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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #30 on: May 31, 2010, 08:23:24 AM »
Part 11?!

Hak: Gunship Dragon, this is Hak. We have the prisoner and need a ride to the Republic Cruiser[ i]Godspeed[/i].

Wake (The pilot): Roger that!

Hak: Alright. It'll be a little while til the gunship gets here. Rest if you can.

Flicker: Good! I'm getting tired.

Sonny: So Negi was it? If you're a mage, how were you captured?

Negi: Well, if I use to much magic, I lose consciousness. I used a powerful spell to take down a Separatist Tank Patrol and I fainted after it was destroyed. A Battle Droid group found me in my Republic Commando form and took me prisoner.

Sonny: Oh.

Blitz: Sonny, want some water?

Sonny: Oh sure. *Takes of helmet and drinks some water*

Negi: Well, I have a question for all of you. How did all of you get those odd names?

Hak: Well, nicknames are based on personality or skills. I'm the team's technician, so they call me Hak because of my skill in hacking computers. Sonny, on the other hand, was named Sonny by our training officer, so we just started calling him that. Blitz, our sniper, is named after lighting warfare. That's what it looks like when he enters the battle.
Flicker... um, why are you called Flicker?

Flicker: I like to flick things.

All: Oh.

Flicker: Yeah. anyways, the gunships here! Let's go!

*All climb on board the gunship and head for the Godspeed*

On the Godspeed...

Clone: Welcome aboard! I suggest the mission was a success Gamma Squad?

Sonny: Err, in a way it was succesful.

Clone: What do you mean?

Flicker: He means this. *Steps out of the way to reveal Negi*

Clone: What do you mean in a way? That's a commando.

Hak: What? *Turns around to see Negi in his 18 year old form*

Negi: Well, I'm not really a clone. I'm Republic agent Nagi Springfield.

Clone: Good to meet you! Oh, I gotta go.

Nagi(Really Negi): Bye!

Blitz: Why did you do that?

Nagi: No one can know that I'm ten year old Negi Springfield, you have to call me Nagi. I'm gonna stay in this form for a while and change back to my normal self every now and then. Got it?

All: Okay Nagi.

Nagi: Good now let's go to the mess hall. I'm starving!

*Gamma Squad goes to the mess hall and pick out some food*

Nagi: This food isn't so bad.

Blitz: Who said it was bad?

Nagi: A few clones outside the mess hall.

*A sudden explosion rattles throughout the ship*

Clone officer (over loudspeaker): Alert! Seperatist ships incoming! All pilots to your fighters.

Nagi: Oh, that's my cue. I need to go.

Flicker: Wait a minute, you're a mage, a Republic agent, and you're a pilot?

Sonny: You're good at alot of things aren't ya Nagi?

Nagi: I guess. I have to get to the hangar fast!

Blitz: Sonny. You've started talking again!

Sonny: Huh?

Hak: You haven't been talking lately, and since Neg- I mean Nagi came along, you've started talking more.

Sonny: I.. I guess I have.

Meanwhile...

Clone engineer: Sir! Your ship is all ready!

Nagi: Thank you.

*Nagi climbs into the cockpit*

Ghoul leader: All Ghoul squadron fighters report in!

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Three standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Six standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Nine Standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Seven standing by.

Nagi: Ghoul Ten standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Thirteen standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Two standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Four Standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Eight standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Twelve standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Sixteen standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Eleven standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Five standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Fourteen standing by.

Clone Pilot: Ghoul Fifteen standing by.

Ghoul Leader: All fighters, go to attack formations! We need to give cover for our Y-Wing bombers.

All: Yes sir!


TO BE CONTINUED, AMIGO!
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #31 on: May 31, 2010, 08:42:23 AM »
great read!
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #32 on: June 05, 2010, 08:32:03 AM »
This story is gonna be on hold for a little while. I gotta think of new ideas.
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #33 on: June 05, 2010, 03:03:24 PM »
IN97

You have done really well so far! Writing a story is not easy and a break can be a good thing. I hope you do come back to this story though!

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #34 on: June 11, 2010, 01:10:09 PM »
I'm Back! *Suspensful music plays*

Gamma Squad Part 12?

Ghoul Leader: Alright boys! We got vultures incoming!

*Vulture droids flie towards Ghoul Squadron*

Ghoul 6: There's to many of them!

Ghoul Leader: Ghoul 6, cut the chatter!

Ghoul 3: Drinks are on me boys!

Ghoul 4: Sounds good.

*The V-19 starfighters and thr Vulture droids meet, shots are flying everywhere, but Republic Agent Nagi Springfield stays calm*

Nagi: Ghoul 8,  stick with me.

Ghoul 8: Got it!

Nagi: You take the two on the right, I'll take the leader!

