once great prime;
rabble and ruin await.
Their customs and pragmatic beliefs made obsolete by a new order;
lead by virtues of strength and power.

The Jedi Council's leadership in this war was that of a haggard old man..
fumbling blindly in the dark. Their omnipotence crippling beneath its own weight, unable to heed its warnings. In military strategy, the most crucial component to victory is knowing yourself..the Jedi could not honestly face what they had become, THUS they fell victim to it.

Negotiators have their place. In a war, they acted as a means to purchase time for our crushing victory. If we, with such an unbeatable army, are truly willing to placate our foe, their pleas for more and more would hound us until we were rife with our own malcontent.

"Fighting for peace" these "Warrior Monks." Both phrases that depict a mediocre contradiction.

I was almost surprised they did not notice their imminent demise as they, the Jedi, accepted the helm of such a responsibility, "A clone army" to preserve a cracking republic.

Perhaps the masters or high councils saw the risk, but were unable to escape the snare whose price would cost them everything. Perhaps..they were intrigued by the grandeur of it all.

So brilliant was their demise; a game well played.
Their fall in to the abyss spread far and wide.

No fight left in them; no cause for hope. Only remnants which will soon be swept away.

A new weapon will be created soon. One which will be the pinnacle of our message and that will be freedom's bane.
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/27/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 27, 2013, 08:40:27 PM
Order 66

41st Elite Corp.

Commander Faie vs. Quinlan Vos

Fixing targets within my scope,
felling droids with each subtle squeeze of my trigger.
My boot souls cling to the wooden bark as we spring our plan into action,
Outlying branches come alive with elite snipers springing from concealment;
a relentless blue shower of bolts fall upon the droids vacating the waters with little hope.

The struggle for Kashyyyk nears the high water mark,
as trooper, wookie, and droid a like; fire volley after volley.
I stand tall above both sand and leaf,
the beach covered.. strewn with carcass, pelt, mangled debris, and smoke
peace for this planet wouldn't arrive with the coming dark.

The battle wears on with no shortage of thunderous bursts;
muted blasts fall within crystallizing grains of sand.
The struggle for the beach rages even towards its end;
a growing maelstrom of contorted armor and smoldering crafts litter the field.
Looking down to the Juggernaut mounted by General Vos, the enemy falls back dispersed.

Smoke whirling within quiet gusts of wind between leaves,
Thunder fades back beneath the calming waves,
Kashyyyk becoming safer with the fall of each robotic bastion,
My perch aboard a turbo tank gives me sight and hope..this war may yet draw to a close.
The metal plates explode, my body thrown to the forest, helplessly inhaling flame,
my muscles and bones broken, bleeding and fading. Fleeing my gasps heave..

You died in that explosion up on that tank's hull.
Though I've always disliked your kind..and you've hated ours,
Jedi don't die so easily. Your tracks lead through the trees and there I've followed.
We have followed you thus far..and both you and nature have withered my troops in number.
Reveal yourself, or an airstrike will break you, I, and raise this wookie village to a pile of skulls!

From the canopy Vos fell with his ignited green saber in hand,
Faie and his general's eyes met one last time, fiercely targeting one another.
Firing his blaster ..Vos plunged his further saber
The bolt bore its way through Vos' torched side, his knees hitting the forest floor;
Faie fared far worse nearly cleaved in two, crumbling down into the sand.
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/28/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 27, 2013, 10:56:45 PM
Another request from DA:

Was also watching ROTS tonight...so I was sort of already inspired!  ()rr

Order 66

Commander Appo

A speeder abruptly lands upon the landing platform,
"There's been a rebellion!" - "Sir, Its time for you to leave" my sergeant stated,
Pacing forward since I did not recognize his uniform,
Troopers of the 501st working hard to finish the perimeter they created.

For hours we pacified the Jedi,
After fighting a war along their side,
Their positions of peace only a lie,
Our numbers swelled as one by one they fell and died.

"GET HIM!" I heard shouted from behind,
The familiar hum and slash of a saber resonated so close,
A young Jedi cut through a trooper's arm, another's leg, my rifle and chest.
The searing of flesh left me speechless with only my teeth to grind,
My men charging forward shooting him from his toes,
Down he fell ...much like all the rest.

Laying on the cold floor,
Silence except for the breath in my helmet,
These Jedi I've come to deplore,
My eyes grow heavy though..but we've surpassed this gauntlet.

My armor burning,
Cleaved cleanly through,
Vengeance has my heart churning,
Revenge for my brothers..I will see through!
Title: Re: ORDER 66 Poems/ Writings/ Randoms --- 5/28/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 31, 2013, 12:56:44 PM
Another request:

Order 66

Battles of Kashyyyk -- Lord Vader

This is how your kind chooses to show respect to my new Empire?!
I created this new regime;
and you dare attempt to resist its change?
..A peace and stability forged with the death of my wife and unborn child..

These wookies were strong against the machines, but are nothing against the fiery wrath of my legions. I will raise your soaring,tall trees to mere heaps of ash and soot. Submit and become an entity within the workforce of the new Galactic Empire or wither away to endure a legacy, barely worth its weight in dust.

The legendary prowess of your kind is a fitting example for the restless populations across the galaxy who have.. trouble adjusting. May this subjugation serve as an example; Submit or Burn in the name of the Emperor.

The path to my rule has been paved in victory. I tracked the catalyst of unrest to a Jedi named Kento Merik. The Jedi are running low on places to hide. Their allies grow thinner and more fragile as the price of hiding their kind becomes too unbearable. Master Marik put fourth a minor struggle; serving better as a means to remove tree bark and bash through his own front door. His son had more fight. Raising this force sensitive child under my tutelage will be the gravest, most perpetrating insult to the foul order that once lived. A Jedi's son, raised a Sith's weapon. His very existence as important as the key which activates my saber.

Fear is not a choice..
It is law,
It is order,
It is your preservation.
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 5/31/13
Post by: wraithnine on May 31, 2013, 01:53:28 PM
Excellent work !
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 5/31/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on June 01, 2013, 02:11:02 AM
Thanks mate! I'm glad to see you commenting.

Where is everybody else? ha ha ha..I guess I should do a custom figure or two. ;)  ()rr
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 5/31/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on June 14, 2013, 02:10:13 AM
WROTE this for a contest on Deviant Art so everything else got put on hold temporarily. Hope I win! :p

http://theirishrogue.deviantart.com/gallery/


                        Star Wars

                    -- Falling Rain --
                      Short Story

                  :Exodus of Ara-ty Nokta:

     The three hulking engines of the Consular-class Cruiser, Constitution, heavily vibrated as it decelerated from the safe blue haze of hyperspace. Now at a slight hum, the ship slid effortlessly through space. Aboard was relatively young Jedi Guardian who had excelled through the faceless guardian ranks; his name Shakkra Kien. With him were a number of Jedi auxiliaries who were often sent with a Jedi to support them in unstable situations.

     Their mission, far from routine, was to Jabiim. A civil war has ripped apart the northern hemisphere as warring factions fight over raw resources using desperate measures to undercut one other. Such a loss of life inevitably sent ripples through the force as entire continents died out. Jedi Master Nada Athura had taken his padawan, the young and impulsive Aira-ty Nokta, to quell the hostile factions before the entire planet became a lifeless rock. Effects of the war are worsening the various climate conditions.

     Shakkra Kien slowly paced into the compact bridge of the cruiser. Placing his blue hued hand upon the captaining pilot’s shoulder, the Jedi asked, “Have you been able to break through the storms to make contact?” Turning to see who it was, the captain quickly turned back to monitor his controls, “I’ve tried sir, but with these conditions it’ll be nearly impossible!” The red diplomatic ship pierced the atmosphere, jolting as the dense air and storms began pounding the plates. The blue hand lightly squeezed his shoulder with encouragement,“..Nearly Impossible..”

     Turbulence shook the ship as it neared the planet, shaking it violently while it continued punching through the large thick clouds. Lightning flashed and spread like fingers extending through the sky, illuminating the dark gray thunderheads for seconds at a time. Click clack click..TACK..tic..KHACK! The pitter-patter of rain drops splashing against the windows of the bridge were replaced by loud crackling; hail and sleet battered the hull relentlessly.

     The captain’s resolve was dauntless, “This is some heavy …” his sentence interrupted with an abrupt jostling of his seat. “Steady yourself Captain. This storm tests your very constitution hence the namesake of your ship. Push on!” The Jedi spoke confidently in a hushed voice. The captain’s crew found resolve in his words; driving through the storm as though it was a training challenge.

     Kien sat in a chair behind the captain, securing his safety harness’ clasp. Rolling his eyes back, the Jedi’s eyes closed as he dove into meditation. “Descend captain.” The co pilot turned to face the jedi, his eyes contorted in disbelief. The co-pilot then leaned to the captain, “What the hell is he..” Chuckling the captain gripped his instruments tighter, cutting off his co-pilot mid sentence, “Have you not flown with a Jedi before? Here we gooo.”

     The Constitution heaved towards the surface at a steeper angle. The clouds began to lift while the ship quickened its descent. “SIR, THE TREE LINE!” shouted the co-pilot anxiously. “Level off the ship and look to a clearing in that crevice between the mountains. It is there we shall land captain.” The Jedi spoke assuredly, his eyes opening once again. “Yes sir.” The captain looked to his window and scans to find the spot alluded to by the Jedi.

     The Constitution slowed above a large gap separating the tremendous mountains; lowering itself slowly to the ground with the use of its glowing, blue stabilizing thrusters. Leaves and limbs blew about as the thrusters hurled gusts of wind forcefully into them. The landing gear of the consular ship touched- down upon the surface, sinking partially into the thick gripping muck. Kien disconnected his belt walking purposefully to the hatch way.

     His boots press into the muck of the ground noticing a pair of cloaked figures approaching from the tree line. Bowing his head and protruding horns in acknowledgment of Master  Jedi Athura’s status. Beside him stood a small female, eagerly smiling to meet the new visitor. “Guardian Kien, may I introduce my padawan, Aira-ty Nokta.” Smiling in return, the tall brightly clothed guardian reached to shake her hand. Aira hurried over to the knight wearing her signature smile. “She seems so vibrant” Kien thought to himself. Athura gestured to the bowing guardian to accompany him on a walk toward one of the faction base camps.

     Aira-ty shadowed closely behind her master as he spoke to the newly arrived Jedi.  Athura began, “The situation here is dire...and that is simply put my friend.”
Kien in reply outlined his task ending with an air of frustration in his voice, “That may be, but I am here to collect you and your padawan. You know civil wars are not under our jurisdiction. Its and internal affair and you know it! Why deviate so recklessly from your record?”

     Athura looked adoringly to his young padawan, “Because the most important lessons we must learn cannot be done in a classroom or through meditation. They must be seen, felt, experienced.” The tall Kien pulled the Jedi Master aside and in hushed, edgy tones, sharply questioned, “Why do you take such risks Master?  I fail to..”

     Locking eyes with the horned knight Nada Athura replied, “Don’t you recall a certain Chagrian Jedi doubted by many? I seem to remember how little faith various masters had in your lesser known species. It was I, who reminded them the purpose of accepting the masked service of the guardians, “others above self”. The fact you were identifiable was irrelevant…it was your sacrifice of identity and self for the order’s sake that made the difference.”

     Shakkra Kien’s brow relaxed, accepting the point being made. Master Nada Athura made a habit of taking on the padawans who had more difficult trials. Master Athura’s reached behind Kein’s shoulder guiding him back towards the pupil, “Aira-ty is like you in some ways. She’s rare which leads to bullying and being outcast from others. She jokes and pranks them with good intention, but many do not “see” her. Aira-ty is extremely compassionate towards others. Her sensitivity through the force opens her up to being emotional. I’ve brought her here to teach her how to control and use those emotions in a positive fashion.”

     Kien nodded as he walked beside the young ocean-green haired padawan. “You’re not alone in being alone you know” he spoke as the three walked in a line through the trees and into a heavily defended, but mostly improvised camp.

     The people were impoverished.

     The camp’s leader approached; a clean cut professional politician with a clear military background spoke, “More Jedi? Have you brought an army or are you just another negotiator?” Aira-ty spoke boldly, pouncing on the opportunity to exhibit one of her master’s teachings, “Our presence here is to save lives..not just yours, but the people on the other side too! Wouldn’t you prefer it happen before your war finishes its transformation into a stale rock shadowed by death?” The leader partially stepped back, crossing his arms, his head tilting with a degree of skeptical arrogance.  Master Athura took a step forward toward a holographic table to stand behind Aira-ty, placing his hands on her shoulders in support, “If both sides agree to a ceasefire, it is an effort that must be under taken.”

     Her youthful, round, orange eyes penetrated deep into the commander, “Please, your people are suffering. The pain from this planet is thick enough to hold. Can’t you feel it? Won’t you try?!” Aira-ty’s lip quivered as the last word left her mouth.

“It’s not that simple..” argued commander Granich.

“Do or do not commander. The path is ahead of you. As a leader, you must choose the way.”

    Aira-ty leaned forward in an outburst, her master gripped her shoulders tighter, “What’s the point in leading a planetary system that cripples under its own weight?!..OR it’s people..who are all dead?! HUH?! WHAT?!” Shocked by her cavalier notions, Granich thought to himself for a moment.

    “Though rash, your point is quite true. I’ll set up a meeting, but I warn you…it won’t be the first trap we’ve walked into.”

     While the commanding officers negotiated a neutral rendezvous, the three Jedi sat at the base of a large tree trunk. Leaning against it, Kien observed Aira-ty using the force to manipulate falling rain drops. She playfully entertained the children with innocent tricks, preventing the rain from landing on the heads. The children mirrored her force gestures, thinking they too were capable of suspending rain drops.

     “She’s providing a small reprieve from the hell that slowly engulfs this planet. Though we practice restraint as Jedi, Aira does well..providing a glimmer of hope to these young ones.” Kien remained in silent agreement.

     Somberly, Kien raised his horned head from watching the water manipulation he was toying with in his lap. “We need to leave this place. I feel the balance tipping further from us Master.” The experienced Jedi leaned back, “Time will reveal its lesson Guardian Kien.”

     Commander Granich and a squad briskly appeared from behind a large crumbling structure. “We’re meeting the opposition leaders in the valley at these coordinates.” Looking over his shoulder, Master Athura rose to his feet, watching his padawan hug each child while they were gathered. Aira-ty slowly walked toward her masters, one hand resting on her saber, the other slowly wiping a tear that ran down her cheek.

     The Jedi and commandos boarded four different speeders, accelerating away towards the rendezvous...
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 5/31/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on June 14, 2013, 02:10:47 AM
  Upon arrival the soldiers climbed from their hovering vehicles and set up a basic perimeter. The opposition’s delegates arrived shortly after. Both leaders starred with a burning fire at the other. Tensions between the two were all too apparent. Kien grew uncomfortable as he studied the soldier’s tension from both sides.

     The officers of Granich’s forces were far better dressed, groomed, and armed…the oppositions commandos were tired, worn, caked with dirt, heavily scarred, but resolved in their cause. “Master Athura..this war…it’s a game of chess to them..”

“Then it ends now..” the heavily robed older Jedi stated, storming towards the table... where an argument had begun to erupt.

     Words became louder until insults were shouted to and fro. The opposition’s delegate slammed his datapad against the table cracking the screen before pacing a way…with each step his hand began to raise higher in the air….until suddenly it dropped..
A sense overcame Kien forcing him to activate is double bladed golden saber; his eyes frantically searching for an enemy as Granich’s troopers fell to the wet ground around him, impaled by high velocity arrows, pierced through by sniper blasts.

     Aira-ty drew her lightsaber and with an impressive flourish sliced through a number of arrows, knocking them off course to protect those behind. Aira-ty used her fast reflexes, skilled force techniques, and deep connection to those around her in order to block the incoming bolts that whisshhed towards those around her.

     Master Athura charged into the fray placing his hands in the center of his chest, as if he was going to pray. Finger after finger tightened as the force strengthened within him, “AHHHH KKAAAH!” With his voice an incredible force blast emanated from him splintering trees to their core, throwing bodies, and disorienting any others who had managed to keep their footing.

     Athura turned to Granich outreaching his hand, helping him to his feet. Nearly 30 paces away, the opposition’s leader lay on the ground. The veins in his head heavily pulsed as he closed one eye, crawled to his knees, drawing a pistol styled crossbow…aimed…then squeezed the trigger. The high tension of the fiber string hurled the bolt at tremendous speeds.

     Athura ignited his brilliant green blade leaping before Granich whilst slicing the arrow in half as it soared, cutting through the rain that filled the air. The arrow’s tail lay next to Athura’s boot, its momentum had been strong.

“Nice save Master! That was close!” Aira-ty shouted, her foot steps pattering as she jogged to her master’s side. His head turned slightly as he managed a small smile, “too close my dear..”

     A small dark stain grew in the center of his chest with every breath growing into gasps. Granich fell silently upon a wet slippery boulder..rolling slowly to his side, red blood continued to stream down the rock with each pump of his heart. Granich’s eyes twitched with fury..whispering a final word, “vengeance..” before exhaling a final time.

     Athura’s saber splashed after leaving is hand. Crumbling to his knees; Aira-ty barely managed to catch him beneath the arm. Her eyes became glassy releasing tears which were lost amongst the drops of rain streaming down her tender cheeks.

     “Hold on Master! We’ll get you a medic!” “Its too late for that my young one. Now we learn the most poignant lesson of ..of our order. ..to let go” Aira-ty’s smooth face became rife with emotion, wrinkling as eyes closed tight, “Noo Master! You can’t leave me now..please! You’re my protect..”

     Athura placed his pointer and index finger in the center of her chest, halting her whimpers momentarily, “You are your greatest protector. Always have been..be at peace young one..as I…am…” The Jedi master’s eyes closed tenderly; his head falling into Aira-ty’s small shoulder. Aira-ty remained silent amidst the lightning and rain.

     The padawan pulled her master’s hood over his raven black hair to protect it from the water laden soil. Using the force to lift Athura’s body, she placed him on the flat surface of a nearby speeder. His skin which had been fair and pale in life began losing its opacity making his blue veins more visible. As she reverently positioned his body, Guardian Kien approached. His voice piercing through the rain,

“Go placidly amidst the noise and haste remembering what peace there is in silence. As far as possible, without surrender, be on good terms with all persons. Speak your truth quietly and clearly; and listen to others, even to the dull and ignorant, they too have their story. Yours will be remembered in the halls of the Jedi for years and students to come. Be one with the Force Master Nada Athura.”

     Aira-ty stood motionless grasping both sabers in her small hands. Kien felt the emotion swelling within her. Her sadness forming a turmoil of angst and resentment. Aira-ty’s anger was only momentary quickly transforming into hate for the man who murdered her master. She felt it spring through her body! The opposition’s leader picked himself up..his face in horror at the target he had struck. All stood awestruck at the scene that had unfolded.

