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Gamma Squad
« on: May 10, 2010, 08:13:07 PM »
Here's part 1  of a new story revolving around a squad of commandos named Gamma Squad. Hope you enjoy! :P

Clone Commander: This is CC-1475. Gamma Squad, there are core ships set up in this sector. You will be destroying one of them while all the other clone soldiers are out on the front. Here’s the plan. All of you will sneak in the core ship, find its reactor, set a charge, and get out of there. Delta Squad should come in a gunship to pick you up.
Out.(Gunship drops of Gamma Squad, Stark, the squad’s leader, speaks to its other members Hak, Sonny, and Blitz)               
Stark: All right boys, the core ship is right over this canyon.

Hak: Got it sir.

Sonny: Yes sir.

Blitz: Got it, 57.

Stark: Good. Gamma Squad, move.

(Gamma Squad starts for the Core Ship, Battle Droids approach the squad)


Battle Droid Sgt.: Kill targets.

Battle Droid: Roger Roger.

Stark: Gamma Squad, get to cover! Blitz, get behind those rocks and set up a sniping position! Sonny, set up an anti-armor attachment over there. Hak, stick with me!( Squad goes to their designated areas, attacks the droids)

Stark: (As he shoots a droid) Yeah! Back to the scrap pile!

Hak: This is taking way to long! I’m throwing a droid popper!( Throws an EMP grenade)

Droid: What’s that?(Looks at grenade, grenade sets off electricity) Ohhhh. (All shut down)

Sonny: That was cool!

Hak: Electro magnetic pulse grenades. Simple, yet efficient.

Stark: Alright squad, lets keep moving.

Blitz: Is that the core ship?

Sonny: No, it just happens to look exactly like one.

Stark: Cut the chatter. There has to be a way inside.

Sonny: Don’t worry, sir! I specialize in making entrances.(Pulls out a charge)

Stark. That won’t be necessary, Sonny.

Hak: Hey, there’s a terminal over there. Maybe I can splice it and see what happens.

Stark: Alright, go ahead.

(Hak splices terminal and a hole appears in the ground)

Hak: This most likely leads to an underground tunnel leading into the core ship. Let’s go!



« Last Edit: May 13, 2010, 08:54:59 PM by Irish Ninja 97 »
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #1 on: May 11, 2010, 09:00:38 PM »
Thanks Koty! Means a lot.

I should have part 2 up tomorrow or on thursday.
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #2 on: May 11, 2010, 10:12:43 PM »
that is a great story IN97
I'm looking forward to read part 2

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #3 on: May 11, 2010, 11:45:11 PM »
A great start IN97!

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 02:05:13 AM »
Very nice so far, IN!

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #5 on: May 12, 2010, 04:43:14 PM »
WOW! Thanks all!
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #6 on: May 12, 2010, 06:56:35 PM »
Here's part 2!

(Gamma Squad enters the underground tunnel)

Sonny: Dang, its dark down here!

Stark: Cut the chatter, Sonny. Gamma Squad, switch to night vision.

(Squad switches to night vision)

Hak: Ahhh. Much better.

Blitz: Are you kidding me? A bug nest?

Stark: Blitz what are you… whoa.

(Geonosian eggs are everywhere)

Sonny: Hope we don’t run into any buggers.

Stark: Same here. Let’s move.

(Squad heads towards what appears to be an exit)

Hak: Oh, great. We got bugs!

(Geonosian warriors attack the squad)

Stark: Be careful! These guys have sonic blasters!

Sonny: Hey Blitz! If you can headshot 3 Geo’s in a row, I’ll give you 50 Credits.

Blitz: You’ve got yourself a deal.

Blitz: (aims his sniper at a group of Geonosians. He fires at one, hitting it in the head) One…(Headshots another Geonosian) Two…(Blitz headshots a third warrior) Three. Pay up, Sonny.

Sonny: OK. One question though. Do you have 50 credits?

Blitz: Grrrr.

Stark: (Throws a thermal detonator at a group of Geonosians, killing them) Yeah! (Shoots a warrior) Another one bites the dust!

Sonny: Great. One got away.

Hak: I got him. (Shoots the runner in the back)

Blitz: Good shot.

Stark: Alright. There’s an exit over there. It should lead to the core ship. (Squad walks in, looks up and sees an entrance to the core ship) Looks like were going to have to climb. Gamma Squad, switch to tow cables.

(Squad fires tow cables at the entrance and climbs up)

Stark: Alright. Lets find the reactor, set a charge, and get out of here with Delta Squad.

