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Part 17 Shadow Squadron
« Reply #45 on: June 21, 2010, 10:13:25 AM »
                                                                                                           Inside Kad's LAAT
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The LAAT dodges blaster fire from the many AT-ATs!

Kad: (pointing at a abandon barrack) "Drop us off there."

Pilot: "Sir that place could be crawling with Stormtroopers."

Kad: "Just land there!"

Pilot: "Yes sir."

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                                                                                                          On the ground

Kad stabs  a Stormtrooper.

Kad: "Keep moving! we have to place those thermal detonators!"

Jinx squad places the detonators on the support towers!

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 Kad: "We got less than one minute to get out of here !"

Stormtroopers try to block their path but fail to stop Kad and his lightsaber!

Kad: "We are almost there!"

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The first of the detonators exploded! The roof of the barrack starts to lean inwards!

A Clone trooper his hit by some falling rubble!

Clone Trooper: "Leave with out me!"

Kad nods.

More falling rubble hits more of the clone troopers!

Finally the group reaches the LAAT!

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                                                                                                                Inside Vader escape pod         
           
Lord Vader: "Soon all of the reble clone troopers will be destroyed my master!"
 
Emperor Palpatine: "Has our spy been found?"

Lord Vader: "We have not heard of him since he tried to kill Salvo."

Emperor Palpatine: "This is a disapontment."
 
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #46 on: June 22, 2010, 05:39:45 PM »
COOL!
As do I. It is our lot in life, Master. Shall we find something to kill to cheer us up?
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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #47 on: June 22, 2010, 10:17:33 PM »
great chapter man!

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #48 on: June 22, 2010, 11:47:21 PM »
I'm really liking this, the whole concept is superb. Keep it up!

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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #49 on: June 23, 2010, 02:46:37 PM »
COOL!
great chapter man!
I'm really liking this, the whole concept is superb. Keep it up!

thank you all for support. I will start writing part 18 soon

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Part 18 Shadow Squadron
« Reply #50 on: June 24, 2010, 04:07:08 PM »
                                                                           Inside Salvo’s personnel Chambers
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Salvo: “Kad and his entire group are dead!”

Ordo sits there. His expression is plain but Salvo can see that he is trying to break the rope that holds him there.

Ordo: “I hate you Salvo!”

Salvo: “You have no one to blame but yourself!”

The rope holding Ordo breaks! 

Ordo charges at Salvo and grabs his throat!

Ordo: “None of this would have happened if it wasn’t for you!”

Salvo knees Ordo in the stomach!

Salvo: “You have done this to yourself!”

Salvo stabs Ordo in the chest!

Ordo: (punching Salvo in the face) “This is for Jax!”

The knife is still in Ordo’s chest. Salvo trys to grab the knife but is kneed in the face by Ordo!

Ordo: (pulling out the knife) “And that was for Kad!”

The blood rushes out of Ordo’s wound!

Ordo relentlessly tries to stab Salvo!

Soon Salvo is covered in Ordo blood!

Ordo: “You’re not worth it!” (Ordo stabs himself in the heart)

The body falls at Salvo’s feet!

Head Clone trooper: “Sir we have less than ten minutes!”

Salvo walks towards an AT-TE that is mostly buried!

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Kad hides in his LAAT knowing that the end is near!

That detonator had gone off too early! It had killed everyone but him!

Kad: “I hope I survive this!”

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The Star Destroyer hit the ground of the clone base! All who are not in a metal shelter are vaporized!

Salvo, Kad and a few others were the only ones to survive!



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Re: Shadow Squadron
« Reply #51 on: June 24, 2010, 04:08:52 PM »
Please Vote !

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Re: Shadow Squadron final Part 18 Added
« Reply #52 on: June 30, 2010, 05:18:56 PM »
Gah!  I see what I have been missing!  I usualy wait untill something is finished to read it!  my favorite part was when they find that salva survived the lightsaber slice.  "my leg would explode too"  lol
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Re: Shadow Squadron final Part 18 Added
« Reply #53 on: June 30, 2010, 07:08:54 PM »
i thought this was a great story!

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Re: Shadow Squadron final Part 18 Added
« Reply #54 on: June 30, 2010, 10:48:56 PM »
this are awesome chapters man! ;D ;D ;D