     Aira-ty quickly spun, her arms behind her ignited both lightsabers! Launching the sabers the blades spun in tight loops quickly towards their target to cleave him into oblivion. Before they could sear flesh, the green blades disappeared..the pommel grips breaking into dozens of pieces which remained suspended in the air. All the pieces flew back towards Aira-ty who ducked out of their way. They passed over heard before reconstituting themselves in the hands of Guardian Kien.

     Cold ice eyes met Aira-ty’s orange glowing glare, “It’s OVER!” Kien thundered. The glare broke apart as her sadness set back into place. She turned back, resting her head on Nada Athura’s motionless chest, his blood pooling in puddles beneath the speeder, “Its only begun...”
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on June 14, 2013, 02:13:45 AM
 Kien’s mind raced to think how to salvage the incident: concerned both for the planet’s civil war, but also troubled by Aira-ty’s close brush with the dark side. Troops on both sides did not dare pick up their weapons fearing the spectacle just witnessed.

     The faction leader approached and kneeled before the Jedi, his speech wavering, “I am Talec Falcrin. My deepest regret for .. your friend. I will surrender my life ..I ..I don’t..I don’t know what to..” His eyes wide, mixed with disbelief, shock, and genuine confusion.

     “This will not be necessary. Tyranny has been cleansed and payment made. The Jedi to not promote assassination, but its is clear Granich’s death was needed..since he was the main proponent. A treaty is made today…OR the Republic will bring harsh sanctions.” “Y-y-yes sir! We will bring it for your eyes to oversee soon Master Jedi!” “I am no master Talec..a guardian..much different.”

     The auxiliary troops which had accompanied Kien circled the speeder to collect the remains of Athura’s body. “Don’t..you TOUCH HIM!” Aira-ty unleashed. Kien knelt to Aira whom he embraced. “Death is a strong teacher..one which touches us all.” “I miss him so much already!” Kien whispered into the padawan’s ear, “I know Aira…I know. Let’s get you two home.”

     The war council’s of both sides met hours later surrounding a speeder watching as Kien read through the terms of their ceasefire. Nodding, he passed the tablet back, “My eyes will be on this sector. The planet will grow back and there is hope for your people. Lead them well and..Do not disappoint.”

     Walking up the boarding ramp of the crimson red diplomatic ship, Aira-ty met Kien. Focused, Aira’s stare remained fixed on Talec. “You shouldn’t have disassembled my blades..”

Kien stopped walking up the ramp, “I wouldn’t have…if you had not thrown them. A vengeful execution is what you were committing. Athura leapt in the way of that arrow..a casualty of war with the best intentions. Come Aira.” Aira turned slowly, continuing up the ramp as it closed only glancing back at the harsh rain.

“Lift us off Captain!”

“Yes sir!”

The ship tore through the muddy soil that clung to the gears pulling in to the air towards space. Standing in the bridge, a single beam of sunlight pierced through the clouds. Aira shed a final tear for her fallen master.

“It’s a gift to be so compassionate” Kien spoke.

“It’s a curse to be so compassionate” Aira replied.





So there's that. ha ha. Kept out alot of the frature that occurs with Aira cuz I wanted to keep it on the brief side for the contest. To learn more or see her..follow this link http://theirishrogue.deviantart.com/art/I-told-you-so-many-times-376497953

Sakkra Kien is my OC --- http://theirishrogue.deviantart.com/art/Commission-for-TheIrishRogue-04-371613118
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
Post by: wraithnine on June 14, 2013, 04:54:31 AM
Blake that was excellent mate ! i thoroughly enjoyed the story .
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on June 15, 2013, 07:55:43 AM
Thanks Jay! I'll let you all know how I fair in the contest.
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/20/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on June 19, 2013, 10:41:23 PM
                             Order 66

                          Barriss Offee

               Lieutenant Galle of the 327th Star Corp.

                      (Pre Clone Wars Canon)

The dusk has come and gone upon Felucia,
Plants and animals a plethora of colors adore their feral nature.
The planet embraced the galaxies plight making every day a struggle on Felucia,
Plants and animals bristling with gnashing teeth, thorns, spikes, poisons,and colors to allure.

Battles raged planet wide,
The Separatists attempting to turn nature's already terrifying wrath against us.
Everyday the struggle brought a chance to turn the tide,
If only we were so fortuitous,
Perhaps not so many of us would have died.

Offee led us towards the water facilities of Har Gau,
Down the thickets to foil a poisonous plot being hatched.
Bravely she strode fourth, hushly beginning our offense with a simple, "Now",
Our detachment hurried fourth unleashing the fury of our might..many of the enemy were quickly dispatched.

The young Jedi executed the plan,
ordering us to retreat bating the foe to follow.
She sneaked in as we falsely ran,
The enemies victorious momentum about to be made hollow.

What's this an order from Commander Bly?
The 66th order. 
She said to fire,
clear of the blast her situation was not dire.

Little did she know our guns were fixed on her,
The ground and her body erupted into flame.
A Jedi's subtle plot to poison ending like this is sure to deter,
these robed knights won't escape the blame.
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/20/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on June 19, 2013, 10:42:48 PM
                       Reward or Execution

                      The Separatist Council

                         "Final Moments"

War always ends as it often begins.
Soft conspiring words echoing down catacombs, sharp as daggers, and hard at work.
Count Dooku's promises proliferate more than mere ears,
down into the greed filled minds and hearts of those aspiring for greater power.
Selling out the hopes and dreams of those they represented,
cashing in upon those who were left weak by the expansive, weak Republic.
Blue, purple, yellow, green, black, red,
Bloodshed was inevitable.

One man's lure was so tempting,
High positions in a new government separate from the old, stale, taxing, crippled Senate.
Free trade for the coalitions and corporations we control..
as long as we follow orders from Dooku alone.
This coalition created in secret, swelling in size by the hour.
Our droid army larger than any had seen in thousands of years!
By sheer presence we will have our independence..
and if the council deems the acquisition of another system necessary,
we simply.. shall take it.

Two hapless Jedi and single outspoken senator..
far easier it has been to dispose of more important figures.
From all around the Jedi came sabers in hand,
From above an army thunderously poured,
From within our fear already strode.
Could we be undone already at such an infantile stage?
Their army so fast and rapid,
meeting our forces piece for boot.

Three years our creation lasted.
Dead planets, dead clones, crashed ideas -- all lay strewn our wake.
The brink has approached and gone, but on which side do we stand?
Dooku slain, The Chancellor rescued, Grievous cornered, Clone legions surging fourth.
Little room remains for our certainty.
Darth Sidious sends his emissary to discuss our reward.
Optimistic we are, but a minor feeling is yet to be lost.
Where is our place to stand on the precipice that nears?

Mechanical pieces lay rusting across the galaxy.
Simple pawns moved from square to square..not even players of our own game.
Reward or execution,
we know not what awaits except for the name of the messenger..harbinger of our fate..
..Darth Vader enters.

In he came,
the doors sealed behind.
San Hill was first to recognize the familiar face of a hero we had already come to hate.
Stabbing, slashing, cleaving, choking, crippling..
The command center became an execution chamber, a tomb, the end.
Severing heads and limbs from torsos,
crushing our very bodies with a simple gesture.
We stood no chance.
Again we begged, we pleaded, reminding him of promises once made.
Each retort only adding only insult to injury.

Wat Tambor now slumps over the gray conference table,
My confidant from the invasion of Naboo, Rune Haako, falls lifelessly to the floor.
Only when he's finally muted have I heard his advice,
"We should not have made this bargain."
The Republic's hero approaches.
Anger, hate, burning as if I had attacked someone dear to him in years past.
But ..We were to be taken care of...

"The war is over. Lord Sidious promised us peace! We only want—"
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
Post by: wraithnine on June 20, 2013, 12:43:44 AM
these are very deep writings Blake i am seriously impressed mate ,can't wait to read the next few..
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on June 20, 2013, 07:20:52 AM
Thanks Jay! means alot :)

That last one about the CIS..very interesting to write. It was eye opening..but I still don't like em. ha ha ha
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
Post by: Viper6 on July 27, 2013, 10:08:23 AM
I really enjoyed the poetic take on SW Fanfic, solid stuff brother, hope to read more in a bit.  keep it coming!
Title: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 8/26/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on August 26, 2013, 07:18:06 PM
The following 3 entries are drafts I am writing for a friend on Deviant Art. He wanted a doomed battalion that gets utterly wiped out when scouting the planet for Republic involvement.

Here is a transmission I wrote to get started:

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The following is an transmissions sent from Sergeant Rho during the opening hours of the Serenaos campaign.

"Thirty Th..d Re...ent command, this Sergeant Rho! This mission is ....lete! Talon wing ... annihilated! Contrail battalion is in disarray! The shadow teams .....ounted for! Two Squads holding! Unsure if da..age to jam.... array was sufficient! Searching for Nat...al Guard leadership if any have survived mass ...cutions. Coup within mi..tary.

Please advise! Req..sting full re.......ents. Beaches lost. Heavy ....es. PLEASE .....  US! Full force nes.....

...Not Rebels.................funded terrorists!"
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Here is what he sent me:

Alright here goes:
Planetary system: Serenaos - Nightfall
Friendlies: 3rd Regiment – Air Division (Approx 300 Clone Paratroopers) Along with experimental LAAT/i Stealth variants and Phase I Shadow troopers.

Hostiles: The Brotherhood (Terrorist Separatist sympathisers) and suspected Droid forces.

Objective: Para-drop several clicks behind the defense lines of the Serenan docking zone and rendezvous with the National Guard if there force remains at the bays' defence point, lethal force is authorised if met by terrorist forces. Secure/Fortify the beachhead. Locate and destory the communication jammer disrupting Republic orbital scans, and standby to be releaved as soon as the diplomatic vessel (Consular class corvette) is dispatched. If the communication jammer remains intact the invasion force will be deployed.


Outcome: Deployment Gunships detected and shot down. Para troopers scattered within enemy lines - Entire unit suspected MIA/KIA. Republic Acclamators pull closer to the system and the Invasion, under the commander of Colonel-Lieutenant Telos, is launched.
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on August 26, 2013, 07:19:06 PM
     In the early stages of the Clone War, it became necessary for the senate to create multiple smaller sub committees. These committees and commissions are to focus their efforts on various elements of the war including appropriations, performance reviews, new military reforms, and treaty arrangements. The Senate War Commission was established for the purpose of evaluating great victories and defeats of the Clone Army weighing the ever growing costs. Padme Amidala has been instrumental in its creation, believing that a hybrid of citizen representatives and high ranking officers are necessary to provide these checks of power, thus bringing balance to the system.

    The following testimony was given by, CT 1043, newly promoted Captain Rho. His account is that of the Third Regiment during the opening stages of the Battle for Serenaos.

-Admiral Yularen: "Good morning Captain Rho. We appreciate you taking time away from your army group in order to provide us a better insight into the happenings during the opening hours of the Siege of Serenaos. Please take your time and spare us no details. We are here for your testament."

- CT 1043:Aka Captain Rho; "Thank you Admiral Yularen for your gesture. Good morning Senators, representatives, and chiefs of war. I am Sergea.. Captain Rho of the Old Third Regiment, Air division. You have surely read the preliminary pages of the situation reports. The 300 para's of the 3rd were to disembark during the setting sun, using the blinding light against our back to our advantage. We would then make our approach under the cover of darkness, secure docks, beachheads, then rendevous with the National Guard forces. The next phase was to locate and disable any jammers or arrays, lastly going into standby positions for the arrival of a diplomatic consular class cruiser.

This is what we all know...
The end result..we all know..
How it happened, why it occured; That is why I am here."

(CT 1043 pauses, sipping from his glass of water. His jaw visibly clenching.)

"We mounted up after the rally and disembarked as scheduled; The 3rd is after all, "Never late." We departed with 300 men from Contrail Battalion, divided among 20 gunships. 15 men per ship due to the accompaniment of heavy-mobile anti-infantry guns, martars, and speeder bikes. Two test gunships also made the drop; retrofitted with test stealth tech carrying a pair of shadow trooper squads. They mostly kept to themselves.

Riding down was serene. Always silent..quiet before the storm. The gunship wing, "Talon" brought us down through the atmosphere nearly 72 kilometers off the coast. The flight pattern was spread wide as we dove to avoid visible signs of our arriving presence. Those pilots were damn good, pulling the noses up about 7 or 10 meters from the white foam of the swelling seas. After leveling off the pilots opened the thin slats decorating the thick side doors. In an instant, the dark belly of the larky revealed brilliant orange/purple darkening skies..beneath us a charcoal dark blue bay. Such contrast provided one of the most beautiful drops I've ever made.."

(Ct 1043 pauses. A slight grin becomes stifled by an apparent pain. The clone's posture curves as his head lowers to wipe his eye. His index and middle finger then squeeze the bridge of his nose.)

""Tighten up lads!" our captain barked. The slats whined as they slammed then locked shut. The whir and rumbling of engines heavy in the cabin. The squads began talking amongst one another. Loosening up ..the brief from command seemed short, cut, easy even. I creapt up the latter behind the cockpit. The pale beach growing whiter in the distance. Its glow becoming stark as we grew near. "Get tight and buckle down!!" -- The command meant for us to hook up our repel connections to the speed drop lines on the floor of the bay. Talon Wing's profile shrank -- The gunships stacking tightly; tail gun to nose, wing to wing. The stealth larties intermingled within the battalion. "Here we..go." The words from Captain Shrike seemed to linger on the comm channel."

Title: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 8/26/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on August 26, 2013, 07:21:25 PM
   "As if on cue..hell was waiting for us on the cusp of Captain Shrike's order. The beach lit up brighter than the Coruscant skyline! We were nearly over the crux where waves pound the shore when the guns unleashed their fury. "Hold your fire! Hold your fire! This is the Grand Army of the Repu...*Krrssshhhhh*.." our comm gunship dropped silent..every panel seemed to shatter apart trailing smoke and flame. Captain Shrike made the order, "Return fire!" Talon gunships did their best to fire at will..light up the beach, but our formation was packed to tight. The perimeter ships taking most of the heat until they could last no longer, succumbing to the damage revealing the next ship behind it. Their anti- air weapons tore into...No..they tore through us.

Flak bursts erupted in low thunderous thuds..ships bellowed as their crew bays were gutted apart. The metal wrenching and popping. High shriek screams followed as the metal carcass fell. Ting Ting te ting! small projectiles reflecting from the armor shell; shrapnel clattered against the hull. The slats of our blast doors became punctured by a direct hit. A gaping hole whistled to my right..becoming a peephole beyond our coffin above the seas.."

(Vice Admiral Dantes coughs forcefully.)

"..our gunship. Looking out...blue, green, red tracers and lasers speckled every ship..pilots visibly hunkered down into their cockpits. The unlucky ones became riddled...their blood splattering to the cracked glass..other gunships merely fell apart, torn apart. I saw one such instance where a gunship's cockpit was knocked out..sending the hulking ship whirling into the ship right next to it."

(CT 1043 halts in his account. A tear thickens before falling from his eye down his cheek. He carries on.)

"The gunship immediately to our right flank accelerated to fill the new gap that had just been made. The pilots unaware their bay doors were cleaved from the hinges...their bay was emptied in the chaos..but we are para's. Some of the tether lines remained intact. My brother still hooked to the repelling lines, dangling helplessly..some still alive, others only bits and pieces. Chatter on the comm lines became unintelligible.

Evasive orders were broadcast-- Shrike streamlined the orders. I was sent coordinates by the captain..and we accelerated that way. I watched on my Tactical map as the remnants split into 2 groups.

The sky was dark and silent when our ship finally touched down..We were enveloped in the enemy lines. They were everywhere..and I was nowhere. These rebels were not rabble. The doors slid open effortlessly. I rested my hand on the hull while I stepped out..the blast-scoring was hot to the touch. Another ship came down from the sky. Its troopers came from behind its doors as relieved as us.

The last of the gunships landed. Its pilot physically threw off the ships windshield. His boots hit the pavement with a thud. Smoke lifted above my squad when we heaved the door open...the bay contained only armor and an ocean of crimson red. A single flak round bore its way in the blast-shielding..then burst..immolating the squad within."

Chain of command fell to me now. I gave the order to set up a mobile defense perimeter. The captain's ship never came. As the unit hoofed towards the national guard's last projected position a comm relay tower was visible in the distance. The main dish smoldering..none of my ships had made it that far. Raising my scope I zoomed as far as possible..a gunship sized hole was easy to make out..any survivors of the accompanying squads were quickly overwhelmed...and dealt with. It was Shrike's ship that made the dive into the dish.

The affects on the relay couldn't be undetermined, so I sent a message to the Republic Task force in orbit led by Telos. It was our only chance of reinforcements or getting the warning out. We kept marching on until we reached a large field. Inititally the dead seemed like executed civi's which we assumed to be rebels..but the collars and clothes soon indicated they were all military that had been stripped of armor. It was a military camp..a coup from within..murders and mass executions alike. A trooper of mine found a wounded National Guardsmen...I turned to see him kneeling to the wounded man..helping him drink from a canteen, "Don't mo..."  The body erupted with an explosion, vaporizing "Striker".. one of my new troopers from Kamino. Explosions continued to boom for affect before more accurate ones honed in on our position. They had the site grid-locked in case any survivors tried to put up a struggle. They shell shocked us heavily...Then a few came back to the camp when the barrage ceased. They didn't waste a shot...using blades to finish my disoriented men..

I was beneath so much dirt ..knocked unconscious ..they took me for dead.

That's the last thing I remember, lying in that dirt. There are foggy memories that come and go. National Guards I think..pulling me..providing aid..then darkness..rumbling of gunship engines..Seeing Telos...his eyes told me all I needed to know.

..I was alone.

This is no dream..nor a nightmare..I died a sergeant..but was reborn a captain."





Hope you enjoyed this draft of a Senate Committee testimony! :) Thanks for checking in and I'd love any feedback or insight to learn from.

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Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
Post by: Tamer on August 27, 2013, 02:45:47 AM
Nice, time to go share.
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 8/27/13
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on August 27, 2013, 06:37:31 AM
Nice, time to go share.


Much obliged for the kind words and FP post! Thank you so much :)
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 6/14/13
Post by: wraithnine on August 28, 2013, 12:53:33 AM
wow! awesome piece of writing mate ! really loved the grittyness of it .
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 5/26/15
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on May 26, 2015, 07:28:53 AM
Star Wars --- The Clone Wars

Oasis Calm: Volume 1

"Uncertainty is a sign of humility, and humility is just the ability or willingness to learn."

(Opening Crawl)

"The first months of the Clone War rages on! Grand armies of the Republic stride forward bringing order behind. Battlefields grow more diverse while growing heavy with casualties. Each side devises increasingly lethal plots to stave the enemies war efforts in the hope of sparing themselves financial burden. The burden of commissioning a new army.

A' Sharad Hett is charged with investigating such Separatist ploys. Located in the system of Aargonar, Separatists seek a new way to eliminate political opposition. The system's allegiance and resources weigh in the balance.

