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Light and Darkness
« on: May 15, 2010, 08:04:47 AM »
                                                                                                                  Intro
                                                                                              The planet Drakutar moments before order 66.
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Emperor Palpatine: "Commander Fi, the time has come execute order 66." 

Commander Fi: It will be done my lord.

Commander Fi pulled out his comlink.

Commander Fi: "Get me three firestorm troopers! Order 66 has been issued!"

*Large explosions.*

Jedi Master Kro-Magn: "Get me medic!"

Commander Fi and his firestorm troopers rushed over to the Jedi master.

Master Kro-Magn: "Don't just stand there get me a medic!"

Commander Fi pulled his blaster out of it's holster.

Master Kro-Magn: "What are you doing?"

The firestorm troopers took aim at the Jedi master.

Commander Fi: "On my orders."

The firestorm troopers let loose deadly flames from their weapons, causing a slow and painful death.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #1 on: May 15, 2010, 08:31:10 AM »
Nice prelude!  Can't wait to read more!
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Part two of Light and Darkness
« Reply #2 on: May 15, 2010, 11:58:34 AM »
                                                                                                                                 Two days later
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Lord Vader: Have you found the padawan yet commander. I am growing impatience.

Commander Fi: no we have not lord Vader. My best men are on the case.

lord Vader: I do not except failure commander.

Commander Fi: I will no- 

 Lord Vader's  red saber is stabbed into Commander Fis chest.

Lord Vader: you will not be so lucky next time.

Darth Vader force pushes Commander Fi into a group of medics.

Lord Vader: put him in a bacta tank. Bring me  Commander Drachs immediately.

Clone trooper: he is on his way my lord.

Commander Dracks rushes into Darth Vaders tent.

Commander Dracks: you summoned me my lord.

Lord Vader: I assume you have heard about Commander Fi. he was a disappointment to me I hope you will not be the same.

Commander Dracks: Yes sir.

Lord Vader: I will join you in the hunt. This padawan may be formidable opponent.

commander Dracks: Yes sir.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #3 on: May 15, 2010, 12:02:16 PM »
                                                                                                 big thanks to wraithnine for coming up with the name Dracks.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #4 on: May 15, 2010, 12:11:39 PM »
Clone trooper it takes place two days after order 66.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #5 on: May 15, 2010, 01:13:45 PM »
part 3 is being written right now.
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part three of Light and Darkness
« Reply #6 on: May 15, 2010, 01:20:57 PM »
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An imperial drop shuttle glides right above the trees of the planet Drakutar.

Lord Vader: we are nearing the drop site commander are you ready to launch.

Commander Dracks: I am my lord.

A large explosion knocks both me off balance.

Clone pilot: We're hit. i can't get this ship to go-

Another explosion kills the pilot.

Lord Vader: Time to drop Commander.

Darth Vader and Commander Dracks jump from the burning vessel and into the forest below.

Commander Dracks: What was that sir.

Darth Vader levitates a rock.

Lord Vader: That was the power of a strong force user.
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #7 on: May 15, 2010, 01:21:29 PM »
what an excellent read !
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #8 on: May 15, 2010, 01:25:51 PM »
Quote from: wraithnine on May 15, 2010, 01:21:29 PM
what an excellent read !

Thanks waithnine. I'm glad people like it.
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part four Light and Darkness
« Reply #9 on: May 15, 2010, 02:20:03 PM »
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Lord Vader: We are getting close. I feel the dark side. Anger, hate  an-   

A tree rips itself  from the ground!

Commander Dracks: Look out!

Darth Vader lifts a hand and the tree shatters.

Lord Vader: We are nearing the force user.  Failure could me death for us both.

Twin spears fly towards the armored men. Darth Vader is quick to shatters them.

Lord Vader: I can feel the hate. It fills the air.

A yellow lighsaber glows bright. Both men are surprised to see a child no older than ten holding the end of the saber.

Commander Dracks: Whats you name kid.

Lord Vader: careful commander this child may-

Twenty spears shoot from the darkness. Each one is aim for the Commander. Not even lord Vader could stop them all. three of them hit Dracks in the leg.

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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #10 on: May 15, 2010, 02:51:07 PM »
am really enjoying this :)
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #11 on: May 15, 2010, 02:53:59 PM »
wow really cool!
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #12 on: May 15, 2010, 03:02:52 PM »
THANKS TO EVERY ONE WHO HAS ENJOYED THE LIGHT AND DARK NOVEL.
I WILL START PART 5 RIGHT NOW.
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part 5 Light and Darkness
« Reply #13 on: May 15, 2010, 04:26:56 PM »
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Lord Vader: what is your name?

Dark force user: Darth Magnon. You will soon fear that name.

Lord Vader: Has the humble padawan fallen so far. I thought jedi resisted the dark side.

Darth Magnon: Only the weak choose the light. The strong follow the dark path.

Darth Vader  ignites his red saber.

Darth Magnon: So be it Vader.

Darth Vader slashes the youth in two. He turns to leave.

Darth Magnon: Hello Vader.

Darth Vader turns to see Darth Megnon standing there with out a scratch.

Darth Megnon: You thought it would be that easy. Shame-

Darth Magnon reaches into the darkness and pulls out a clone helmet!

Darth Magnon: i was hoping for a better toy.

The helmet shatters. 

 
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Re: Light and Darkness
« Reply #14 on: May 15, 2010, 04:33:30 PM »
sweeeet!
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