*Ghoul 8 opens fire on the two Vultures and destroys them*

Ghoul 8: Yeah!

Nagi: Come on... come on... *Vulture enters target area* Gotcha! *Fires lazer cannons and destroys the vulture*

Ghoul 15: I've got three on my tail!

Nagi: 15, calm down, I'm coming! *Flies towards 15* Suck this ya clankers! *Shoots down the vultures*

Ghoul 15: Thanks Ghoul 10!

Nagi: Anytime!

*The battle progresses*

Ghoul Leader: Remaining wings report in.

Ghoul 2: Ghoul 2 standing by.

Ghoul 3: Ghoul 3, standing by!

Ghoul 8: Ghoul 8 standing by!

Nagi: Ghoul 10, standing by!

Ghoul 16: Ghoul 16, standing by.

Ghoul Leader: Okay! Here's the situation. Our Y-wing bombers are space dust. There's one Seppie cruiser left. We're gonna have to take it down ourselves. Ghoul 16, Ghoul 2, you're with me. Ghoul 10, 8, and 3, you'll cover us from fighters. Got it?

All: Got it Ghoul Leader!

Ghoul Leader: Alright, let's go!

*Ghoul Leader's team flies towards the enemy cruiser, but before they even make it to the cruiser, Ghoul 16 gets shot down*

Ghoul Leader: Ghoul 10, what was that?!

Nagi: I see a three fighter squadron two vultures, one Mankvim-814 Light Interceptor.

Ghoul Leader: Wait, what color is it?

Nagi: Well, most of these fighters are blue, but this one is black!

Ghoul Leader: Oh no! That's... that's...

Nagi: That's who?!

Ghoul Leader: Jark Kellic, the Black Baron!

Nagi: What!

Kellic: Ah, it's good to see that some people know my name! Prepare to be pulverized! *Fires lazer cannons*

Ghoul 2: I'm hit! *His fighter explodes*

Ghoul Leader: Nagi! Prepare you're attack run! I'm as good as gone! Now, g-ahhh! *His fighter explodes*

Nagi: Okay, we're going in!

Ghoul 8: But what about the Baron?

Nagi: I'll worry about the Baron you take care of that cruiser!

Ghoul 3: Alright, let's go!

* The V-19 Torrents fly towards the cruiser*

Ghoul 3: The Baron's right behind us!

Kellic: Take care of them.

*The vulture droids fire on Ghoul 3 and 8*

Nagi: You two pull out!

Ghoul 3: But-

Nagi: You heard me! PULL... OUT!

*Ghoul 3 and 8 pull out*

Kellic: Let them go.

Nagi: I just have to take down the engines and that should do it.

Kellic: Are you ready to die Nagi Springfield?

Nagi: Almost there... almost there.

Kellic: Goodbye Nagi!

Nagi: Now! *Turns around and fires at the Black Baron and his Squad*

Kellic: What! Ahh! *Gets hit and goes flying, the two vultures explode* You haven't heard the last of me, Nagi Springfield! I will have my revenge! *Jumps into hyperspace*

Ghoul 3 and 8: Need some help sir?

Nagi: Yeah! Let's blow this thing and go home!

*Nagi and the rest of Ghoul Squadron destroyed the engines of the Seperatist cruiser, then the Republic Cruisers came and finished it off, Nagi, Wheel *Ghoul 3* and Zero *Ghoul 8*  returned to the Godspeed as heroes.

TO BE CONTINUED!
« Last Edit: June 13, 2010, 03:57:47 PM by Irish Ninja 97 »
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #35 on: June 11, 2010, 10:41:18 PM »
nice job

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #36 on: June 14, 2010, 11:33:23 AM »
Gamma Squad Part 13! WOW! I made it pretty far.

CC-1475: Gamma Squad, you are on a search-and-rescue mission. The prisoner, or should I say, Prisoner 627 is located in a Separatist Prison in the eastern hemisphere of the planet Taanab. Also, we're positive it is a clone.
CC-1475 out.

*Gunship drops off Gamma Squad*

Hak: Alright. Everyone okay?

Flicker: I'm good.

Sonny: Me too.

Blitz: I'm fine.

Hak: Nagi?

Nagi: *Vomiting by a tree* I'm sorry, I'm not very used to air travel! But, I'm OK!

Hak: Alright then. Let's go!

*Squad heads towards the base*

Blitz: No Seppie patrols? This is getting suspicious.

Sonny: Well, maybe the people who built the prison didn't think anyone could break in.

Blitz: What makes you think that?

Sonny: Look over there.

Blitz: *Sees a heavily fortified prison base* Osiik!

Flicker: We're dead. There! I said it. We're dead!

Hak: Come on guys. We're Gamma Squad! We can make it through anything. Strength comes from numbers and preparation. We're a four man and one kid squad.

Nagi: Hey!