Jedi Knight Aayla Secura's 327th Star Corp prepares their ships for the coming task. The optimistic young Jedi holds diplomacy in high regard having recently secured a new treaty with the Lurmen of Maridun. The Jedi temple remains an emblem of tranquility on Coruscant; the hopes of the people glowing as the new horizon dawns...."

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Firmly, A' Sharad Hett tightens the leather belt around his waist. Looking to the window, thick rays of brilliant sunlight beam from the bustling, urban skyline. The radiance brings memories of the hot twin Tatooine suns rising; bring a warm reprieve from night's clutching chill. Ever so slightly his cheek tightened. Far above, the silhouette of an approaching speeder briefly blocked his view. As it passed above his quarters, the shadow briefly blocked the ambient golden ray's glow which illuminated his sparse Jedi quarters.

The flirtation of a smile once present released from his face. Reflecting from the window stood a heavily tattooed face that stared back with deep penetrating blue eyes. Slowly they closed.

Not yet familiar with the face seen, Hett turned from the sight. Pacing away from the window, his two lightsabers wiggled briefly on his desk before swiftly being pulled to his hands with the force. Softly they clicked, adhering to his belt. Opening his closet door, Hett pulled several thin straps of porous cloth. Methodically twisting, his hands guided the fabric. Sprawling it across his forearm as he wove it.

Tight in some places and not others, but just the way he wanted it. Looking down, Hett looped a small piece of the desert fabric through another to hold its chosen place. From his cloth, several tiny granules fell to the amber wooden surface beneath. Many would have paid no credence to this happening; others  may have seen it a nuisance, but to this knight, even the smallest grain was sacred. Slowly the small sands from across the galaxy were swept into his palm. As if an oil, he rubbed the grains back into the cloth.


A slight click snapped Hett from his meditative ritual. Cascading a shadow from the open door stood a lovely figure with brilliantly blue skin. One lekku draped over her shoulder, the other lightly touched her back. The female's teeth showed a brilliant white as her lips parted in a light natured smile, "So what happens when you start losing sand specks all over the place? Jocasta Nu is on to you!" The sound of her voice was musical in a melodic nature.

The human raised tusken, who had decided to live as a Jedi rather than any species, allowed the corner of his mouth to tighten into the hint of an elusive grin. "Welcome back Aayla. Its a good thing Master Fisto's kind are adept when it comes to breathing beneath water. You've been busy." Aayla's began to feel her azure skin heating up. Excitedly her voice burst with a hint of nervousness, "Who told you that?!? I..I mean.." A short sigh of humored relief left Hett's nostrils, "Master Fisto's smile said enouh." Dismissing the Jedi master's humorous tease, the knight closed the discussion of that topic abruptly, "That Nautolan NEVER stops smiling!!"

Master Hett continued his ritual, "This is true. Heh* Even death could not part the grimace from the wearer." Aayla's chest let loose a sigh of relief, "So why all the sand? Is that all you have?" A' Sharad's quarters were sparse in appearance. Having been raised among the sands provided little need for anything that was not necessary. Motioning to her, his hand gripped a small dark wooden box. She observed keenly. Noting its craftsmanship, it had small inlays of light bone. Easily lifting off the lid, the master reached down. Taking her blue hand, he raised it to be level with her waist. The contents of the box remained obscure while his fingertips dove within.

Moving his hand over her open palm, the mystery was revealed. The sand of all color and texture sifted into the creases of her smooth hand, "These can't all be from Tatooine, can they?" The master's low toned voice was full when he responded. "Not at all. These have been gathered from across the galaxy. Negotiations, gatherings, even from beneath fallen brethren. All followed me home, but are kept here. A past not forgotten." Aayla's presence became a solemn one, taking in the poignant purpose of Hett's lesson. "Thank you for sharing your way Master Hett, brother of the deserts." Her voice began to return to its upbeat rhythm, hopefully you won't collect much sand on our next mission. May this will actually be a calm one!"

Hett's fingers pulsed pulling the small sediment from Secura's palm, withdrawing pieces from what shallow creases existed. Spiraling, the sand passed from her hands to the little ornate, but humble box. Pressing firmly the lid sank into place. "I share your sentiment of hope, but the likelihood of that is as high as traversing Tatooine while hoping not to get sand in your boot on a calm day. As a daughter of Ryloth, you are aware how difficult that is...The Galaxy is amidst chaos...All that we do is shrouded in a sandstorm."

Smiling with a slightly coy nature Secura Dismissed Master Hett's insight. Walking to the slim doorway Aayla looked over her lightly clother shoulder, "Come Master Hett, Bly has our ship prepped for departure." Her leather wrapped lekku swayed with her brisk turn around the corner. A deep exhale left A' Sharad Hett's compressing lungs as he sighed, collecting himself. He too followed suit quickly walking through the door pursuing Aayla.
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Shortly after departing the temple, the Jedi pair arrived at the Republic Departure Facility.

Clone troopers in a variety of armor hustled all about, moving equipment and wounded from ship to ship. The war effort was constant. "General Secura, over here sir!" The clone voice emanated from a clone trooper dawning a brown kama with sidearms, a rifle in one hand, his helmet in the other. Two yellow tattoos adorned his cheek matching the mikadu yellow of his thigh plating. Aayla jogged over toward her designated clone commander who was flanked by several others wearing similar color armor. "Its good to see you again General. Will say..I finally got the grass out of my plating."

Bly and his men quickly saluted when Master Hett approached then held out his hand to greet the master, "Its good to meet you General Hett. Your record is awe-inspiring."

"That's appreciated Commander. I've hard of your successes as well, particularly against the odds you had on Maridun. Thank you for taking out that test weapon. Until then, I had only heard vague reports of what was being devised."

A second trooper approached from the large docking bays. His helmet bore a different design from the standard line down the middle, instead it was curved like a crescent. Stopping to salute the generals and his commander; Bly introduced the trooper, "Generals, this is Lieutenant Hazoc. Trained in small squad blitz tactics." Without removing his helmet the lieutenant began speaking, "Sirs, the men are prepared to get underway. In addition, we completed the adjustments to the Arquitens light cruiser. We improvised clamps for us to take a pair of gunships. Its a contested sector - Its my belief that using the "Regulator" will enable us to not attract negative attention."

Nodding, Hett agreed with the idea. "Well thought out Hazoc. Let's get to the ship!"

The handful of clone troopers jogged towards the ship then climbed aboard to join their compatriots.

Be - woop! Be- woop!

A Jedi communicator was going off! Aayla reached down checking hers, but it was inactive. Hett activated his while raising it from his tight utility side pouch. From the center a blue hologram of Yoda and Ki Adi Mundi grew visible. The grains fluctuated while they walked. Bowing their heads in greeting, Hett and Aayla acknowledged the high council masters.

Yoda's voice cracked over the hologram, "Brief this message must be, but most important your mission remains. To the Mid- Rim you must go. Meet with the Governor and his ministers you will. Be with care and lightly tread. Separatist schemes yet await unseen. Aargonar remains a critical system."

Hett's collected presence was not noticeably changed by the tasking order, but Aayla did note the trouble in his eyes. The tusken master spoke, "We will meet with them immediately; avoiding the creation of an incident."

Ki Adi Mundi smiled looking at his grown padawan, "Details will be sent to your ship shortly. May the force be with you A' Sharad and you Aayla Secura."

The walking knights again bowed their heads to the grand masters whose image faded as quickly as it had appeared.

Curious about his reaction, Aayla inquisitively turned her face toward the tattooed knight, "Master Hett, why do you look so troubled upon hearing our assignment?" No immediate reaction was given. A Sharad's boots click as they began climbing the metallic boarding ramp. He paused briefly. His chin lowered as his eyes took on a melancholy sheen. Turning his eyes towards Aayla he spoke in hushed tones, "My padawan fell in the sands of Aargonar.."

The whur of the engines pulsed thunderously...
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 5/26/15
Post by: wraithnine on May 26, 2015, 09:02:55 AM
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Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 5/26/15
Post by: Tamer on May 27, 2015, 02:12:17 AM
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Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Requests --- 5/26/15
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on June 14, 2015, 12:25:30 AM
Oasis Calm: Volume II

"The way you think determines the way you feel, and the way you feel influences the way you act."

Journeying through space was always a dangerous venture during the Clone Wars. Unknown threats lurking unseen in the distance, camouflaged by nebulas, or amidst space debris. In hyperspace, however, the Arquitens cruiser known as the Regulator glided effortlessly. While cruising at such incredible speeds, the ship's triad of engines lightly hummed. Every view port emanated a beautiful cerulean blue glow of the hyperspace lane. The crew and troopers aboard the vessel laughed as they reveled in this brief opportunity, but one presence wasn't so easily at peace.

The blast door to the bridge briefly hissed as its double sections split apart. In to the dimly lit, scarcely crewed area, walked Aayla Secura. When ships had long hyperspace waypoints during a mission, it was protocol to lower the battle order for the troops aboard the craft. This allowed a small skeleton crew to maintain critical functions while the troops checked gear and took in some much needed shut eye. Several crew members remained at their stations at the most forefront controls of the command deck. To their flank, Master A' Sharad Hett's silhouette was easily identified against the glimmering blue window. Aayla paced up the short stairwell to the elevated position. Her hand rested on two clone trooper's shoulders who mildly flinched upon her touch. She kindly lowered her face toward them, "Troopers, your station is not necessary during hyperspace. Both of you are relieved for the time being." Both looked at her with eyes of surprise, but were grateful. A silent weight lifted from their shoulders when they rose from their swiveling chairs, "Thank you General Secura." Heals clicked while they exited the bridge.

Master Hett's body remained facing the view ports. Closing the distance between them, Aayla twisted her head softly to the side, looking to view the solemn master's face. His eyes were closed, his breath steady. "I'm sure they are thankful for that. Heh, their tenseness could have burst the windows if you had touched them just a tad firmer." A large smile surfaced across the female Jedi's face, "Ha, I knew you had to be reveling in that.. just a little! Typically people are unsure what to around someone with such intensity." Hett faced Aayla, "I know, but I've always found more solace in meditation rather than the company of others." "Maybe we'll rub off on each other! Me with a little more foresight and you might leave the planet smiling!" Hett's eyebrows pursed in amusement, "What about hoping we don't get sand in our boots?" Still brimming with a smile Aayla replied, "Well that's the first priority!"

As if on cue, Lieutenant Hazoc, one of Commander Bly's subordinates, approached the pair with a data pad tightly gripped in his hand. "General Hett, Secura; your orders from the Jedi Temple and Security Council have arrived for review sirs." Extending from his crossed arms, Hett took the pad in his hand, "Thank you Lieutenant. This will be all for now." The clone trooper turned to walk back down the stairs. "Notify all quarters when we approach deceleration distance helmsman." "Aye aye, general!"

When at the table, Aayla pulled a small holochip from inside the pad her partner was holding. Clicking, the small data chip popped into place. An encrypted message spawned from the blue emulators circling the table. The figure was a tall man wearing ornate robes, adorned intricate piping and threading. His posture was not as erect it must have been in years past, but he still carried himself with a sense of pride and distinction. His right hand was raised beneath his dark pointed chin beard, pointer finger and thumb stroking through it,

    "Good tidings counselors. Though there have been many years of tension between our system and the Republic, I do hope this message may begin to set a rebolstered foundation in place. Joining the Confederation of Independent Systems seemed to be too good a proposition and it was just that!! I send this message in the hopes to meet with a delegation. Striving to undo the damage incurred will be a long journey, but it is an undertaking worth embarking. Sources say a threat is developing in our deserts. I do not want my system to succumb nor be responsible for a creation that will bring the galaxy to its knees! This meeting will be off grid.. and the ledger.. at my palatial retreat. Coordinates also are encrypted with the droid carrying this message. May redemption for Aarognar not be too far from grasp.."

Again crossing his arms, Hett began thinking strategically about the various levels of the message. What was said, what was left unsaid, even what motives existed for a trap. His blue counterpart clicked her tongue lightly against the back of her white teeth. She looked to her friend, "This is a precarious situation.." Hett began to make his way from the bridge, "Especially when we're going into it effectively blind. Our mere presence, if framed in propaganda, will only serve to galvanize our foe further." Following his lead Aayla agreed, "You're right! We must tread lightly."
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 Side by side they walked down the cold metallic corridors. Hatchway after bulkhead followed.

From down the corridor laughs and sharp voices echoed off the plating. "Ha ha!! EeyYES!" exclaimed a clone trooper raising both fists in a celebratory dance. "Come on Commander! Its your turn to show the lads how its done! OR.. are you only good at putting down SEPPIE DESERT DOGS!" Numerous voices laughed. "Aten-HUT! Generals on deck!" Hazoc shouted from his stance, resting against the entry bulkhead. The Jedi drew close. All clones snapped to their feet. Some wore only their under armor, others partially prepped for battle, but all revered the prowess of these two Jedi. 

"Ease yourselves men." A' Sharad Hett calmly spoke, placing his gloved hand on a clone's arm and then another. "Though we have fought adversaries here, in this situation I'd urge you to be less pejorative." Hazoc approached from the shadowed bulkhead, "We're here to discover a plot possibly even turn the system's leadership to our side...I'd say this is a rare opportunity sirs." Hazoc rarely said much, but what he did say was heavy with calculation. Though a clone, he believed the application of steady, strategic thinking could win a fight against opposition of any strength.

"It is indeed Lieutenant." Aayla Secura affirmed confidently. Commander Bly pulled his helmet from a shelf with a curious spark in his eye, "So what's the plan general?" A' Sharad Hett made it a habit not to leave any element of a plan to chance. He had already devised several contingencies since their departure from Coruscant. "The plan is concise, but leaves us flexible enough to act. Since Grand Chairman Utak reached out to the senate initially, he won't be expecting Jedi, thus, Secura will be impersonating a Senator with Commander Bly and a squad as escort. Hazoc, you and your teams will board the gunships with me. They will be powered down while we approach the planet avoiding as many scanners as possible."

Bly raised his hand to attract minimal attention. "How will we conceal the gunships? This world still has a lot of Seppie support."

"Good question Bly, but we won't. Powering down won't allow them to be picked up by scanners. In terms of visual threats, we'll be docking in a covered hanger. This is what we'll have to do with the time given. The slowly fracturing beliefs of the populace means the Senate wants us to act NOW."

Hazoc clicked his small vibro-knife against his forearm, with an emotionless face his eyes squeezed. "Truth be said, I get it..but its fool-hearty. Never rush a military operation.." With a chuckle a clone from the shadows made his presence known. "Nothing goes according to plan Hazoc..no matter how meticulous! We all know Bly's approach. That's why we're the 327th!"

Hazoc exhaled lightly behind his comrade's zeal. "How could we forget Clipper?" The unamused clone brother raised his hands forming quotations with both his pointer and middle fingers, "Know the mission, know your enemy." Clipper chimed in, "Achieve the mission, kill the enemy!!" Bly's hand raised when Aayla began speaking with light jest, "Well that's all I need!" Bly looked to her at the same time holstering a pistol, "It's all any soldier needs." 

Hett subtly nodded, "Well then arm up men, its time we put the Star Corps' pragmatism to work!" The Jedi turned to leave the room. In various degrees of unison the troopers gathered together cheered, "Ha ha ha, YESS!!"

"HuZaah!"

"That's what I'm talking bout!"

"Lets do this! Get it DONE!"

Clatters chattered while drawers slid open. The clone troopers pulled armor from where they lay stowed. Clicking and snapping each additional piece into place. Within minutes the three squads of troopers stood together with their helmets off. Their armor white with a muddled golden stripe down the center. Each wearing a dull, light brown kama; scorched by the testament of battle. Bly stood at the center of the room, "In war we seldom are provided the time to mourn, but before we leave, I want us to remember three of our fallen brothers. Cameron, Lucky, and Flash. They await us in the stars! We fight - so that others in the Republic don't have to! Lets stay tight, do it right, and get our boots back on deck!"

"You said it Commander!!"

"Back on deck!"

"Lets make it quick 327!"

In double file column the troopers left their barracks toward the armory to rearm. One clone followed the column alone, placing a black pair of dress boots next to the bulkhead seal. Tapping the side, he ensured they were placed right where they were meant to be. "We'll be back."

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Bly stood at the entry of the improvised boarding hatch which connected the pair of gunships to the larger frigate. His men hustled into the familiar Larty bay, strapping in and locking their weapons into place. A' Sharad Hett walked closer to Bly, "May the Force be with you commander." Respectfully Bly replied with the same pre-mission tensed focus, "Aye sir. May this not spark a bigger fight."

A younger voice came from the red hued bay after Hett passed, "Commander Bly..can you double check the Captain doesn't move my boots?"

The veteran commander smiled reassuringly at the shinnie, "Of course Stock. Now hop to!"

Hissing, the door of the gunship clamped shut, creating a self contained atmosphere within. Bly turned, pressing his thumb into a red key which closed the seal of the Regulator. "You always encourage the dynamics of your men Bly. It does them well." Bly, thinking he was alone, took a quick breath. "You're right Aalya. After my training I realized how instrumental honing personalities are. Yea...we might butt heads..but the versatility.. the variety gained from it is purely a strength." Aayla's face lightened.

This was always something she had believed and struggled with while commanding clones, initially. Jedi and Clone Commanders were paired for this purpose. Eventually they would grow to compliment one another creating a very potent combination of known strengths and weakness. "I'm glad we agree." the blue Jedi playfully whispered.

"I'll see you on the bridge shortly Commander Bly. Now I must go vale myself for a role as a senator!" She winked and briskly walked to her quarters to assume her new persona.

_________ Some time later. _____________

The ship silently pressed through hyperspace. In the gunship bay, many clones had removed helmets and began conversing with each other, even asking questions of the first battle to Hett. Bly stood with Captain Sightreh, commanding officer of the Regulator, overseeing the bridge. Officers and crewman had begun filing into their stations. Republic vessels were always at full battle readiness when dropping out of lightspeed.  Captain Sightreh skimmed over his coordinates and star charts. His voice low and always calm spoke succinctly, "Helmsman, prepare to slow from hyperspace." A clone officer echoed the order, as was protocol, "Helmsman, prepare to exit hyperspace."

"Ready sir!"

The nav officer's voice chimed the updated count down, "6...5...4...3..2.1 --- Commence deceleration of the hyperdrive!"

The blue avenue of hyperspace gave way to the dark; littered with white specs of other systems far far away. All aboard the Regulator lurched forward slightly from the rapid deceleration. The Arquiten cruiser sped through the Perkell Sector. A desert system stood before them, where months prior a tremendous battle had ravaged the planet. A battle grand in scale and destruction! At this point in the war, its losses were only second to that of Jabiim!

Captain Sightreh again spoke, keeping his order two steps ahead so there was no cause to hurriedly react. He could take any frigate and have her "fly casual."

