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Title: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: hangarbay94 on June 12, 2012, 06:39:28 AM
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Did anyone spot the Millennium Falcon?
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: wheeljack on June 12, 2012, 10:02:12 AM
those TIE fighters are cool
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: jlw515 on June 12, 2012, 11:58:01 AM
16 views and only 1 reply???? Come on folks!!!!

Jules, just echoing what I've already said over at Yakface, but man your photonovel is just brilliantly stunning. I couldn't imagine the number of layers there are to each picture. What folks don't understand is that putting together a photo of a space battle, if the image you are using doesn't already have (say for example) "after burner glow," then all of that stuff has to be added. All the glows on the walls, floors, etc. on interior shots - that all has to be layered into the shot if it's not already there in the source material.

So, I just couldn't imagine how much time you spend on a chapter - just the visuals; not including working out the dialogue!!

I really like the Imperial base being hidden in the cloud/midst. It reminds me of the Sci-Fi Battlestar Galactica premier where there was an outpost inside some sort of cloud.

Excellent work, great beginning to a new series.

Jason
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: hangarbay94 on June 12, 2012, 12:29:44 PM
Jason, thanks for your comment of support.

Yes while it is true that some images have over 100 layers and shapes I often copy and re-angle the same layer several times. For example the space battle images where there is debris and explosions everywhere have only a few basic elements, each one is copied, re sized
, re coloured and adjusted to make them look different, so an image that looks really complex took only a few minutes to create.

Digital artists who make the Clone Wars TV  show also use the same trick, re using room sets and textures time and time again in different episodes...

Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: jlw515 on June 12, 2012, 12:34:06 PM
Jason, thanks for your comment of support.

Yes while it is true that some images have over 100 layers and shapes I often copy and re-angle the same layer several times. For example the space battle images where there is debris and explosions everywhere have only a few basic elements, each one is copied, re sized
, re coloured and adjusted to make them look different, so an image that looks really complex took only a few minutes to create.

Digital artists who make the Clone Wars TV  show also use the same trick, re using room sets and textures time and time again in different episodes...



Glad there is a "trick to the trade"! There so many elements to your photos, it's just incredible! Like when the X-Wings come out of hyperspace and see all the carnage, you've got these explosions and ship pieces, and then in the middle is this blurred image of some sort of freighter which looks like it's moving across the picture. Just amazing. I am just beginning to understand a lot of this layering stuff with the chapter I'm currently working on.

Jason
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: hangarbay94 on June 12, 2012, 12:36:59 PM
Jason, once you start working with layers the fun really begins...the image you mentioned has two main elements or layers, those two layers have been reshaped and moved to make it look like a far more complex image. Also there are only two explosions, again I've reshaped and copied them to fill out the image. Those same layers are used in all of the accompanying images. The whole sequence of panels took around 6 hours.

If you ever need resource images I've got a massive library... just pm me!

J
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: JediMerc on June 12, 2012, 01:47:02 PM
Great chapter!  Caught the MF attached to the Nebulon-B in one of the early frames...love that new TIE...what're you going to call that one?

Interesting to see how much digital layering goes into the production of your work; makes it that much more impressive to understand how time-consuming this is and how patient you have to be.  I most certainly appreciate your work!
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: hangarbay94 on June 12, 2012, 01:51:37 PM
Great chapter!  Caught the MF attached to the Nebulon-B in one of the early frames...love that new TIE...what're you going to call that one?

Well done for spotting.the falcon! I had this picture of Lando and Chewie getting ready to leave the fleet as that image was coming together.

The tie is called the Tie Experimental X1, code named Bizarro by the Alliance... It's the first mass produced droid fighter since the Clone Wars, It packs a high powered Turbo Laser, quad ion drives a remote triggered hyperdrive and a powerful droid brain. I'll surely be adding it to the craft database in the resource forum.

I am glad you are enjoying the story and images, I certainly had a lot of fun creating this chapter.
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: Tamer on June 12, 2012, 02:44:22 PM
Oh yeah, its a good day when a new chapter is posted. I am gonna take some time this evening to sit down and read this and give a proper reply. Thanks for sharing this Jules!
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: Luke Sprywalker on June 13, 2012, 07:59:19 AM
Another amazing chapter in this epic saga! Jules, you are really creating some amazing pages with these latast chapters. They just keep getting better and better! Amazing artistry and story telling! Thanks so much for all the time and effort you have put into this project! Thanks for sharing!
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: hangarbay94 on June 13, 2012, 08:02:57 AM
Thanks Master Spry!

I really enjoyed putting this chapter together, I am glad you enjoyed it too!

Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: BL4CK5H33P on June 13, 2012, 08:33:34 AM
Thank you Jules for this... it is just awe-inspiring storytelling... I thank the maker for folks like you, who push this hobby into the realm of art... this is fandom @ it's finest :)
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: hangarbay94 on June 13, 2012, 08:38:05 AM
Thank you Jules for this... it is just awe-inspiring storytelling... I thank the maker for folks like you, who push this hobby into the realm of art... this is fandom @ it's finest :)

BL4CK5H33P, thanks so much for your wonderful comment, when I started making photo novels it was the story telling that I was most fearful of getting wrong. I am glad you enjoyed this episode! Like I said before this one was probably the most fun putting together, so it's good to know others enjoy it too!
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: Art deWhill on June 13, 2012, 08:55:31 AM
just excellent! as said in another thread I so much love your way of visualisation, how you use light, point-of-views, out-of-focus .... if this would be a printed novel I would buy it!
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: CloneCrazy on June 13, 2012, 12:57:10 PM
So very cool!!! Even more great work Jules  0/
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: smeagol92055 on June 13, 2012, 01:15:41 PM
Every time you post a chapter, I wonder how you could possibly top the previous one.

The answer?  Just like this.
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: Tamer on June 13, 2012, 05:34:43 PM
Jules, I have had a great after dinner movie with your great new chapter with my friends on vacation. Lets just say they are quite amazed that one fan put this all together. They thought it was a professional comic done by the folks who made Star Wars. Thats fine praise.

That being said, I did see the falcon right when Rancor squadron was to go to the briefing room. Loved it. I also thought that new TIE was off the charts. I didn't know what new mod could be made with one, but yours was excellent.

I also noticed the thanks at the bottom of the frame and think we can't do enough to support this great work. I think I look forward to this more than I look forward to some of the newer sci fi movies I want to see. Thanks once again for sharing this and I just can't wait to see more and how Rancor Squadron takes on these new TIEs.
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: Phatty on June 13, 2012, 07:52:45 PM
Jules, a very engaging story!  The art was excellent, as always, but there was an element that seemed different and more lifelike, though I can't place exactly what it is.  I think it is the pilots eye shields, but I can't place it.  Very sharp!  The story did a good job of balancing between scenarios and kept me on the edge of my seat as I read frame to frame.  You do so excel at these!
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: wraithnine on June 13, 2012, 10:17:06 PM
man! ive only just read it(been very ill) absolutly awesome !! loved every panel  ,i still say you could do the X-wing novels mate ,and you just proved it! 
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: YakFace on June 14, 2012, 12:07:31 AM
Wow so cool that you use your custom figures for this awesome comic! Really admire your photoshop skills, I use photoshop for illustration and I can tell you its not "real" easy. You must have a ton of source materials, some of your shots look like dioramas......so good. ;D
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: hangarbay94 on June 14, 2012, 02:03:13 AM
Everyone's feedback is so cool!

As I mentioned before, I am having so much fun creating this series, I'm really glad that you guys are enjoying the artwork and story.

Just a little update, I'm in the process of publishing this as a web-comic in Flip-Book format, so that people can read this like a comic on their computers, iphones and tablet computers. I'm just putting the artwork together for the main cover and backgrounds and should have the whole thing ready to go in a couple of weeks.

Luv ya all!

Jules

Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: CloneSniper78 on June 17, 2012, 11:19:37 AM
Everyone's feedback is so cool!

As I mentioned before, I am having so much fun creating this series, I'm really glad that you guys are enjoying the artwork and story.

Just a little update, I'm in the process of publishing this as a web-comic in Flip-Book format, so that people can read this like a comic on their computers, iphones and tablet computers. I'm just putting the artwork together for the main cover and backgrounds and should have the whole thing ready to go in a couple of weeks.

Luv ya all!

Jules


That's great news!! I hope you can become famous so I can tell people I know you. But seriously, your work is unbelievable and you're already famous in my book. Happy Father's Day! too. I don't know about England, but today is Father's Day in America.
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: hangarbay94 on June 17, 2012, 11:34:12 AM
Cheers CS79, yes it is Fathers Day today ... but I've been camping in a wet boggy field on a Cubs and Fathers weekend so I didn't get the traditional lie in and breakfast in bed....

And thank you for leaving such a great comment.

Jules
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: Spookymufu on June 17, 2012, 01:28:08 PM
Jules, sorry I took this long to comment, but as usual, great work, as you know, I love your style! I wish we lived closer so I could watch you put this together in person, just awesome work!
Title: Re: X-WING ALLIANCE - Chapter 22 - "Rise of the Veiled Peril"
Post by: r1bb1t on July 06, 2012, 09:06:23 AM
Jules, this is the coolest thing since Cool came to Coolsville. I can't begin to fathom the effort that went into this. You, sir, are a GOD! There are just so many innovative things going on here. I'm sure that it's safe to say all of us will be mentioning your name to our grandchildren one day. You are legendary!