Hak: Shut up Nagi! Now, where was I, oh yes! We also have the element of surprise.

Sonny: He's got a point there.

Hak: So, come on. Let's go down there and teach those clankers who's boss!

All: Yeah!

Hak: Let's go Gamma Squad!

*All run towards the prison unseen*

Sonny: I'll set a charge! *sets a charge*

Hak: Fire in the hole! *charge explodes*

*Gamma squad sees 10 Magna Guards, 50 B-1 Battle Droids, 25 Super Battle Droids, 5 Droidekas, and One General Grievous*

Gamma Squad: Oh, crap!

Grievous: Kill them all!

*Blaster bolts start flying everywhere*

Hak: Sonny! Anti-Armor...NOW!

Sonny: Got it! *Sets up anti-armor* Suck this! *Opens fire*

Hak: Flicker! You have the Turret right?

Flicker: Yeah!

Hak: Set it up!

Flicker: *Sets up turret* Suck Lazer! *Opens fire*

Nagi: *Activates a lightsaber*

Flicker: Don't tell me you're a Jedi, too!

Nagi: Oh, I'm not. I built this one. You see, I found myself on-

Flicker: Just shut up and use it!

Nagi: OK! Yahhhh! *Runs towards a MagnaGuard and Cuts it in half*

Droid: Wah! A Jedi!

MagnaGuard: We'll take care of this!

Nagi: Uh-oh! *MagnaGuards surround him* Please work, please work, please work...Series Fulguriales! *Lightning appears on the lightsaber* Yahh! *Spins and eradicates the MagnaGuards* Who! That was fun.

Grievous: Hold your fire! *Droids stop firing except one* I said hold your fire! *Droid keeps on firing*

Nagi: *Pulls out pistol and blows the droid's head off*

Grievous: Thank you. Now, Nagi Springfield, I challenge you to a Lightsaber duel. If you accept, You might die but your squad might live. If you reject, you will all die.

Nagi: I accept. But, If I defeat you, I get prisoner 627 and we all leave without your droids firing on us. If you defeat me, you will kill us all.

Grievous: Fine. *Pulls out two lightsabers and activates them* Ready to add your lightsaber to my collection, Nagi Springfield?

A duel of epic proportions! The cyborg General Grievous versus the Republic Agent Negi, or should I say Nagi, Springfield! Will Nagi win and take prisoner 627? Will he be defeated by the battle hardened, war torn General Grievous? Will this be Gamma Squad's final mission?Tune in next time on Gamma Squad!
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #37 on: June 14, 2010, 11:44:13 AM »
This is a great story... I really like your writing style, it's got humour, excitement and you build tensionreally well...

Great so far! Oh and please let Nagi win!

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #38 on: June 14, 2010, 01:11:21 PM »
This is it! Ladies and Gentlemen, boys and girls, the duel between Nagi and Greivous!

Part 14!

Grievous: Ready to die?

Nagi: I don't think so. *Activates saber*

Grievous: Yah! *Swings lightsabers*

Nagi: *Blocks both lightsabers*

Grievous: *Gets back and swings at Nagi*

Nagi: *Blocks the lightsaber swings and fights Grievous back*

Grievous: *Blocks Nagi's Attacks*

Nagi: *Grievous locks sabers with him. While the saber lock is still going on, Nagi steals one of Grievous' lightsabers*

Grievous: Oh! You want to play it like that? Fine. *Grievous' arms separate and he pulls out two more lightsabers, making a total of four lightsabers!*

Nagi: This'll be fun.

Grievous: You're quite the one for words aren't you? Shame, your parents were just like that. Of course, before I killed them!

Nagi: Just shut up and fight me!

Grievous: Very well. Hah! *Lunges towards Nagi*

Nagi: *Lunges towards Grievous and the fight commences*

Grievous: *Swings lightsabers at Nagi, aiming to kill*

Nagi: *Blocks the lightsabers except for one. The lightsaber cuts his face and he falls to the ground*

Grievous: Pathetic fool. Hahahahahaha. You knew you couldn't defeat me! Now, *Picks up Nagi by the throat* prepare to die!

Nagi: Hehehehe........hehehehehehe........hahahahahahahahaha!

Grievous: What is it!?

Nagi: Hehehe... General Grievous... you have just defeated yourself.

Grievous: What!?

Nagi: *Puts his hand to Grievous' chest* Jovis... Tempestas...

Grievous: What!? No! Impossible!

Nagi: FULGURIENS! (Jovis Tempestas Fulguriens means "Jupiter's Storm of Thunder" in Latin)

*Thunder and Lightning come out of Nagi's hand and blow away General Grievous*

Grievous: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Grievous: *Gets up* Nagi... Springfield... you haven't seen the last of me! *Limps to his starfighter,enters the cockpit, and takes off*

Hak: Nagi! Good job! That spell took down not only Grievous, but the entire droid platoon as well!