"Nav officer, bring us into that commuter line. Half speed. Let us drift into position, not enough to bring attention, but enough to let em know you are not a military trained pilot...even though we all know you are. heh* heh*"

A murmur of chuckles made its way around the command deck. Sightreh's humor always remained understated, but perfectly placed to break tension. "That's it lads. Bring us in to the fold." Maintaining its momentum , the Regulator closed in on the line of trade vessels, merchants, military crafts, and personal travel shuttles that were making their way toward the surface. The boosters dimmed, while others counter fired, slowly bringing the ship between two, much larger, ships. "Well done. Well done. Now, Keep your eyes on the scanners. If there's trouble, don't bring weapons up unless I order it explicitly."

"Sir yes sir!" the crew barked.

***CCRSSSHH***

The door nearest the hologram table opened suddenly. Bly turned his neck to acknowledge who he thought would be General Secura. His eyes widened whilst his brow perked up. "Well done coming out of the hyperlane Captain." Aayla's voice sounded. Bly began to stumble over his words, "Uh..Gen..General Secura, you look.."

Without missing a beat, Captain Sightreh interrupted, "~Stunning~"

"Thank you gentlemen. Remember the war is between the separatists!" The duo of awestruck men let out a shy laugh, but couldn't help taking a prolonged gaze at the cloth that adorned the toned Twi Lek.

Aayla Secura wore a thin and very light fabric that clung to her skin effortlessly. Her blue Lekku were wrapped in a white fabric that had the slightest sheen, speckled with fine clear and blue jewels. Around her neck was a white collar resembling curved waves that spiraled either side. Flowing down the white material drifted down her arms rather snuggly, being held in place by a small silver ring that was worn on the middle finger. Her lower throat was bare, unveiling her soft, azure skin. The same wave pattern rippled further down her torso, exposing the inner sides of her breasts. From there towards the floor, her dress  dove into deep hues of blue and violet. Fine piping of green accented the design of what clearly was a master crafted article of clothing, for her and her alone.

From behind came echoes of loud Bwoops and Beeps's, clearly an R2 unit. Crossing on to the deck rolled Secura's bronze domed R4- G9 astromech. Rattling of a rapid series of Beeps, whistles, and sirens, her droid extended one of its claws which held tightly gripped, a snow white cloak, clearly intended to accompany the gown. Random suppressed laughs couldn't be contained as it became apparent that the droids alerts were not that of panic. Instead they fit the role of a knaggy mother chastising her adolescent daughter before going out for the night!

The Jedi Knight's cheeks heated up with both a dash of embarrassment and agitation for her droid counter part. "Thank you VERY much Gee-nine." Kneeling next to the droid she threw the albino cloak over her shoulders and under her long, dazzling lekku, with a flourish of finesse. The blue female then raised the lightsaber hilt she was holding, "Alright Gee-nine, where do you want it this time?" R4-G9 retorted with a low pitched, begrudging, little digitized grumble. A small trapezoid compartment popped apart. "Well that's a new spot! Thank you. Keep it safe." ***Bee Doo doo* The lightsaber fit perfectly into its new containment box.

Captain Sightreh opened communication linked with the gunships. "We are on the prescribed approach vector General. Set to maintain course until we near the palace."

***Ka-TACH! **crssCCHHHH **TONNNG ***kk..kkk.. *** pinG

Seemingly random noises began! Pieces of debris bounced off the hull and minimal shielding. A handful of clone officers stood from their seats to look out the view ports to report.  "What is that noise?" No window was needed for A' Sharad Hett to know the answer. Solemnly through the commline his voice was clear, "Ghosts of the past. No more comm chatter from here until touch down captain."

Sightreh acknowledged briefly, "Yes sir." before silencing all deck comms. Bly looked out the window to a sight that struck every navy man at their station. The commander's face was nearly pressed into the glass. His eyes locked on what remained of a pair of bright grey, lifeless Acclamator Assault Ships. The pair were still being scowered by Separatist techs and scavengers alike. Secura stepped up to the windows.

A young clone, recently assigned, murmured without thinking, "What...in the name..of .."

Even Aayla's breath remained stolen for a moment. Captain Sightreh took a deep breath and sighed. "I thought we were dead in space that day. Its ironic to return here with Hett..he saved many lives during the rearguard action. It was gutsy to use the one, nearly empty assault ship to shield our vessel. That day trained Dao and I to be masters of our fear with Hett as our teacher... we'd all be dead as would those who later became Hawkbat Battalion...Ghosts.. ghosts indeed."

Continuing ahead, the unmarked republic frigate sped ahead, intermingled in the heavy traffic. During certain hours, Sepratists relaxed scanning and checks in order to get out as many cargo filled transports, reaping the benefits from the mineral laden planet as quickly and unmolested as possible. The Regulator flew right through the CIS blockade without a hitch or flag being raised.

"Here we go General. Entering the stratosphere."

A light bounce turned into a more violent shutter. Commander Bly sat in a chair, belting himself in. The ship heaved upward into the air then sharply down! The view plate transitioned from the dark void of space to a brilliant baby blue, but only for a moment. The further the descent took them, the more obscure their vision became. Relying on their instrumentation became necessary. Every body on board was relentlessly jostled by the turbulence. Aayla Secura's knuckles grew the closest they could to white while clenching the arm of her seat!

The captain held his footing which were spread for balance as if they alone kept the ship stable.

"Steady the helm! Keep us on course! We've flown right into the middle of a sandstorm!!"
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 6/14/15
Post by: Tamer on June 14, 2015, 04:41:55 AM
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Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 6/14/15
Post by: wraithnine on June 14, 2015, 08:52:50 AM
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Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 6/17/15
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on June 17, 2015, 01:30:28 PM
Star Wars --- The Clone Wars

 Oasis Calm: Volume III

 "We become whatever we are committed to."

 The sand ridden haze hurled itself against the lightly shielded Arquiten cruiser, the Regulator. Its savage gusts remained muted inside the cockpit, however, thunderous clatters of every loose panel inside the ship rattled continuously during the descent. Fear was entirely absent from the deck. Regardless if troopers had their eyes closed or honed into a piercing, fixed gaze; all transformed the fledgling emotion into a sharp focus. Aayla Secura’s crisp blue eyes looked to her left, her body bouncing amid the turbulence. Initially many scoffed at the idea of harnesses for a ship of this size, but when used for rapid insertions, they were all but necessary.

R4-G9 remained by its master’s side, activating its magnetic roller pads. The Jedi’s eyes looked over the crew who managed their stations with severe purpose. To her surprise, the bridge was devoid of all noise except for the clunking and various temporary alarms. Captain Sightreh remained in his stance, his voice alone in its commands. Many of the officers wore headsets that allowed the captain’s voice to be heard whilst alleviating their ears the distraction of commotion. This crew, evidently drilled again and again. The captain looked to General Secura and her clone counterpart, Commander Bly, and with a sly, almost prideful grin said, “She’ll hold together!”

The clone nav- officer shouted, “Captain! 1400 meters to ground. A spire 2200 meters ahead and closing!!”

“Adjust course to port with trim boosters! Bring the nose up 25 degrees and level out at 500 meters altitude. Overlay the nav maps with what we have of the regions topography!”

“Yes sir!”

The ship shuttered and pulled everyone’s bodies to the side during the ignition of the peripheral boosters. “We’ll be out of this shortly! Hold it together lads. Focus determines your reality!” the captain’s voice reaffirmed.  One pilot looked to his captain only for a moment, but long enough to notice a bold vein striking out of his captain’s forehead. The ship took another tremendous series of pelting beats from the torrential, desert winds of Aargonar! Aayla’s lekku jostled about enough for her to feel the need to take them in hand.

Having passed the first test this system had to offer, the golden flashes simmered down. Keeping the shields low prevented the whirlwind of sand from building up on the windows as well as clogging other necessary systems. The captain’s hands relaxed from the vice upon his pilot’s chairs.

“Well done lads! Well done indeed.” Sightreh adjusted the collar of his tunic, righting himself from the tense period recently endured.

“Captain!! Incomi..” The nav officer’s outcry was cut brief with a deafening clap! The ship lurched up from behind. An impact against the bottom hull redirected the ship upon contact. Instantly assessing the situation, an order quickly followed, “Level out! LEVEL OUT! Bow thrusters.. ENGAGE!!”

For a moment the ground below them became visible in the command deck’s windows; spelling incoming disaster! Swiftly the thrusters applied the necessary push, raising the bow and shifting the momentum from near deadly fate.

Commander Bly pulled his helmet over his head. His hands poised to draw his sidearm, simultaneously prepared to disengage his harness. “Captain, were we hit? ARE WE UNDER ATTACK?!”

“Ha ha ha, stave your heated blood commander! Continue the course helmsman.”

Aayla Secura was equally prepared to leap from her seat into the fray of battle. “Then what was th..?”

Sightreh began walking down the command deck towards the hologram table, “Like barrier islands beneath the seas; these dunes often move with the currents of the gales. That was just a really…really big shift according to the last chart we have.” The nav-officer was visibly shaken, “I’ll update the reference point immediately. I apologi..” Sightreh saw no need to chastise his officers when lessons learned were so apparent. “Sharp, if this is the worst thing to happen – then we will be in great shape. Prepare the ship for Stern docking procedures. I want us ready for a quick exit if need be.”

Nearly blended with the desert sands, a series of elegantly woven spires protruded from the dunes then culminating with two adjoining acropolises.  A snake like tunnel seemed to slither to and from an adjacent, equally stunning building.

The transmission line crackled less as the sands died away completely. A high pitched, chirpy voice railed against the eardrums of any within range…which was unfortunately everyone. “Vessel, you are now approaching the immediate air space of his Grand Chairmanship. Cease or Identify and state your intent!”

Sightreh aimed his face toward the comm-station speaking slowly, “This is Captain Sightreh of the Regulator. Carrying the emissary requested by YOUR excellency, Grand Chairman Utak. Patching clearance code now.”

There was a moment of silence. The Regulator lulled its engines, hovering over the shifting desert. Waiting..waiting..waiting. The high voice returned once again, “AH yes, as a matter of fact, we do have you on the register. My sincerest apologies for the wait, but… you could have been clearer. Lowering shields now. Good thing you came after the storm or you’d have to have waited!! Please proceed as quickly through as possible. We’ll be monitoring you! Oh! ..and do make your way to the main hanger.”

The large spherical shield quickly faded from sight when the powerful core was deactivated. “Helm, take us forward.”

The triple engines lowly murmured and pushed the ship toward the hanger. Simultaneously the Regulator began sinking towards the floor. Small boosters activated on the nose, spinning the ship to the right. “Captain! The hanger door is still shut.. If they activate the shield while we are still hovering over the cusp, it is not going to be a pretty sight!”

Sightreh opened the communication channel with the dock master, “Dock master, open the docking gate! Your shield will press us down if you activate it! ..not to mention cause catastrophic damage.” The seasoned captain’s agitation for the juvenile handling of procedure evident in his frustrated sigh. “AH AH AH…of course captain! Opening doors immediately. Landing grid has transferred. We await your dignitary’s arrival!” His high, squeely voice causing several flight officers to press a finger into their ear; attempting to insulate their sanity. “Sharp, bring us into dock. Steady as she goes! General Secura, Commander, it’s all yours from here on out. We’ll be ready for anything.”

Sharp, the Regulator’s clone navigation officer, turned to his captain, “Yes sir! Steady as she goes.” He flanked the helm operators while they made a coordinated effort to bring the ship into the tall hanger. Mostly void of other ships, the docking bay was tremendous inside its walls. Its beams were visible, but its lights bright and pure! The ship reversed slowly making minor adjustments. Indicators bleeped and blinked keeping the officer’s abreast of the ship’s proximity to the walls, ceiling, and floor.

Sharp reached down to the monitor below his immediate left “Deploying landing gear. Settle her down.”

Bellowing, the Regulator’s engines throbbed under low power. The hull of the ship dripped sand to the floor. Bold steel rods of the landing gear flexed under the heavy weight. Dipping momentarily until the suspension activated, lifting the weight into its central resting position. The thumping of the engines lowered. The beating slowed until the propulsion systems flicked off.

Meanwhile Aayla Secura and Commander Bly had made their final preparations aboard the cruiser. The pair walked towards the main lift with G9 in pursuit. Upon reaching the central lift, a small squad of clone troopers stood ready. Their war torn armor shined as much as possible for the occasion. Aayla smiled as she boarded the platform noticing the direction of several clone trooper helmets towards her. “I’ll take that as a compliment trooper” she said in jest. Her hand lightly touched the chin area of a trooper’s helmet, raising his view plate so she could use its clean reflective nature for a last minute mirror check while also sending a “message”.

The lift’s stage nonchalantly shook following Bly’s click of the direction key. Slowly the deck lowered towards the surface. Inch by inch it descended bringing the welcoming party into view, starting with their feet. During the mechanical whine of the winches, Bly place his gloved hands at the sides of his helmet, spiraling off his head it found home beneath his arm. “We’re here General. Eyes sharp men.. We’re deep in Seppie territory.”

“Commander, remember Master Hett’s words of advice: We are what we are committed to… let’s try a different approach this time around.” Each trooper on the platform turned their head to look at one another; snickering under their breath. “Ha, as you wish General.”

The welcoming delegation was made up of three separatist representatives, one of which was VERY well known. She was the first to approach the platform when it touched down, resting against the hangar deck. Her skin was a pale green that dulled against the brightly shinning lights. A pair of vibrant, flaming violet eyes darted back and forth studying the visitors before her. Aayla Secura’s breath shallowed. Was the mission already undermined?

 Behind the committee were two lines of four commando droids, a security detachment. Palms became tense, the troopers clenching their weapons in cloth moist with sweat.

The horned female’s voice was calm and neutral in addressing the disguised Jedi, “Welcome to Aargonar republic advisor..” her voice lulled, a subtle edge growing. “High Chairman Utak extended this invitation - we are here securing the sanctity of this planet’s treaty with the Confederation of Independent Systems. That being said, I am Voe Atell; an affiliate of the Corporate Alliance.” 

Smiling coyly, Aayla began weaving her false identity using her family’s well known clan name, Secura. “It’s good to be on solid ground again Counselor Atell. I’m sure you’re familiar with Clan Secura’s interests. Sadly Ryloth is a disputed system currently.. but that’s another matter.” Glowing violet eyes flared upon hearing the name. The Secura clan had numerous dealings extending far beyond the desert planet of Ryloth; even alleged, discreet dealings with the Corporate Alliance.

Her eyebrows piqued with intrigue, “Ahhh..that name does sound rather familiar. Maybe we’ll discover a thing or two in common during your stay.” Close behind one of her advisors leaned forward, whispering to her ear. “My advisors feel the need to constantly remind me of legalities. Your soldiers are requested to surrender their..” pausing momentarily, Atell quickly selected another word that would not cause consternation among her guests. “..yield.. yield their weapons aboard the cruiser. Only in an effort to maintain neutrality.”

Aayla nodded and signaled to her armored escorts an acknowledgment to the conditions at hand. The clone troopers’ posture initially gestured befuddled disagreement. A brief look at their commander’s stern supportive face and they knew there was no case to object. One by one, each trooper walked to the rack that was attached to the sides of the lift’s cage. -- Tick and clack – the butt of each rifle and carbine tapped the floor before it latched into the carbon metal harness.

Commander Bly then made a note of being the last to lay his rifle down. His thumb disengaged the locks to his sidearm holsters. Slowly he drew both pistols. Bly’s eyes hostilely locked with the Corporate Alliance’s green-horned delegate before placing them on the floor. The commander continued holding the helmet tucked under his arm while he approached Secura’s side. Confidently as if backed by an armada of heavy cruisers, Bly spoke with his masquerading general, “The terms are agreeable. We’ve got this under control.”

Secura’s cheek tightened; her lip curled prior to her head turning back toward the separatist welcoming delegation. Her eyes only met with Atell’s, asserting her dominance over the others, “Shall we? Gee- Nine; come.” Atell smiled, taking a step back before smoothly motioning her visitors to closely accompany.

A rare sight followed; clone troopers wearily marched alongside a squad of commando droid. Metallic feet clanked while the trooper’s rubberized boots thudded against the floor. Soon the metallic grids of the hanger gave way to a highly sought after stone. The tan base of every block fused with swirls of ancient red sand. Opposite the spirals were jagged pebble deposits of dark obsidian. When sliced during the process of creating tiles, brilliant contained colors burst from within each little nugget. Seeing exotic patterns brought out a natural smile from Secura.

Music clung to the warm air the further they weaved through the curving tunnel. Each step elevated the music further. The cold lights of the hanger bay were now very far away. Echoes of music faded in and out, ricocheting off dimly lit smooth walls. Light ovals alternated from ceiling and floor. Tighter and tighter the tunnel became. The clones marched in a single file line beside their droid counterparts. “Well this is a little awkward..” The clone’s shoulder pads grew nearer to the droids. Another of his brothers turned his head to the right, opposite of the droid phalanx, “That and it’s perverse! This better not turn up on the holonet.”




Bly’s staunch voice sharply cut through his comrades jests, “Stow it trooper!” Again, both lines marched in silent tandem, the clone trooper’s fists clenched. Through his visor, Commander Bly looked forward, constantly scanning his surroundings. In front of him General Secura’s dress shifted effortlessly as she glided across the stone. Her skill of engaging others looked effortless.

A tight archway blossomed out into an extravagant formal ballroom, or at least, that’s what came to Aayla’s mind. Crystals dangled from the layers of ceiling, spirals and walkways blended with every subtle edifice. Truly a beauty and structural wonder of the galaxy! The hall was far brighter than the corridor. Music bounced from wall to wall; the sound of chimes echoing. Gee-Nine’s dome pivoted back and forth. Even the droid studied the ancient craftsmanship. The grandiose nature of this getaway must have truly been a wonder during the height of its reign. Worlds tend to dwindle during Separatist involvement, but someone always benefits; but who was the pawn?

The spiraling staircases threaded in and out of the wall. What looked like one staircase was several bound within the rock. Two main pathways from opposing spirals congealed in the center of the atrium. A tall slender man slowly walked down the stairs. With no railing near, an aid provided a hand to stabilize the fragile monarch. His eyes a pastel brown surrounded by slim streaking wrinkles. His hair white, devoid of color for many years. Following in a pack, his court was composed of all sorts of creatures for both for advice and entertainment.

His voice was soft, but still held strength. Nearing the base of the stairwell, the trim robbed monarch looked to the visiting delegation, “Welcome to my domain and home, Aargonar. It gladdens me to see you arrive without incident.”

Aayla Secura smiled lightly, then lowered her head, bowing graciously. His aged voice quickly spoke, almost embarrassed by her formality, “Come friend. The Republic hasn’t always been so distant from my courts. Rise! See yourself among friends fair lady.” Her blue eyes peered from beneath her raising brow, “Grand Chairman Utak, we would not miss a calling of yours, no matter how long it’s been.” Though his smile grew, his eyes shrank with the weight of an unspoken truth. In his youth, the chairmen had been quite the savvy politician, but years of broken promises made him weary of double edged words.

“Come, take my hand. I hear you are of Clan Secura. I knew several of the patriarchs quite well. We have much to discuss.. Tell me, how is your Uncle?” The disguised, azure knight took Utak’s feeble hand, following his lead. The clones followed her close behind, G9 remained even closer.


--- Part 2 coming SOON! --->
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 6/17/15
Post by: Tamer on June 18, 2015, 11:25:04 AM
New Chapter on the front page.
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 7/05/15
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on July 05, 2015, 07:30:52 PM

Star Wars: The Clone Wars

Oasis Calm Volume III continued ---- Part 2.

Commander Bly observed the pair while he followed them as a shadow. Each leaned in closely to whisper delicate words, even share several laughs. Looking closer, he saw the Chairman’s robes were not as glamorous as the temple’s initial grandeur. It seemed the prime reached its zenith decades prior; a time before sand, wind, war, and strife had taken its toll.

The growing harem stretched down the hall following the King and his blue female guest of honor. They turned a smooth corner into a large circular chamber with an equally vast round table made of prohibited Kashyyk timbers, taken before the system was declared Republic domain. “Your “summer estate” is quite luxurious your majesty.” His lordship’s eyes blinked slowly, being proud of Aayla Secura's compliment. “Isn’t it? Since I was a small boy, it’s always seemed so incredible. This was one of the original palaces of my people. How far we have come; how far, we too, have stumbled. That is why I invited you.” His court dispersed into the room, breaking into pods of conversations. Droids of a variety rapidly interspersed within the vast dining room; armed with trays of exotic h’orderves and flamboyant drinks.

The royal continued the conversation near the ear of the Republic delegate, “We are a sovereign system in league with the Confederation, but invisible strings are being pulled from off world. My agents are picking up scans from crypts abandoned long, long ago.”

A very tall, thin female approached the conversing duo. She chimed in as if she had been listening from the start of their dialogue, “The most disturbing facts involve communications from Serenno. We have no business connections or cause to be reaching that far. I’ve been investigating this as a possible lead.” Chuckling, Utak looked to Secura before taking the other females thin arm, holding both of them close. “Do excuse Clonna Sin Richodd. Her prowess is impressive, but she insists on demonstrating how effective a Minister of Intelligence she is prior to being introduced.” Secura gave a slight upturned nod, maintaining her false sense of arrogance, “A sound style. Some may find that troubling.” Clonna’s prideful grimace glowed, “Only those who don’t want light being flashed on their dark tasks! Ha, but I’m sure YOU have nothing to worry about.. being from the Republic.”

Nearby a chubby Faust male, crisply dressed, halted a nearby conversation. Standing about 2 heads shorter than Clonna, he turned from his entourage. With large eyes encased in large dark circles, they scanned. His grey skin exquisitely fair, and clothing finely trimmed. The male turned gazing toward the tips of Secura’s lekku, following them up her back toward her strong shoulders. The movement of his head more noticeable due to his elongated neck. When he spoke, his voice wasn’t unpleasant, but his breathing consisted of quick, sporadic inhalations which often interrupted his sentences - causing them to have an abrupt edge, “Excuse me.. your excellency..I have not yet.. the pleasure.. to make the acquaintance.. of your.. guest. I am Science.. Minister Gabrel Kindi.”

Lowering his torso, Gabrel Kindi’s hand quickly grabbed at Secura’s, then raised it to his chapped lips. “Rare.. it is to have such a starlit.. specimen visiting our court.” Secura felt her muscles tighten with distain, but did her utmost to mask her discomfort. The Jedi’s disgust was hidden too well as he continued tracing the crust of his lip up the back of her hand towards her wrist. He spoke simultaneously wetting his lips, “I am truly captiva..”

•BING – BIING – BIING –


A chime sounded summoning all to their seats. Aayla sighed with relief, but noticed the king’s eyes looking apologetically in her direction. The Faust stood up, releasing her blue fingertips, “Ooohh..Delicious! What a feast.. we shall have! You are.. in for a treat.. to die for!”

Guests made their way around the table finding their proper places. The king graciously guided Aayla to a chair nearest his. Purposefully, Utak had assigned the most pugnacious separatists' seats intermittently around the table. This was not a time for plotting…at least not for them. Each chair remained vacant; the guests standing behind, waiting for Utak to take his place. Before doing so, he looked around the expansive table. Two seats were void of their occupants. Chairman Utak began an inquiry, “Where are the representatives of Onderon?” Quickly Clonna Sims, who stood to the high chairman’s right, leaned toward him with an answer, “Their shuttle arrived shortly ago. We were just notified Senator Bonteri was recalled for a parliamentary vote. Her husband will instead be accompanied by an advisor of King Demdup, Sanjay Rash.”

High Chairman Utak made a thankful gesture for the update, but his disappointment was palpable. He motioned to his court then took his seat, “What a shame. I always enjoy seeing Mina. Do reschedule another visit with her office after we dine Clonna.” Taking her seat, Clonna acknowledged, “Of course your excellency.”

Now the dining droids were sent about with new purpose. Hustling and bustling effortlessly bringing dishes and beverages to various guests. Clonna popped a bottle of rare Zygerrian wine, her personal favorite. The chartreuse liquid swirled; bubbling within her class. Lifting it, she slowly smelled the sweet aroma. Others spiraled their glasses, each with a different color and equally exotic flavor.

The sound of large doors heaving open sounded the arrival of the two absent guests. They paced quickly passed the squad of troopers and droids standing silently, tense at the entrance. Both men were well quaffed wearing dress uniforms indicating their status within Onderon’s command structure.

“My apologies my liege! The war has the most abhorred tendency to wreak havoc upon even the tightest schedules.” The first man's words were trite and arrogant, qualities Utak seldom sought to include in his own court. These words not only described his voice however, they summarized his entire existence. Standing taller than his station, his beard and hair were dark, raven black and trimmed flawlessly. Every ornament and customization afforded to this man had been taken.

The herald of Utak’s court spoke aloud, “Entering the Grand Chairmen’s presence: Chamber Counselor to King Demdup, Sanjay Rash! Following: General Declan Bonteri of Onderan Military High Command.”

“Ahh..welcome gentlemen! I’m sure you are weary from travelling such a distance.” The Chairmen was as pleased to see Declan Bonteri as he was annoyed by Demdup’s opening remarks.

Declan was a tall, proud, but humble man who stayed true to his purpose. The armor and uniform worn were the epitome of Onderon’s military dress code. His shoulders were adorned with silver armor plates, covered in beautiful etched details. Bonteri’s uniform bore the colors of his family’s heritage. To Utak, the greys and blues always reminded him of the Bonteri family. A big smile contagiously spread across both men’s faces the closer the general came.

Declan knelt to the kings side, “It is a privilege to be here again in such times. Mina sends her deepest apologies and love.” Leaning back in his chair, Utak beckoned the officer to his feet, “We are very fortunate! Ha ha, awe, pay no mind to it. I know Mina would be here in a flash if she could. And how is Lux?!” With the mention of his son’s name Declan’s presence noticeably lightened! “He misses your mentoring, but has grown so much! You’d be proud.. he has higher marks than any classmate when it comes to rhetoric.”

The king laughed, a sound the war seemed to have stripped away for the longest time. “Ha ha ha ha ha! That’s a good boy! ..or man, I should say!” cheeks grew rosier with each growing laugh “..ha, Declan, I want you to meet a very special guest. The shining Aayla Secura of Ryloth!” Declan Bonterri shifted the weight on his feet to turn towards the beautiful Twi’lek. Extending his hand, a polite, but noticeable degree of skepticism did not elude the Jedi. “It’s a pleasure to meet you. It’s been a long time, it seems, since last I’ve dined with a sympathizer of the Republic.”

“Always so civil yet pointed!” Utak lightly joked.

Aayla playfully, yet with equal force replied, “Until now, I never really knew one could dine with a separatist.. unless you had a battery pack.”

“Ha ha ha!! I see your point Madame Secura. Utak always has had a knack for selecting “enlightening” company. Trust this occasion will be no different.” Declan Bonteri made his way towards his seat.

Sanjay Rash by now had reached his chair and grew flustered the attention was no longer focused on his arrival. “Always a heartfelt welcome! A toast: To a dinn ---” The Grand Chairman’s glass rose, silencing Rash mid toast; it being impolite to toast prior to him at any meal. Utak picked up where Rash was stunted, “To a dinner worth remembering, friends worth keeping, and memories that remind us of good times. May this, join those!” Glasses clinked and laughs grew around the table. The room became filled with dozens of different conversations, droning into a light murmur.

Standing guard, Bly and his men stood silently. Still their eyes darted about the room observing every little shift. Having run so many missions together, without a word, they already knew a plan to decommission the commando droids if need be. Bly leaned over to one his men, “I can only imagine how clean those guns are back in the gunships.” He was very right --- While the evening drew on, the troopers within the gunships of the Regulator had cleaned their gear several times. Many didn’t want to risk the fog that accompanies waking up from a little shut eye in case something happened. Troopers stayed quiet for the most part; sitting in the cool red light of the larty bays. Hett continued his meditation.

----------- Some Time Later -----------

The state dinner had gone through several courses prior to the main event. As the premiere dish was distributed, the counselor from Onderon, Rash, sat steeped in malcontent. His eyes and outlook seemed normal to all around him, but Aayla could feel his displeasure with her presence. At a quiet moment, Rash chose to begin a verbal joust, “So what brings a Republic warmonger to the Confederation’s doorstep?”

Instantly the court was silenced! Mixed reactions visible, but all were intrigued for the response soon to follow. Atell’s violet eyes swiftly turned to Aayla’s face while she leaned back in her chair; fingertips pressed against her pursed lips. Eagerly, she prepared to listen.

Aayla looked directly towards Rash. She could feel her lekku tensing. “Families and their connections transcend the fronts of war, do they not? Clan Secura may be from a Republic planet, but we seek to nurture systems of past beneficial relationships. Atell, I’m sure you agree due to your position.” Atell’s pale green face wrenched when she was abruptly dragged into supporting the guest, “In part, but if this is the case, why bring their soldiers? You bringing them implies you bear a Republic agenda! Do you intend to undermine Aargonar’s place among the independent systems?”

Aayla swept her hand across the table in opposition “These soldiers were offered to me by the senate for protection against potential schemes. I came to see what fiscal connections may spawn here. As an optimist, I choose to see good in others even if the Senate disagrees. If my presence alone undermines some cause…perhaps THAT cause is the more fragile one.” Both Atell and Rash scoffed at the notion while others hosted a mix of reactions.

Declan Bonteri’s face remained pragmatically deep in thought. During the lull, he chose to speak, “The war is not simply black or white. There are unseen puppet masters and collaborating vipers behind every shadow. That’s to be expected with expansive governments, even corporations, but the difference is: we tried being a part of your republican government. Taxation, judicial action, coalitions: everything is stagnant or bogged down with deep-rooted corruption.” Around the table, most voices erupted into arguements. Before Geonosis, the debate would have been mostly divided, but here, everyone’s minds were already swayed. They argued about ramping up the war, ways to increase war dividends, or what terms were acceptable for a ceasefire. The room erupted!

Aayla sat mostly silent beside High Chairman Utak. His face heavy from the evening transforming into an unavoidable confrontation. He leaned over raising his finger tips to screen the dialogue between he and Secura. “Even when united, we are divided. I wonder if ever there will come an end. The galaxy is stretched tightly to the brink.” The volume raised far further beyond normal order. Clonna stood from her seat, irritated with the lack of reverence for the prestigious hall.

“Silence!!” she shouted to no avail.

“STRIKE YOUR WORDS!!!” her voice echoed off the walls. “Regain your..YOUR…reg..I….I don’t..”

Suddenly her body straightened! Veins bulged from every inch of exposed skin! Dark ridges protruded in tremendous daftly contrast!

“AHHH!!” her sharp shriek fleeting. Not a moment later her harshly erect body slammed against the table, splashing what remained of her wine and clattering plates. The room fell still in shock aside from gasps. Within moments a handful of others endured the same fate, screaming in an agony they couldn’t control until silenced by death’s tight grip. Their bodies covered in dark exposed veins, outstretched and contorted across their seats. Initially several aids tried to help their figureheads. The slightest contact rendered them the same fate! Leaning in closely they checked the vitals of their representative. Immediately after contact with the ripples or perversely bold veins, the new victim began their own death, falling to the floor shortly after, writhing.

Chairs slid back quickly. Everyone was at their feet! A flurry of questions and accusations had already begun flying to and fro across the table. Atell shouted, "Commando droids, Secure the room!" as Bly and his men made their way to Aayla Secura. “Murder! This is murder!!” one voice shouted. Another inquired, “What plot is this?!” As if a battle had broken out, Declan Bonteri moved swiftly and addressed the captain marked commando battle droid, “Captain, quarantine the sick. I want to know what is causing this. Your eminence, due to your second falling, I request the ability to begin investigating immediately.”

 The high chairman raised his hand, quickly nodded, and spoke shakily, “Ye..ye..yes General. Do what you need to!” Clearly shaken and disturbed by unfolding events.

“Captain, why aren’t you quarantining them?!” The commando droid turned to Declan and spoke in a low, emotionless tone, “They are already dead sir.” True panic of the unknown set upon the crowd. “Escort everyone to their assigned quarters and post guards in each hall! I’ll escort our guest personally.”

“Roger roger.” Doing an about face, the droid disseminated the appropriate orders to his troops.

Commander Bly rushed to the side of his commander, “General, are you alright?!” Aayla sensed she was untouched by the invisible attack, but looked to her skin which didn’t normally exhibit her veins; the same remained true. “I’m fine commander.” The room’s commotion heightened while droids “escorted” each guest to their quarters under close observation. Declan Bonteri scanned the attendees and crime scene for any overt clues. He pulled his tight fitting glove off hurriedly to see if his hands displayed any signs of the virus or poison. “That’s what it has to be!” he thought to himself; seeing that his hand was clear of any abnormal coloration.

Several meters away a movement piqued his attention – Rash was raising a glass to his lips. Aayla watched Declan leap swiftly, hitting the glass with the back of his forearm armor. The drinking flute was instantly obliterated into dozens of small crystal shards. The liquid splashed away from Rash’s lips. “Are you mad?!” His eyes flared with concern. Rash snidely retorted, “It's only water my good friend..”

“Nearly 15 people just dropped.. DEAD! We have no concept what we’re dealing with here.” The overly extravagant advisor to King Demdup rolled his eyes, “If you insist General Bonteri. I will defer to your knowledge. After all, you are more experienced with matters relating to death.” Declan paused.

The clanking of a commando droid approached. “Sir, I am to escort you to your apartment.” A voice short of breath stepped in, that of the long necked minister of science, “With you permission.. I’ll escort Consular Rash to his rooms.” Within seconds, the droid scanned his voice and had identified him Science Minister Gabrel Kindi. As a superior, the droid didn’t need a further moment to clear his request, “Roger Roger.” His long neck curled as he unnecessarily thanked the droid who had already begun walking away. Declan looked Rash in the eyes, “Please be careful. Onderon needs us now.” He quickly turned his attention to the Republic guest who carried most of his suspicions.

Sanjay Rash’s brow torqued to his comrades back. Turning from his seat, his legs straightened to accompany the male Faust escort.

Hushly beneath his breath Rash muttered, “Onderon needs me…”
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 7/6/15
Post by: Tamer on July 06, 2015, 06:37:28 AM
Time to get the new chapter on the pages.
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 7/6/15
Post by: wraithnine on August 08, 2015, 03:07:38 AM
excellent chapter!
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 7/6/15
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on August 11, 2015, 10:59:02 AM
Star Wars: The Clone Wars

Oasis Calm -- Volume IV

“Suspicion is a poison. A small drop makes a deadly weapon of the freshest water; contaminating pure intent.”

The commotion within the great dining hall continued to rise when more commando droids stormed through doors and window slits in the wall. R4- G9 rolled hastily towards Aayla Secura, spinning clockwise around her. The disguised Jedi Knight took the Grand Chairman by the arm due to her protective instinct, preparing to rush him to a place of greater safety. Her eyes peered around the room then locked on a squad of droids rapidly closing in at a full sprint. Their weapons drawn!

Commander Bly and his squad abandoned their position, guarding the main entrance, and bolted to their general. “Freeze! Release the Chairmen!” the lowly pitched droids ordered repeatedly, “Freeze!” Bly couldn’t make it passed the metal squad without escalating the situation; a risk he was not willing to make. “WHOA WHOA WHOA!!” he shouted, the other clones prepped to dismember the clankers if need be, but their commanding officer’s extended hand motioned them to hold.

Aged, but regaining some semblance of his composure, Grand Chairman Utak, reassured the callous, metal faces at his command, “No no no! Put those guns away!” The sight of his closest security advisor expiring in such horrifying display, wrenched his very core. “I don’t underst..st..stand. Who…why?” the old male’s eyes grew glassy. Aayla turned toward him to aid in his balance. Upon holding him, she felt his frailty through the aged robes; the trembling. The sight of him drew a haunting sadness from within. Utak’s age amplified grossly by the recent moments of pronounced angst.

Onderon General, Declan Bonteri, had assumed the role of security by this time. Squad after squad of droids received orders in quick succession. Each guest was quickly ushered to their prospective quarters for safe keeping. His voice was constant, woven into the disorder as the evening’s company dispersed. Swiftly, Bonteri left his fellow Onderon comrade, Sanjay Rash, under the supervision of Science Minister Gabrel Kindi.

With ease Bonteri located the Republic visitors. He was not surprised to see them closest to the Grand Chairman during such a scattered moment. Running to his side, the salty haired general of Onderon sighed at the sight of his best commando droids encircling the revered leader. “Make way!” The order given not only to the droids, but clone troopers simultaneously. Good thing Bly wore a helmet, for his brow’s crinkled with amplified consternation. Clones and droids promptly parted ways for the military attaché. His body firmly stepped between the white clothed, blue skinned diplomat whose hands wrapped the right arm of Grand Chairman Utak. Secura stepped back. Distrust clearly evident from Bonteri’s posturing.

The man’s stature made a momentary transformation from soldier, to what is best described as that of a nurturing son. Wrapped one arm around Utak’s back, his other arm affectionately assured his mentor, “I will sort this out. Justice will be dealt.” Looking over his shoulder, Declan Bonteri’s eyes met Aayla’s with stern intensity. He was leery and protective, but the Jedi did not sense resentment among his emotions. Declan used the sleeve of his uniform to wipe his eye when guiding the chairmen to a squad of droids. Among them was a T- series tactical droid. The metal was covered in paint reflective of the sand environment of the system.

“TJ- 122, take your squad and escort the Grand Chairmen to the royal chambers. Keep him secure.”

White droid eyes looked toward Bonteri, “Roger. And what of the republ..”