Nagi: Thanks.

Sonny: Nagi that was awesome!

Blitz: That was a good fireworks show.

Flicker: I wish I could do that!

Nagi: Thanks. But what about 6...2...7... uhh. *Faints*

Flicker: Ahh, crap. He fainted.

Hak: Flicker, could you stay with him while we go get 627?

Flicker: Yeah.

*Blitz, Sonny, and Hak walk towards 627's cell*

Hak: Sonny. You know what to do.

Sonny: Yup. *Sets a charge*

Hak: Fire in the hole! *Charge explodes*

627: Who's there?

Hak: We're from the Republic.

627: I can't see you. The smoke is thick.

*The smoke fades*

Hak: Alright we see y-*gasp*

Blitz: Wha?

Sonny: S...S...Stark?

Stark: Hello boys. Long time, no see!

Stark was prisoner 627? But he died on Dantooine! Apparently not. How did he survive? If you want that question answered, tune in for part 15 of Gamma Squad!

« Last Edit: June 14, 2010, 01:19:14 PM by Irish Ninja 97 »
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #39 on: June 14, 2010, 02:20:08 PM »
awesome duel !
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #40 on: June 14, 2010, 03:57:32 PM »
NIIIIICE!

Great fight scene, this is such a great piece of creative work, thanks so much for making such a tremendous effort.

I have highlighted everyone's work here on the forum by posting a link here on the Front Page, I also gave you a mantion Irish Ninja.

Really looking forward to the next part!

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #41 on: June 14, 2010, 04:32:15 PM »
Wraith9: Thanks  :)

HB94: I saw the front page. Thanks for mentioning me! :)

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #42 on: June 14, 2010, 06:34:02 PM »
Gamma Squad Episode...I-I mean Part 15!
 
*Gamma Squad surrounds Stark*

Stark: Now, I probably know what you are all thinking about : How did I survive?.

Hak: Yes sir. How did you survive?

Stark: Well, after the base exploded, I was barely alive. I started trying to crawl away from the base's rubble, but I fainted after a few inches. But before I went faint, through my blurred vision, I saw a boy running towards me. Then I fainted. I awoke to the soothing sound of a young woman's voice. I was in a house on Dantooine. I saw the woman and the boy who found me. I was confused. I asked where I was and what had happened. The woman said that her brother found me unconscious and that he brought me to his house. The woman said that I had major burns all over my body, but that the boy healed most of them. I asked her what her name was. She said her name was Nekane and that her brother was named Negi.

Sonny: Negi?

Stark: Yes, Negi.

Blitz: Negi Springfield?

Stark: How did you know?

Nagi: Because I'm right here Stark! *Snaps his fingers and transforms into his ten-year-old form*

Stark: Negi! Where were you? Nekane was worried.

Negi: Well, I took some of the credits I had and used it to have a trader bring me to Coruscant. When I got there, I used magic to transform into my eighteen-year-old form and I applied for a job as a Republic Agent.

Stark: Well, when I got better, Nekane told me to look for you! I heard that the trader who brought you to Coruscant stopped by Taanab so I went there. Next thing I knew, droids ambushed me and took me prisoner.

Negi: Well, I'm sorry. But, after hearing your stories about you in the battlefield, I told myself "I want to be just like Stark," so that's what I did!

Stark: Negi you don't understand! Nekane is worried about you!

Negi: Relax! I sent her a message via holo-communicator. She said that I had to be careful in the battles I would participate in.

Stark: Fine. Well, now you all know how I survived. Let's get the heck outta here!

*Squad leaves the prison and goes back to the drop off zone*

Hak: Gunship Fulcrum, we are at the drop off site. We have 627 and we are requesting pick up.

Pilot: Roger that! We're headed your way! Out.

*After a few minutes, the gunship appears*

Hak: Gunship Fulcrum, I see ya! Come on down.

Pilot: Roger that!

Blitz: Hak! Over there!

Hak: What? *Sees to Vulture droids tailing the gunship* Gunship Fulcrum pull out! I repeat: pull out! You have two Vultures on your tail!

Pilot: OK. We're pulling out! Oh no! We're to late! *Vulture droids shoot at gunship* Ahhh! *Gunship Explodes*

Stark: Looks like we're gonna have to find another way off of this planet.


It seems as though Separatist ships have entered Taanab space! Will Gamma squad make there way to Taanab space with another ship in time to help the Republic Cruisers Godspeed, Justice, and Serenity? Tune in next time on episode-I mean part 16 of Gamma Squad!
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #43 on: June 14, 2010, 07:15:52 PM »
i'm a bit confused stark is... ?

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #44 on: June 14, 2010, 08:41:35 PM »
Commander Charlie: Yes he's alive.
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