“Leave them under my supervision.” With a short snap, his fingers called the attention of a droid which had been carrying out dinner service moments prior. “Guide the chairman and keep him at ease.” Droids in the royal service had been programmed to deal with the ruler’s growing fragility. Their programming was far more conducive than the callous nature of any battle droid. Slowly the ruler blinked with drawn out and deep sighs. “You’re friendship is dearly appreciated Declan. This evening…this evening has gone woefully awry. Find justice for them!” Utak’s temper flared, but wavered quickly when his strength dissipated.

Lowly the command droid spoke, “Come sir.”

“Ah yes yes.. off we go. Thank you Dec.”

Declan Bonteri simply replied with a slight bow of his head, “Of course.” When his head raised again, his blue eyes locked with a violet pair who watched the exchanges unfold from a distance. Unrelentingly analytical, the Separatist Councilor Atell’s stare was severe. Bonteri paused to prompt a nod. Everyone had something to gain and much to lose during the war. Seldom could any person afford to be perceived as an ally of the Republic, but handling the blue skinned representative himself was the most efficient way to begin solving this crime against the separatist cause! Atell’s green face faded from the light when she turned from the room with her droid escort.

Deeply exhaling, Bonteri’s finger tips squeezed the rigid top of his nose, between his eyes. He motioned Secura to approach. “Let’s walk Madame Secura.”

“That sounds like a good idea.” she replied, beckoning to her droid to follow closely.

“…To say the least” spoke a clone trooper from the 327th. His voice not loud enough to alert the diplomats, but not quite enough to avoid his shoulder being smacked by a comrade. Bly turned to face the direction of the comment. The commander seldom needed to move his head in order to display emotion through his view plate. One by one they fell in behind Bly, mirrored again by commando droids, this time with blasters.

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(Voice scarcely echo down the hall, murmuring in the dark. They approach a locked suite door. A light flickers.)

“Well that was an eventful state function for certain! It’s not every day you see people dropping like mynocks for such delicious food.”

“Yes…yes!! That delivery system was.. effective to say.. to say the least. More so.. than the model predicted!”

“He should be pleased no doubt. Now I can be given the position that was promised for my part!”

“Of course! My work is.. close to so many.. MORE breakthroughs! Up up up here is where I stay. Best place.. for reception. Never directly.. never! Too easy to trace.”
“Well I’m sure our worth is well noted.”

“After, after you, future king.” *snickering

“Ha, yes! Onderon will shortly have what it has required for years. Fresh and decisive blood! Not some old pacifist.. I won’t remain on the fence any longer!”

“Heh heh ha ha! Soon!”

“Sirs, he is expecting you. A communique sent from Serenno is being rerouted from “The Cavern”.”

“Well, patch it through!”

“Yes.. yes droid, then put it through! We must not.. keep him waiting.. long.”
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A dimly lit Aayla Secura walked in tandem with Declan Bonteri. The echoing of footsteps ricocheted off the hard surfaces and stalactites far above. Bonteri had silently brooded since leaving the dining room. His silence deep in concentration. A light at the end of the tunnel grew. An entrance to the hall from outside led to a large railed balcony. Every surface of the woven rails were etched with finely crafted carvings. Aayla’s shoulders bent to examine closer. She was curious as to how the sand had not worn away the detail to a smooth, marbled finish. Often that was the case on Ryloth.

Bonteri noticed her interest. “Even when the shield is down, the hall never fills with sand. This was always my favorite balcony during our leadership retreats. Barren sand, waiting to be swept up in a gale, as far as you can see. Peculiar isn’t it?”
Aayla looked back at him, “Even in that sand storm earlier?”

A slight chuckle emanated from his slight grin, “Oh.. You had to fly through that too? I haven’t seen Sanjay Rash frightened to that degree! Most don’t choose to fly through em. Too many have crashed with clogged vent reliefs.” His eyes directly peered into hers as if he saw through her disguised vale. “The fact you did, means that you not only had an incredibly trained crew aboard, but there is a tremendously important motive for pushing on.”

“We’re here to assure relations..” Bonteri raised his palm in a non-threatening motion to pause. It barely moved back and forth, signaling his desire for her to drop the act. “Droids – You are dismissed. Leave us and position yourselves outside.”

“Roger roger!” Metallic pads clanked and clattered against the floor, dissipating with increasing distance.

Commander Bly nodded towards his commander, then signaled his troops to take a short walk away from the balcony providing additional space for the pair’s private discussion. Bonteri’s eyes shifted from the clone trooper’s backs to the defined woman before him. “Let’s not play more cryptic games. You are involved with the Republic far more than you put on, but I’m still not sure to what capacity. Madam Secura, your security entourage is that of the Star Corps and that sends much boulder a message than figurehead Senate guards.”

Aayla replied in her typical confident, matter of fact tone, “The guard is tied thin with an array of duties due to the war effort. Clone battalions stand as their proxy.”
A slight nod of agreement followed, but not one of concession. Bonteri’s scrutiny flared without warning, “The Senate is not so brazen with intent. Your gunships, though hidden, didn’t elude me. You came heavily prepared for an “incident”. An assassination with clone troopers in the room…that’s too foolish for an official of your guile. Surprise isn’t a response easily fabricated; so spare us both the continuation of this facade!
Why are you here?!?”

Aayla’s brow tightened with her presence so close to exposure. A very uncomfortable place to be. “I…” She paused. In a classic play of words, the Jedi wove truth while continuing her disguise as an off the board representative. With a breath she began again, “..I received a message from the Grand Chairman himself. The message was coded within a diplomatic packet. His concern heavy due to the recent battles waged on the planet. After the republic vacated, Utak became aware of secret communications that hinted the presence of a secret lab. The purpose continued to elude him. We came to investigate.”

“You mean secure... decommission… neutralize…What you mean is that you’re here to destroy a separatist military asset..”

“Utak hinted that it may be far more devastating than a target. If it’s a lab..” Bonteri swiftly interrupted, “If it’s a lab than its destruction makes this more volatile. If it explodes, who knows what will be unleashed across this system!”

“Then help us be more careful! Secret weapons affect not just soldiers, but the people we fight to protect.”

“Is that not the purpose of war? At the most basic level, war is an implement of politics. Striking the heart of that body is only a tactic.”

Secura’s head shook slowly from side to side. Her hand rose to the corner of her eyebrow. “That tactic nearly killed you mentor and the monarch of this system. Does that help clarify how these Separatists value life? The galaxy no longer stands as it did, but it is times like these that save lives and ensure that the values we hold dear survive this horrific onslaught. Where will you stand? What would Utak’s teachings tell your son Lux?”

Declan Bonteri turned his back to Aayla. One arm remained on his hip. He turned part way around before leaning against the smooth stone railing. Bonteri’s heart and mind staunchly contradicted one another. Lux was becoming an ardent separatist and patriot, but Declan remained haunted by the thought of the post war world. Would laboratory weapons ever be seen as true victory?

Sounds of wind whirled across the walls and floor. Sand ground against floor. Bonteri’s voice was soft and disheveled, “I can’t help you. It would be treason.. My lack of aid doesn’t mean there will be obstructions. Quite the contrary.”

“Was there anyone present at dinner whose behavior was out of the ordinary? You’ve dined with them for years.”

His eyes closed. Memories flashed within his mind’s eye. Persons, events, drinks, food, screams, muscles wrenching…drinks… “..the drinks.” “Something about the drinks about the wine?” Aayla Secura’s eyes widened with the new piece of evidence. “It was the wine that killed?” Their eyes met again. His hand pulled up as if a glass was held between his fingertips. “Sanjay.. When the dead were dying he continued drinking without a care. Normally he’s deep in his glass, but there was no.. There wasn’t any wine in his glass..” Blood boiled under the skin of Declan’s cool calm. “He wouldn’t.. but why?” Motivation bounced without reason.

“Then he’s in league with Gabrel Kindi?” Aayla asked rapidly, her enthusiasm reinvigorated. “They left together without an escort.”

“Why would you allow that?!” Material of her dress swirled away from the floor. Her body spiraled violently when their deductions drew a clearer picture. The culprits behavior gave way to their insidious crime.

“Perspectives.. Your suspicion is naturally far different from my own madam “Republic” representative. Lenses reveal different sights, unfortunately.. I’ve been deceived from within...You’d have done the same in my position.”

Silence prevailed. Crackling, rocks crinkled awkwardly under Commander Bly’s battle-worn boots. “Madam, is everything alright?” A penetrating glare from the clone trooper’s eyes met Declan’s. Dismissively, Declan Bonteri smirked. “There’s no qualm here trooper. Although.. Now that I think about it, we may have to pay a visit to Rash and his new compatriot. This could be treacherous for your position Representative Secura.”

“If we don’t act now, this could be treacherous for all of us.”

Sternly the general of Onderron nodded. After a brief thought of his wife and son, Mina and Lux, his war trained focus returned.

Bly and Secura’s eyes met. Finally things were going in their favor. Secura viewed Bonteri’s hand reach down towards the holster on his hip, “Assemble your troops and follow me.” He quickly walked passed them towards the door and the commando droids that waited on the other side. The general’s fingertips rested on the clasp of his holster.

Renewed vigor flowed beneath the disguised Jedi’s steps while she followed suit. She rapidly inserted herself between the droids and officer, who by now had begun to jog. Slyly, the hand at her side raised to the side, flicking forward. Bly noted her subtle signal.

The jog was a pace the clone troopers were used to during their training sprints. Not a sweat was broken. Bly’s helmet angled to the side watching R4- G9 speeding next to him, “Stay close to Secura Gee Nine.. I mean damn close.” In quick succession the droids dome blinked with a high pipping tone of acknowledgement, “Be-do Be-do!” Its little wheels accelerated against the floor until it’s proximity was within Aayla’s shadow.

Commander Bly raised his comlink. His right hand pressed a button and held until it switched blue. With an internal comm channel activated, Bly’s calm, panting voice reached his men’s ears. “Pick your droid men and stay close. Then wait for the General’s signal.”

“And what signal might that be Commander? She gives a lot of elusive signals.”

“Just a hint, it glows blue! ..and I’m not talking about her skin.”

“You said it boss, not m..”

“– Stow it trooper!” Bly barked severely!

Each trooper’s tempo gained to close the gap with their robotic counterparts. Their boots set a rhythm matching the clankers. All sounded as one.

Down the long hall they sprinted! Criss-crossing corridors and down vaulted stairs the diverse team followed Bonteri without a word. Halls remained empty from the lock down procedures. Only the unbatting white glow of commando droids’ visual sensors watched them pass.

Bonteri looked above the doors he passed then looked behind him to Aayla, “We’re close!”

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“Good evening Gentlemen…I trust things go well on Aarognar.”

“Ev.. everything is going better.. than expected!”

“It has been a very hectic night. In synopsis, dinner was certainly a spectacle.”

“That’s an.. understatement! Count.. the compounds Sanjay Rash.. has continued bringing from Onderron have been.. necessary in amplifying the.. compound’s effective use. My labs.. are amplifying the lethality. I’ve been working.. on a new delivery system!”

“Ahh. Very good to hear. You and your cousin have been paid for your biological knowledge and talent. That lab was money well spent!”

“And what of my payment? It’s time Onderron takes its place ‘neath the Separatist fold! I need troops to complete my ascension. For all I’ve done! Then we can field more of the resources the cause needs.”

“I always keep my word Rash. You’d be wise to speak to those who make demands of me then study what they learned from their experience… good luck finding them. The task was done well and you have proven your intent. Avoiding detection as well?”

“In that regard our luck has been fortuitous! We had a very special guest.”

“Hmm. This sounds promising.”

“Yes yes yes! A very.. very pretty one at that!”

“Which is of no concern to me. So who is this guest that has unwittingly turned into our scapegoat?”

“No less than a Republic representative from their senate.”

“You did not think to provide this information when it was pertinent?”

The group slowed when Bonteri stopped running abruptly! His hand rested on the top of his leather holster. “Open the door commando.” Sternly the voice registered in the commando’s recognition software. “Roger roger.”

“Any break… may have aroused suspicion Count Dooku, but we have everything under.. control.”

“Yes Count. Many of the dead include Utak’s Intelligence agents. His investigative wing is riddled with corruption, incompetence, and vigor for our cause. It won’t take much for them to go after the republic dog and her tube bread rats!”

“You’re referring to clone troopers?”

The key pad clicked away while the commando droid hacked the security system. Air in the hall was laden with tension. Troopers looked to one another, stealthily positioning themselves to the closest droid.

“Yes. Golden markings on their armor.”

“Yes Count Dooku! She herself.. a brilliant blue Twi’ lek. I believe her name.. her name was Secura.”

The data pad blipped green with a successful hack.

“…Aayla Secura?”

“Yes! That’s the one!”

The door slid open abruptly! Bonteri and Secura stood in the light of the door way; the room was black except for the light blue glow of a large, proud standing hologram.

“You fools!! She’s a..”

Aayla Secura’s eyes burst wide apart with surprise. Two figures swiveled abruptly in their chairs still cast in dark shadows! Instantly, she identified the hologram! “Dooku!”

 “..JEDI!!”
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 8/11/15
Post by: Tamer on August 13, 2015, 03:30:27 AM
Another great chapter. Time to go share.
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 8/11/15
Post by: wraithnine on August 15, 2015, 02:33:17 AM
woah ! great chapter!
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 8/25/15
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on August 25, 2015, 01:09:54 AM
Star Wars: The Clone Wars

Oasis Calm -- Volume V    Pt. 1

“The greatest test of courage is to bear defeat without losing heart.”

Dooku’s voice carried over everyone’s state of surprise, “You fools! She’s a JEDI!!”

In that moment existed a brief pause. The separatists’ minds raced to find a next move, Bonteri suddenly bewildered by the revelation that the woman next to him was far more than she put on, then Secura who’s mission was now reaffirmed by the evidence before her.

Bonteri’s voice broke the silence, “I’m placing you all under arrest until we..” his declaration unexpectedly interrupted! Rapid bursts of laser fire broke out! Blurs of red beamed through the door way. Without wasting a second, R4- G9 flipped open a compartment holding Aayla Secura’s weapon, her lightsaber. A click snapped, hurling the Jedi’s silver hilt toward her! In a sweeping motion, her reach through the force pulled the silver to her palm, igniting the blade on contact.

“NOW!” Commander Bly shouted! His hands reached forward to the commando droid taking aim at Secura’s back! Before his hands firmly grasped the cold metal of the foe, Bly summarily wrenched the droid’s head at a sharp upward, right angle. Smoke popped with sparks when its head disconnected cleanly.

His men moved quickly, but held nowhere near the prowess of their commanding officer. Each engaged an enemy, throwing their momentum to topple the droid and gain a new advantage. Their struggle intensified! Each pounded and pulled at metallic limbs, only to receive a reply of hasty, hard hitting jabs.

Cracks of armor were audible. Bly moved to aid his squad; improvising with an E-5 blaster clutched in a hand of his latest dispatched enemy. Taking aim, his trigger finger squeezed. One blaster bolt, then a second, and a third fired into different commando droids giving his troopers the sought after edge.

A loud clap reverberated against the wall! Bly’s waist twisted ‘round to find another trooper suspended against a wall; his neck tight within the vice grip of a battle droid! The commander’s left arm extended, aimed; and then fired a dart tailed by a cable. Within seconds, a flurry of electric current pulsed from his gauntlet down the line to the dome of the droid; overloading its cranial processors! The final droid dropped; his visual sensors smoldered. Each squad mate looked to their commander in awestruck silence, “Arm up troopers!” Bly’s helmet turned to the shinnie rubbing his bruised throat, “You have Captain Fordo to thank for that move…”

Aayla Secura made her way into the dimly lit room. Her blade glowed then flashed brilliantly with every laser bolt deflected. She could still make out the crackling hologram that seemed amused by the situation. Rash continued firing blindly and as quickly as possible. Gabrel Kindi searched for a case he had been compiling moments prior. “But what about our agreement Count?!?” Dooku’s low, steady voice was audible to all, “It depends how you manage to salvage this incident Rash.” The hologram cut, leaving the two conspirators in darkness to fend for themselves.

Their area brightened the closer Aalya’s blade drew. “Don’t you have a contingency plan for this sort of thing?!” Sweating palms made the blaster Rash held continue to slip; every shot less accurate than the previous. “I.. have this! Hmmm.. No this will work!” Oddly shaped, the minister of science laid beneath a desk on his side. Reaching up his finger prodded in the dark until it flicked a peculiar little switch.

The glow of the saber illuminated odd thick bubbles which sank from ceiling dispensers. Dense in both color and weight, their behavior was very strange. Bly’s squad began entering the room from behind Aayla. Kindi chuckled to himself, “Heh heh heh… This is a peculiar use ..for sanitation protocol. All the same!” Crawling, he made his way to a shelf that slid open very narrowly. When Rash became aware of his compatriot slipping through the wall with a crate of mixtures and data; he bolted to force his way through too. The two pressed to open and close the door on one another. “I’d get down.. if you want to make it out!! You can’t come in! This door.. is the trigger!” Rash was taken back by the sudden betrayal, but in reflection, if the situation was in revers, Rash’s action would have been the same, “You ARE a mad man!”

Gabrel Kindi clarified as the hidden panel slammed shut, “NO! Not a man--- a scientist!”

A bubble popped against Bly’s gloved hand. The chemical was oily and smeared with ease. He thought to himself, quickly analyzing its properties. This was a chemical used to fight contaminant hazards in critical facilities! “GET DOWN!!” his voice coarsened from the force of the air pressing through his throat. Aayla dropped to the floor as did Rash, who wedged himself under a work station. The Jedi’s instincts paid off when a miniscule ignitor triggered the bubbles, encapsulating fuel, which by then filled the air.

“Down Snapper!!! NOW!” The trooper being yelled at had unwittingly strode into the trap, “Ohh Skrag__”

Quicker than any clone could react, the spark burst the nearest bubble! Each acted as a catalyst creating a chain reaction that spread quicker than a breath. Anything higher than 1 meter off the ground was instantly enveloped in raging fire! Flames quickly developed a life of their own; spiraling, burning uncontrollably, and consuming air faster than it was available.

Bly looked up. His armor laid flat against the floor. Flames thickened! Aayla surveyed the situation; her cough worsened. Eerily, the rapture of flame above continued its cleanse without a sound. Every surface touched by oil burned hotter and hotter until the material seared on a molecular level. A mysterious toxin dripped heavily from the silent belches of fire. Her commander’s visor starred directly at her, reflecting the orange lambent above. “General, crawl your way to the hall! Our scrubbers will gives us a few extra moments time!”

The crisp, white dress she wore darkened with grimy sludge every movement. She crawled with the armored squad following quickly behind, their armor collecting much. Grazing her elbow, Aayla’s face turned in the direction of an outstretched hand, fingers spread far apart! Briefly the struggle continued until the hand relaxed, collapsing to the floor! It belonged to that of clone trooper, Snapper. His armor blackened from mid-thigh up. Snapper’s body glove, though fire resistant, stood no chance against the catalyst continuing to bubble against the festering skin. Even the charred armor was noticeably deformed from exposure to such great temperatures; its edges curled and boiled in a shroud of raven smoke. Each trooper paused for a brief, silent salute. In war, that was the most that could be given without risking oneself.

“Almost there..” Aayla’s lekku laid close to her body, the wavering light of the hall guided her. Heat vented through the door, dispersing to manageable levels. She observed the surroundings after clearing the door, “Oh no..” her voice sank. Bly and his troopers continued crawling from the inferno, their armor  singed. “What’s wrong General?…Oh..” The clone commander had regained his footing beside his general and was now looking down at a series of blast shots which held Aayla’s gaze.

Declan Bonteri lay propped against the warm stone wall. Four small rings continued their amber blaze through his shined ceremonial armor. His eyes rolled to the side before opening. “What betrayal.. is this..?” Bonteri coughed before attempting to breathe deeply. His voice, now weak and raspy, tried with futility to overcome the soft gurgle that made its way up his throat. A small trail of blood seeped from the man’s lips, staining his beard. Struggling up the wall, Bly moved toward him to provide first aid. To their shock, he back in revulsion, uncertain of any previous allegiance! “..treach..ery!...” Bonteri whispered. His body slid down the wall. Finally resting against the rock floor, the group saw the extent of the man’s mortal wounds which bellowed smoke from his back.

“Leave him for now Commander Bly. We can only make matters worse for him.” In an ironic turn, Aayla’s senses became tormented through the force for the separatist’s confusion and angst.

“We need to catch Gabrel Kindi before he makes it off world! Bly, your communicator.” Her blue hand held the sides of Bly’s communication device.

Bo-Weep Weep!                Bo- Weep Weep!

“Yes Jedi Secura?” The Jedi master’s voice calm and collected as expected.

Aayla and her troopers already began running back to their Arquiten cruiser, “We have a tumultuous situation unfolding Master! There are chemical weapon elements escaping the palace to an unknown bunker. We can’t allow Kindi to escape with them! He is in league with Dooku”

A’ Sharad Hett’s pilot leaned over from his perch in the cockpit, “General Hett, we have a set of ships powering up on the scanner! Speeder Class sir!”

Clones of the 327th within the gunship raised to their feet abruptly. “Finally!” many thought upon seeing their commander’s raised fingers swirl in a circular mount-up gesture. “Looks like we’ve got your ships Secura. Find your way back to the Regulator! I’ll pursue Kindi and undo this lab!”

“We’ll get back then rendezvous at the bunker!” Her voice raised over the sounds of their feet running down the hall; their previous steps retraced.

“Pilot: Detach and pursue!”

“Right away sir!” the co-pilot replied. The pair coordinated the docking brackets for release. Loud clatters shook the gunship with the clamps’ release. Heaving engines propelled the larty forward from between the prongs of the Arquiten cruiser, Regulator.

A trio of red blips pinged on the scanner. “We’re about to lock on ‘em sir!” In charge of weapon systems, the copilot utilized his aiming mechanisms diligently.

“NO! Not yet. Just keep them in your sights! Do not allow them to gain any awareness of us pilots.”

 
Nodding, the pilot acknowledged, “Will do sir! Won’t be too hard in this desert.”

“Cuh..uhg!” Sanjay Rash regained consciousness. Propping himself up, Rash coughed repeatedly. His lungs felt filled with smoke. After a quick gander at the surrounding wreck, he slithered from beneath the station and observed how fortuitous his luck had run. Though Rash survived, the precariousness of his situation was all too tangible! His boots lightly splashed in the muck coating the floor. By then the fire had diminished to sparse embers scattered across the room. A crisp line on the wall showed the drastic effects of the cleansing counter measure.

Rash reached for the sidearm previously used, but it lay melted beyond use above the counter. He wondered to himself; how could he make it out of this position as Count Dooku had jaunted? It seemed Rash’s dreams of the throne were dashed until he saw something. Terribly burned, a clone trooper lay sprawled across the floor. “Well..this could be useful” he murmured to himself.

His hands wrapped beneath the shoulder straps of the clone trooper’s chest armor. Rash tugged the corpse towards the door until his heel clicked against the doorways raised lip. Looking down the hall, he saw another squad of commando droids patrolling. Rash quickly turned the other direction, but dropped the clone out of sheer shock!

“B..Bo….Bonteri!”

Rash’s fellow delegate from Onderron lay feint. His consciousness swayed in and out. Rash knelt beside Bonteri. Blaster wounds no longer glowed, but their piercing damage had been done. Bonteri’s gaze fell upon Rash who was unsure how to act due to the recent motion to place him under arrest. “Can I ease you friend?”   

Bonteri’s body grew more rigid and heavy. “The cause.. the cause is..fals.. Mina – my love..” The general struggled with every fiber of his being to convey the most important messages in his heart and mind. Tightly his fingertips clasped the silver, ceremonial armor plates adorning his shoulders. Unclasping them from his uniform, Bonteri held the family heirlooms to his slowly beating heart. “Lux.. fight ..on…son…..” His eyes glazed as though a tear were close to unraveling down his cheek, instead, his final breath gave way.

 
Sanjay Rash took in hand both metal shoulder plates then rose to his feet. “Droids! This way! Carry these two and follow me.” Cold machine digits reached down, lifting the two bodies from the heated rock. Their purposes remained unknown…

Engines of the LAAT roared at heights far enough above leaving the sands below undisturbed. Beneath the nose, many meters ahead, speeders kicked up easily spotted trails of sand that lingered in the crisp air. The evading culprit had no idea his trail was now tracked. Kindi’s path was direct across the dunes and rolling topography. Far ahead a large cloud grew from the ground up. Swirls of sand caught in another gale!

Ahead, dual stone edifices starkly jutted from the sea of sand. The speeders’ pace slowed the closer they came to the dark tanned spikes. Where most exposed rock was worn down by unrelenting tussles of wind and rock, these pillars remained jaggedly shaved.

Gabrel Kindi’s speeder approached his hidden chemical lair. A sly sneer bloomed across his eerie grey skin. Thoughts of his success made his smirks irresistible! Familiar secret walls grew more visible.

Suddenly, five automated defense turrets rose from the sand! Gabrel threw up his arm to protect his toxic case! “NOO!! I’m an ally!” The defenses opened fire in a frenzy of red, sporadic blasts. Beams fired over Kindi’s head towards the sky. “What? No! How could they ..have followed ..me?! FIRE!! FIRE!! FIRE!!! Keep them OUT!!”

Hett’s spoke when the first laser blasts speckled the gunship’s cockpit window, “Surprise is up gentlemen! Take aim and remove those turrets.”

Lieutenant Havoc’s voice shouted above the clatter of weapons being equipped, “Ready up troopers!” Fingers tightened then lifted the familiar pistols from his holsters. “This is what we get for waiting! Scrap em!!” Targeting computers beeped furiously making locks with marked targets on the ground.

“Missiles away!” Both pilots unfurled a hail of weapons from the gunship’s armament. Projectiles mounted beneath the wing launched with a screeching hiss! Their trails glowed a hollow blue; speeding ahead of the gunship toward the automatic turrets. Each explosive device met its target, shredding apart on impact. Without shielding, all defenses were dismantled in the coordinated flurry! Bursts of flame burped from below hurling droid shrapnel pluming into the sky. Smoke stretched away from flickering flames that emanated above the sand; winds pulling in waves.

“Droids!..Droids..Keep them out! Fight them off” Waving frantically, Kindi’s hand motioned his escort to turn and fight. From the bunker’s door marched a number of hulking super battle droids flanked by their lanky B1 predecessors. 

Kindi’s speeder skidded to a halt as close to the hatch as possible in order to avoid the unfurling bursts of shrapnel! Awkwardly shaped, one leg swung high above the back pads, helping the scientist to roll off the side. His gate, an obstinate hobble, demonstrated it had been quite a while since having to run. A’ Sharad Hett’s hand pressed into a panel beside the blast door triggering both to open simultaneously. Speeding air aided in each blast door’s great weight pulling into their open position. Instantly, light flooded the open bay holding the squad of Star Corps troopers.

“Attack them!!” hissed Kindi as he retreated behind a bulkhead. His eyes curled from the side of a nearby barrier. Morbid curiosity made him linger! Square and ungainly, the gunship approached! Green lasers beamed down from the chin guns furiously pelting the sand and any target standing between. Each impact tossed hardened chunks of crystalized sand reeling into the sky!

Nearing the ground, the snout of the gunship raised. Intently, troopers gripped the bar above their heads to maintain footing during the steep shift. Lieutenant Hazoc leaned over the edge of the gunship’s base board firing his pistol, “Now lads! Quick line it!! GO GO GO!! We’re on it General!”

“Let’s Hit em!”  Thick, black ropes dropped from the flanks of each bay door.

“EAT LASERR!!!” Clone troopers clad in white armor, speckled in blast scars and yellow paint, slid down the lines with ease! Their weapons cut loose blue lasers with every meter of their descent.

“On the right!! SMOKE EM!” Thudding to the ground, their pace paused only an instant before starting a forward sprinting assault! Each covered one another while hurrying towards the bunker entrance. One step at a time brought them closer to danger, but further from open ground; a much deadlier nemesis.

Rockets fired from an upgraded B-2 slammed into a stubby sandbank splashing a burst of shrapnel into the air, “I’m hit in shoul…UHG!” A clone trooper’s voice cut short by a series of hot, red lasers riddling his chest. Lifeless, he fell to his back.

“Stag is down – PUSH UP on the right! Tighten up! Hit em hard on the left, MOVE!” Hazoc dodged while dashing forward. His pistol rattled off a series of shots in quick succession. B1’s collapsed in response to each well aimed shot. Another trooper ran with a heavy weight in his step. His Z-5 rotary canon quickly felled the bulk of droids still standing between the troopers and their objective.

Kindi snickered at the apparent success! His eyes glimmered when the unsuspecting clone troopers verified each droid was not going to stand again. He had been looking forward to using a recent gift from Dooku.

The squad’s pathfinder led the way over tattered metallic corpses. Something remained satisfying about that scent; the scent of frying circuitry. His body twisted giving the “clear” signal to Hazoc before looking above to the gunship, “All clear sir!” Hazoc raised one arm to his side then motioned with two fingers. Each trooper moved; weapons alert. Returning his gaze to the gateway, the pathfinder noticed several glows in the dark of the hatch, “Sir, do you hear that hiss?”

Kindi slowly backed away from the hatch while two pairs of jetting B2-RP’s rocketed passed! Rapidly the quad flew through the door. Jets mounted on their backs screeched with propulsion output increasing their agility. Both arms extended launching a dense barrage of fire into the clones cutting down the pathfinder “Down!” “Sir there’s no cover!” “Not these agai – AHHHG!” …then two others.

Checking left and right, the pilot failed to acquire a firing vector of the incoming droids. “General, I can’t hit them! They’re right beneath us!” A laugh burst with giddy excitement from the causeway! Kindi had never seen combat and reveled in its carnage, but he had also never seen a Jedi Master…
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 8/25/15
Post by: Tamer on August 25, 2015, 02:40:22 AM
Time to get this update on the front page.
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 8/25/15
Post by: TheIRISH Rogue on September 25, 2015, 11:58:13 AM
Star Wars: The Clone Wars

Oasis Calm -- Volume V    Part 2 (Finale)

Having checked left and right, the pilot failed to acquire a firing vector on the incoming droids. “General, I can’t hit them! They’re right beneath us!” A laugh burst with giddy excitement from the causeway! Kindi had never seen combat during his life and reveled in its carnage. He had also never seen a Jedi Master…

Lasers pelted the ground and chased troopers! The squad remained unable to take out the metal giants. This was not due to the B2’s nimbleness, but to the lack of cover which denied clones a place to organize kill box. “Keep the FIRE up and MOVE! One spot is as good as the next!” Urgency was not something Hazoc plead for, but it was heavy in his voice, “Three men down!”

Hett’s braided hair gust across his shoulder as the Jedi walked to the center of the gunship’s empty bay. Wind blew harshly against the raised, leather collar. His next move was swift, taking one then two quick strides; hurling himself over the edge. Gusts tussled about his body whilst leather flaps of fabric wagged behind him. Kindi watched from afar as the figure fell to what must be certain death! The scientist’s eyes swelled when A’ Sharad Hett’s arms spread apart; a pair of glowing green beams spawned from his grip. Hett’s plunge was nothing but graceful; perfectly aimed between two of the air born B2 super battle droids. They did not see him coming. Regardless, they never had a chance!

Hett’s body spiraled with arms stretched out! Both sabers dismembered the intended targets with ease! Each cleaved piece softly thudded against the sand below. The other pair of B2s became aware of the Jedi when their comrades’ digital signatures dropped offline. Light hums swelled. Their jets spun their thick, top heavy torsos to acquire the new, high level threat.

“Eliminate the Jedi.”

“Roger roger.”

The deep, affectless droids spoke to one another. Both arms aimed straight down; their jets boosters brought them into ideal firing positions. Master Hett stood in his defensive saber stance, waiting. Each fist of the droids cut loose rapid chains of blaster fire! Kindi chanted to himself as though a podrace unfolded.

Hett dashed right effortlessly; his body one with the sand. Crystal blue eyes peered up from beneath a focused brow. His right saber parried dozens of shots, sending red blasts back into the air. Clone troopers watched his left arm deflect a well-aimed shot, then curl back. Sharply it projected out, bursting forward rapidly! Green pierced the air. Hett’s saber lanced the first B2 causing an eruption of metal and hardware to shower the troops below.

Holding its place, the lightsaber then spun, spiraling into the second B2. Its hails of fire paused. The saber sank through its firing mechanisms. With a step forward, the tan shrouded Jedi lobbed his second saber toward the lightly grey stripped B2 whose eyes flickered. Green penetrated the lower abdomen and up through the droids back shoulder! The propulsion systems sputtered.

A’ Sharad looked ahead, undaunted. Standing tall, he strode beneath the droid that continued to hover in place. Clone troopers took to their feet, beginning to walk in their General’s flanks. Hett’s hands flexed through the force, tearing the droid apart in the sky before powerfully bashing the hulked mass to the ground! Wistfully, sabers glided back to the palms of their master, spiraled fleetingly, then latched to his belt upon deactivation.

Kindi stood stunned by what had unfolded. With such a grand mathematical mind, it did not take long for the scientist to compute: no matter what droids were in "The Cavern", they could not stop this pursuing threat! Only something terrifying in his lair might stave the Jedi adversary. After a quick about-face, Kindi waddled deeper down the hall. Worried, white eyes looked over his should, the sight only caused greater panic. Hett’s tattooed face and collected demeanor haunted Kindi.

Hazoc looked to the Jedi, “So… got something about flyers that makes you flex like that? Or do you always show off for the “shinnies”?”

“That wasn’t for you Lieutenant. Distress can be a tool against those who previously thought it exclusive to them- Knowledge they are nearly undone.”

“Heh.. you mean fear?” Hazoc’s voice lightened with Hett’s use of psychology. Hett’s only retort was a silent glance.

Using a remote to activate a bulky set of gears to close the cavern’s gateway, Kindi fled to his laboratory. Large clanks smacked, pulling the entry way closer to securing closed. It could only stall them, but that might be enough for him to escape...or worse!

“General, he’s closing the hatch! If that locks, who knows how long a breach will take! …If that’s even possible..” Hazoc sprinted towards Kindi’s trail! Hett joined the race; raising the gunship on the comlink, “Pilot, lodge the LAAT against the door!”

“Already on it sir! Will do what we can, but move fast!” Squeezing his controls, the pilot maneuvered his larty towards the tightening gap. His co-pilot remained uneasy due to the density of the door, “Is this even going to work? Those gears might crush us!” Pilots of the 327th Star Corp were used to running missions of a dire sort. “We only need to buy them time to get through. Let’s do this. Buckle up!” Momentum behind the gunship was easily gained once the thrusters were punched into action. A blast of thunder rumbled! Seats shook violently with the shuttering power engaged.

“Deactivate all weapon systems! Let’s not blow ourselves up!” Subtle whines inside the gunship were audible whilst numerous systems shut down. With mere seconds to act, the craft dove down sharply. Teeth clenched. The pilot wrenched his control stick sharply, back to the left with one hand. The other jammed the throttled into full force, then pulled back equally as hard.

This chain of events caused the gunship to bellow before its metallic belly screamed against the bases rock covered, metal floor. Pressure applied its weight against the starboard wing! Groaning, the skin wrinkled before popping to condense on itself. The door marched on, popping and squeezing until the front hull and rear gun were pinched. Strongest part of the of Gunship was its long, lateral keel.

“Move, move, move!” The pilot shouted! Each pulled an emergency handle to blow out a side compartment releasing the canopy. Both rolled out of the cockpit and into the Separatist base. Hurrying, each grabbed a blaster off the rack inside the larty’s armament bay. Stress popped rivets and seams, pushing the exoskeletal armor passed its proven test point.

An opening remained in the bay, for the time being. A’ Sharad Hett stepped through the space he had meditated in less than an hour prior. Cold plates waited on the other side of the improvised partition. “Well done pilots. Remarkably so.” The pair snapped to attention, “Thank you sir!”

“Tread lightly.” Hett’s focus persisted, he saw the necessity of prudence over error. “Doubtful Dooku anticipated us finding this asset, but we need to be careful.” Boots softly tread over metal plated floors. This base was similar to many others, modular in its construction. Other labs Hett liberated had similar layouts. Entire sections built elsewhere then quickly constructed on site allowed more time to be spent on camouflaging the operation.

Suddenly, the furthest corridor brightened. Again and again, each compartment flicked on florescent lamps. Hazoc’s voice whispered, “He’s powering up the generators General. Time is no longer a luxury..” The Jedi raised his hilts, “I agree.. lets move!” Boots thudded, each picked up the track previously started, unaware what they’d find around each bend. Hett’s breathing was nearly nonexistent. Turning corners, left and right. Troopers splintered off as needed to secure new sections.

The base was fairly linear making the task to clear it straight forward. Troopers stopped to analyze and scan, but most of what they found were pieces of tech or vials that contained substances yet to be weaponized. “We’re in luck General..” Hazoc’s voice reported in, “..this lab is being prepped. It’s not fully operational. No support staff! Any droids found are being dealt with.”

Hett had left a trail of battle droids in his wake, but no sign of Kindi. He continued to search. Fear lingered in the hall. The Jedi honed in on the residual emotion; the scent of his prey. A voice garbled from Hett’s armored communicator, “Sparks found a data pa… concern. High v..la..ile and toxic substances …rived a fe.. weeks ago, …t we haven’t found ….yet. We’re en route ….  ….. po…ion now! _____” Silence dropped over the prevailing static.

A tall door, wide apart, straddled the hall. Inside, plants of all types thrived, dozens of tanks held who knows what. Control panels, screens, holograms, lab stations -- scattered across the room in a glow of organized chaos. Tenderly, Hett walked with his saber in hand. Above, odd inscriptions covered the pillars and beams. Air itself grew stale and heavy. A column of boxes fell to the floor! Kindi stood sniveling behind them, clearly attempting to make use of a hatch marked, “Emergency.”

“You weren’t meant to leave Kindi. That’s generally the separatist way.”

“Save…save your lies, Jedi! You..You have no idea where you are…or..or who you address!” Kindi raised up from his knees. The frightened nature morphed into blind stubbornness. There’s something to be said for a corned creature standing its ground.

“Gabrel Kindi: Actually, one of my lesser known dossiers. You weren’t on our radar until after the Naboo incident. Given your profession, affinity for the confederation, and family ties to Dr. Nuvo Vindi. It’s an irrefutable combination. Your cousin resurrected the "Blue Shadow Virus"...one of the most deadly in the galaxy. The assassinations bore similar, fast acting symptoms. Only thing is, you haven’t harnessed it.”

“Nuvo wasn’t.. the only ..success of my.. family!” his speech fragmented with his rise in emotion. His hands trembled with anger. “He brought life back to the blue shadow virus..yes…but mine is entirely from...from scratch! How to use it! How to.. employ it.. is a.. different matter! You know.. what happened. The way their.. veins turned black.. the agony of DEATH! More test subjects! The galaxy..will bow with trepidation!”

Kindi watched a squad of troopers run towards the lab door. Hazoc shouted to Hett, who quickly had gained his admiration, “General get out of ther..” but his voice was cut silent by the activation of some type of ray shield. “More test subjects.. in time. Naïve little test tube organisms!” Kindi emphasized with a glint of determination, “but first.. I deal with you!”

“Jedi are not merely dealt with Kindi. It’s not too late to turn yourself over. Undo the damage of your projects. Dooku played his hand, and he has left you with nothing.” Hett’s steps took him closer and closer to Kindi. A fat droplet of sweat glistened, trailing down the alien’s pasty forehead. “Stop! Not another step! Or…or I’ll..” Without grace, Kindi Clumsily attempted to push a crate in front of the force-strong human.

Screeching, the box ground to a halt far from the Jedi's foot, the intended target. Hett drew his second blade, the proximity disappearing between them heightened the scientist’s frantic effort.

“Here!”

The tattooed Jedi’s steps immediately halted, “Don’t.”

“You.. let me.. out of here.. Or we all DIE!”

“We do not negotiate with terrorists Kindi.” 

“I am a SCIENTIST! These spores will kill you.. and your clones!! Who knows what else.. if the walls.. are breeched!”

Hett’s demeanor remained calm, undaunted by imminent death. Meditation largely provided his continuous state of tranquility woven to a sense of purpose. “Your death would soon follow. Put down the trigger.”

“I won’t!! Noo.. instead.. instead I think I’ll make my escape ..over your raven-veined.. wiggling corpse. These spores will hold you at bay. This will release them! So stand your.. men down! I am passing! NOW!”

Surrounding the room was a sterile bay lit by blue glows of containment beams. Behind was a flurry of what seemed to be magnified pollen spores; a test weapon. Their fuzzy texture was to cling on a breeze easily upon dispersal in the sky. Kindi could not be allowed to leave at any cost!

“Make way!”

“You will not be leaving this room Kindi.”

“Over your dead body!” Kindi’s sweating thumb pressed down against the switch. The subtle hum of the containment field only became noticed once it had ceased. Kindi pulled a mask from his thick coat; laughing sickly all the while. Though the air was still inside the room, the filtration system caused minimal assistance which the flurries grabbed hold. Slowly they floated with no rhyme or reason into the room, their deathly traces trailing a powder behind.

“NOOOO!!” Hazoc let out a shout, his fists pounding against the wall! “General, we’ll get you out of there!”

Hett deactivated his sabers, latching them again to his waist, “You will do no such thing Lietenant. I will let him pass.”

“General, we can’t! You know what will happen if he makes it out.”

“HA HA HA HA HA! Too late Jedi! I can’t control.. these spores yet! OR..maybe that's the BEAUTY!! Either way...I'm leaving.. over your body.. then over those clones. Its the virus! This.. is merely the cure.. of this war's scourge.” Kindi’s mask fogged up with every boorish laugh.

Hett’s eyes closed. The cloth shrouding his chest barely fluctuated from how shallow the man’s breath became. Without a visible sign, the spores lingered mere inches from the Jedi. The fortitude of his meditation undulated the poisonous spores in place. Slowly they drifted away from A’ Sharad Hett. Kindi made a sprinting hobble toward the Jedi, misinterpreting Hett altogether. Exerting little effort, Hett raised a pair of fingers from their perch against his knee, hurling the rotund scientist back across the room. Kindi’s body smashed against his desk before hitting the floor with a thud. A tiny creek was the only noise that carried through the air after the impact.

A’ Sharad Hett’s eyes opened slowly to see the Faust male rolling erratically. Raising to his feet quickly, Kindi’s body language was that of sheer horror! Hett’s eyes opened to reveal a splintering crack through Kindi’s lifeline. “How could you?!”

“Now you can pass..” Hett’s voice softly spoke. Kindi’s brow pursed in his first moment of sincere confusion. At a loss of words he continued rushing to clog the crack with his rubberized glove. Color flushed away from his already bland skin. Soft bristles of terror overcame Kindi the more he moved. A soft creak grinded sounded from the glass across his mask, “You.. you can’t let me die!”

Spores continued to surround the two, the threat remained very, very tangible. Hett maintained his fortitude, but softly conversed with the frantic engineer, “So says the murderer.”

“But, you’re a Jedi! I am merely a scientist.. you must see the position I was in.. the orders.. the threats!”

Chilled eyes looked on, “I do see. Darkness shrouds all your work. Saving you - sentences the innocent to death..”

“We all have.. parts to play Jedi!” Extending, the crack grew with another creek.

“Not anymore Kindi. Yours resides here beneath the sand.”

“NO! You can’t just…”

“THIS fate was constructed by yourself. We DO have parts to play; saving you is not mine.”

Clone troopers looked on through the ray shield, uncertain what was unfolding aside from what was visible. Kindi unwittingly continued applying pressure and in his fear, squeezed the glass until it fractured with a pop! From his throat a high pitched squeal burst! The spores spiraled around him in the turmoil. His gasps enticed the sensitive spores closer with each vast inhale.

Looping and drifting the toxic cloud encroached. Cornered behind a table, Kindi held his breath, but it was too late. Small particles floated into contact against his skin causing him to wail again! Instantly darkness spread through his veins! “AHHH!!! NO NO NO NO NOOOOO!!! I didn’t fini.>AHHHH!!” Kindi’s body flopped to the floor, his muscles tense beneath his loose skin. His gaze flared and fixed upon a rubberized glove laying on the floor. That which betrayed him.

 Foam bubbled from the corpses lips, pooling beneath his face.

 Hett continued to sit on the floor with his legs folded in front of him. His back remained to the ray-shielded entryway. Hazoc ordered his men to keep him posted, turned, and made his way back to the surface.

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 “Over there! Take us to the smoke Captain!” Aayla’s voice was loud across the quiet, but focused bridge.

A clone officer raised his arm to a right angle, “Captain Sightreh, the scanners a picking up very light readings. There is a presence, but depth is playing games on the sensors.”

Sightreh’s arm remained behind him when his right hand lifted to direct the pilots, “Take the ship down. Prepare the landing gear, but do not pipe down the engines. This is a touch and go.”

Aayla Secura quickly motioned to Commander Bly when stepping down from the command deck. “Keep the hatches open.” Bly led the way to a door on the lower hull. After a series of beeps the door slid apart. Bright, blinding light bounced off the approaching dune the closer the Regulator hovered above ground. “Be careful down there General. Already have had enough close calls for one day!”

The Jedi’s smile bloomed, her hand held the door frame while her eyes gauged the distance to the incoming ground. “On a Separatist world with no army group and a series of assassinations, it could get a whole lot worse if we don’t hurry.” Bly’s countenance remained undaunted, “We’ll be here General. Bring back the lads.” Aayla’s response was a simple nod before hastily rappelling down.

Shady smoke continued bellowing from the gunship wreckage which held open a large blast door. Her blackened, stained dress dragged against sand with each step. The smoke stuck to her lungs the closer to the gunship she came. Concealed behind rising ash, a form was barely visible. Hazoc pushed through the smoldering wreckage. Swaying back and forth, the clone trooper’s hand pushed smoke away from his filters while he coughed. Rushing to his side, Aayla helped steady the soldier, “Trooper, are you alright? Where is Master Hett?!”

Hazoc regained steady breathing, but his voice remained coarse. “Not bad sir! Just sand in the filters.” A harsh cough broke his sentence. “He’s in a tight spot! Follow me sir, but take a deep breath! Smoke is filling the facility quickly.” Aayla’s arm pulled the trooper back to the smoking entrance without further hesitation, “Then hop to it trooper!”

The pair rushed through the larty carcass and down into the Confederate facility. Once fluorescent lights became clouded in the murky smog. It loomed in the rafters and grew lower with the passing of each minute. “General: Kindi is dead, but he released the toxin with Hett still in the room! If the door is breached, the vacuum will pull the spores out of the hall. If that happens, there’ll be unknown blowback for the system! We’re dead in the water..” She remained silent with Hazoc’s words whirling in her mind. “..Dead in the water..” Smoke lightened, lingering in the higher sections of the facility. The bulbs glowed starkly in contrast. Her eyes tightened, halos clung to every shinning surface.

A small cluster of clones stood facing the ray shielded laboratory door. “..Master Hett..” Hazoc’s voice belted the ears of his squad, “Aten-hut!” Instantly the squad backed away from the door. Their bodies sharply snapped to attention in two thin, but tightly spaced lines. Aayla paced to the door. Her friend and mentor sat calmly with his back to the door. He could sense her presence before she arrived.

With their communicator’s transmissions being garbled with interference and a shield that blocked sound, their situation was futile. Aayla’s mind reveled and thrashed searching for ideas to cheat fate! Master Hett’s calm grew through his meditation. He reached to her cognizance. The Jedi’s demeanor cooled. No Jedi enjoyed the thought of defeat, but becoming one with the force as a concept each grasped at a young age, some easier than others. Aayla often refused to allow an easy defeat, this was no different.

A sense overcame her blue skin. Warmth shrouded her body, pushing the cold of fear away with its taunts. Master Hett sought her through the Force, reinforcing her doubt. She calmed as she prepared herself with the realization that his life was the cost to keep the spores from spreading what horror had been experienced earlier that day. A vision of Jedi, clone, and varieties of species all succumbing to the tainting, black vein virus. Her finger tips stretched as she leaned against one side of the door. Unwittingly a jagged edge caught the skin of her forearm. With a quick reflex, the female Jedi’s arm pulled back, but her glance zoomed in.

Small and hardly noticeable, Aayla Secura looked closely at the askew metal fragment. Her studying revealed it to be another of Kindi’s countermeasures. Hett sensed her shift in emotion; hope. The idea growing in her mind was the best chance for his survival, but remained steeped in risk. Hazoc stood closely behind Aayla continuing to look over her shoulder. Static flared over the communication chamber of all personnel with a communicator.

**Krrsh** “Gen…l, We need….  … move now! Seppies Incom…” **Krrsh**

Hazoc looked behind and up the ramp to a sight of encroaching smoke. Bulging puffs billowed their direction rapidly filling the hall; cutting down their time. “General, if you’re going to try something- we need to do it now!” Aayla’s finger pressed across the hidden switch activating the room’s mysterious ploy. It’s pressure fought her finger until the spring popped into place. Each trooper watched on as the ceiling began filling with another substance. Aayla sighed as the familiar black bubbles rapidly released from the scrubbers filled more and more space. Spores churned from current shifting in the room. Their sensitive fibers gravitated towards the fuel. Each collection of toxic molecules became doused when their momentum submerged each core. Her finger pulled the small lever back from its pressed position. A brief pause lived long enough to demonstrate the lack of effect the switch had over the river of cleansing fluid!

It continued pouring out at a much faster rate than the room Aayla had previously escaped from. Within minutes her view of Master Hett was obscured. Sweating palms pressed against the ray shield. Undulating fluid covered her view. Short clicks were all that brought the end. Fire erupted without a sound on the opposing side of the ray shield. Crimson and auburn flashed against the visors of each trooper. Bright flickering blazes amplified themselves in the glossy terror of Secura’s blue eyes. Her mind still held her recent escape from such an imminent death nearby, but this was different. Flames licked the ray shield from roof to floor.

As fast as it had begun, the rapture died away. When the final spark extinguished itself, the ray shield’s whuurr ceased. Smoke shrouded the laboratory. Holodisks were melted to tabletops, any plants that existed simply did no longer, and all the metal surfaces now carried a heavily scorched char. Grey smoke lingered through the door way. Two shades of smoke closed in, mingling in the upper most reaches of the bulk heads. Aayla stepped into the silent room. Her foot didn’t click, but stepped into the black sludge of broken down material. A gust blew the fog past her shoulders and out the door! Blue lekku flapped from the robust gust.

Unhindered light illuminated the laboratory once again. A’ Sharad Hett stood from the floor, surrounded by scorched blackness except for a small circle. He stepped out slowly. His hand comforted Aayla’s shoulder in a gesture of appreciation. “Thank you for your quick thinking Aayla.”

The clone troopers were beyond impressed, but Aayla followed nearly in disbelief. “How..”

“Hazoc, what’s our sitrep? I can’t imagine we’ll be unnoticed for much longer.”

“Broken communications have been arriving in blips, but the Sightreh and Bly are eager to get us airborne. Doesn’t sound good Generals!”

“Sturdy your breath, let’s get to the surface, NOW!”

Troopers and Jedi both took large gasps, filling their lungs. They charged into the dark cloud and began the choking ascent from the facility lowest lab. Clones used filters to keep their pathway visible. No sight was needed for the Jedi; effortlessly leaping over obstacles. A gust of heat pressed against Hett’s face. It gave him the indication the burning gunship was just ahead. His boots sounded a familiar clacking as they all stepped through the bay. The next instant blinding desert light blazed their eyes!

Thunder boomed from the Regulator’s engines, lulling on the ground. The ships landing gear pressed heavily into the shifting sands. Commander Bly and a squad ran to those exiting the facility to steady their paces. Bolstering each other’s balance, clones aided one another up the Arquiten light cruiser’s steep boarding ramp.

Hett looked back to the gunship’s wreckage, “Commander Sightreh, be sure to handle that gunship before we leave. This operation was unavoidably messy.”

The officer’s voice was heavy, “Commander Bly has that handled. Debarkation should be immediate. There are incoming Separatist signals descending through the atmosphere as we speak!” As mentioned, Commander Bly approached the pair of Jedi holding a detonator, “Lets get out of here generals.” His thumb pressed the circular red button setting of a chain of explosions that tore through the gunship and upper hall of the entry hallway! A bloom of flames, smoke, and sand plumed in the air then settled into an ever growing crater. Commander Bly and Hazoc jogged up the ramp, activating its lift mechanisms. The commander’s voice shouted over the comm, “Captain, we are loaded and sec’d! Lift away!”

Aayla remained bewildered at Hett’s survival. Troops accepted that he did so because he was a Jedi, but Secura couldn’t put her finger on it. “Master Hett, how did you manage to… how did you survive?” The two made their way up the ramp and headed toward the bridge. Hett looked to Aayla’s concerned eyes, “An oasis lies at the core of each Jedi. No matter what our environment: a sandstorm, fleet of ships, a war; finding calm within focus determines your reality.” Aayla sighed, “I see that fire didn’t cleanse your knack for philosophy one bit!”

Hett stepped through the bulkhead, “Apparently not Knight Secura. My father, Sharad Hett, trained me to hone focus by pressing my meditations to coincide with the sandstorms Tatooine. Eventually I found how that fortitude was useful in insulating me from the barrage of stand.” Aayla was curious to learn more about Hett’s Oasis Calm. “..and the cleansing catalyst?”

“Much the same way. As for this mission Secura..”

“You were right master. It’s hard not to get sand in your boots during a maelstrom.. this war is tearing the galaxy apart. Even when separatists reach out for peace..” Aayla remained troubled by everything that had unfolded so rapidly during their mission to Aarognar. “This is going to be a pretty hefty report..”

Hett entered the bridge as the cruiser pressed beyond the atmosphere. The sky turned black; hues of blue and tan fading behind. “Captain, get us into hyperspace before we’re cut off and intercepted!” Sightreh tapped his navigation clone on the shoulder, “Already underway. Coordinates locked – take us in the lane, activate the hyperdrive!”

The Regulator soundlessly burst from its position into hyperspace! Behind trailed a cloud of sand particles where the ship was last. Separatist war ships lulled suddenly now that their prey was gone. Fast away on a track to a core world, heavily defended by the Republic. This quarry wasn’t worth the clash that following would bring, but Sanjay Rash was hard at work turning his hard luck around. 

__________________________ Back on Aarognar ______________________

A hologram illuminated Sanjay Rash’s face. Crammed in a small craft, the Onderron delegate turned to face the blue figure, none other than Dooku himself. “Soo Rash.. it seems you’ve begun turning this catastrophe to your advantage.”

“Those Jedi gave me everything I needed to. With the help of a few droids, I framed the facility destruction to look like a strike team penetrated the blockade, attacking a health laboratory. Tragically we lost Kindi, the Science Minister seeking to cure many different ailments. So, will you keep your word to supply my ascension to the throne of Onderron?”

“You have demonstrated cunning. Confederation resources will be allocated to your coup shortly, but if you FAIL me… your fall from such esteemed position shall be the least of your concerns.”

Rash’s voice quivered with both fear and eagerness, “Sometimes by losing a battle, you discover a new way to win the war. My cause will prevail.” Eyebrows of Dooku perked up, “..Your cause?”

“The the Separatist’s! Onderron will be brought into the fold of the Confederation. Thank you Count Dooku.”

Dooku’s gaze starred down at Rash before leaving him again in Darkness. He leaned back into his pilot’s chair watching the streaking stars of hyperspace. His eyes fell to his lap. In his hands, two ornate, silver shoulder plates. Behind him the body of his fallen comrade, Declan Bonteri.

Again the hologram was activated. A tall, slender woman moved into the message holding a data pad. Her voice was soft, “What a surprise Sanjay! Lux just left for the academy. I wasn’t expecting an update from the delegation so soon after your leave.”

“Apologies for the unexpected timing Senator Bonteri, but it could not wait…” Rash’s voice cracked.

“What’s wrong? What’s happened?!” Her kind concern skyrocketed!

“I’m sorry Mina.. He was felled during a Republic incursion, but I assure you…We WILL have retribution!”
Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 9/25/15
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Title: Re: Star Wars Writings / Oasis Calm --- 9/25/15
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