To be continued…



« Last Edit: May 15, 2010, 06:32:39 PM by Irish Ninja 97 »
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #7 on: May 12, 2010, 09:09:06 PM »
Cool smilies and emoticons, Koty. Thanks as well. ;)
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #8 on: May 13, 2010, 09:33:07 PM »
Part 3 is here! ;D

Sonny: Wow! This place is huge!

Hak: There’s an elevator over there. Let’s hop on and see where it leads.

(Squad goes in elevator, leads to a hallway that has a fork in it)

Stark: Okay. We’re going to have to split up. Hak and me will go to the right and Sonny and Blitz will go to the left. Got it?

Hak, Blitz, and Sonny: Yes sir!

Stark: Good. Come on Hak.

(Stark and Hak go down the hallway to the right, approach two Battle Droids)

Battle Droid 1: Halt. State your business.

Hak: We’re, uhh, part of the maintenance crew. We heard there was a uhh, problem with the reactor. Do you know where it might be?

Battle Droid 2: The reactor? Oh yeah, go through this door, take a left and enter through the red door. Got it?

Stark: Yeah, we got it.

Hak: By!

Battle Droid 2: (to Battle Droid 1) Do you really think those guys were part of the maintenance crew?

Battle Droid 1: Who cares?

Battle Droid 2: I mean, they could be a part of a squad of heavily trained enemy commandos trying to blow up the core ship.

Battle Droid 1: That’s impossible, OM 6.

Meanwhile,

Sonny: Hey look! There are a few clankers guarding the door.

Blitz: Oh good. I need to get my kills up.

Sonny: No wait. I wanna try a trick on em.

(Sonny and Blitz approach the droids)

Battle Droid 1: Halt. State your business.

Sonny: (Waving his hand in front of the Droid’s face) You will tell us where the reactor is!

Blitz: (Whispering) Sonny! We’re clones, not Jedi!

Battle Droid 1: I will tell you where the reactor is. Go through this door, take a left, and go through the blue door. Got it?

Blitz: Uhh, yes.

Sonny: See ya!

(Squad regroups in the reactor chamber and finds the reactor is heavily guarded)

Battle Droid Captain: Who are you?

Stark: We’re from the maintenance team. We are here to inspect the reactor.

Battle Droid Captain: Ahh, go ahead.

(Squad goes to “inspect” the reactor, each commando sets his own charge)

Hak: Okay! The reactor’s fine. Now we have to go.

(Squad prepares to leave reactor room)

Battle Droid Sergeant: Huh? A charge!

Stark: Fire in the hole!

(Reactor explodes and alarms wail all around)

Sonny: Let’s try and get off this thing before it blows up!

(Squad runs toward the exit)

Stark: This is RC-1257 to RC-1138! 38, do you read me?

Boss: I read you loud and clear Stark!

Stark: Tell the pilot to head to the west side of the core ship!

Boss: Got it!

Stark: Sonny, blow this wall apart.

Sonny: With pleasure sir!

(Sonny sets charge, wall blows open, Delta Squad’s gunship appears)

Scorch: Come on! Jump in!

Fixer: We don’t have much time before that core ship blows!

(Gamma Squad members jump into gunship)

Sev: Pilot, get us outta here!

(Gunship flies away from core ship)

Sonny: Hey Scorch!

Scorch: Yeah?

Sonny: 3… 2…1! (Core ship blows up, Scorch and Sonny cheer)

Boss: Those two are acting like kids who just saw a fireworks show.

Stark: Heh, yeah.

Sev: So, Blitz, how many kills.

Blitz: 60.

Sev: 61.

Hak: So, you seen those new V-19’s?

Fixer: Yeah, those are pretty interesting starfighters.

Pilot: This is Gunship Eagle, we’ve picked up Gamma Squad and we are heading back to Jedi Cruiser Victory.

TO BE CONTINUED..............................
« Last Edit: May 13, 2010, 09:34:44 PM by Irish Ninja 97 »
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #9 on: May 14, 2010, 03:22:40 PM »
Great read!  Those are some fun characters.

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #10 on: May 17, 2010, 09:08:01 PM »
PART 4!!!

CC-1475: Gamma Squad, welcome to Saleucami! The Seperatists and their droid armies have taken over parts of the planet. There is a base in the planet's southern hemisphere. Its your job to take it out. After you do so, find some transport and go to General Kenobi in sector 3. CC-1475, out.

(Gunship flies towards the base, a missle flies out of nowhere and hits the gunship's engine)

Micki (Pilot): Ahhh, crap! Engines are fried. You guys are going to have to take the jetpacks in the back and get outta here before we crash. Go!

Stark: You heard Micki, let's go!

(Gamma Squad members put on jetpacks)

Sonny: Alright! Here I go! (Jumps of gunship)

Hak: Right behind ya' Sonny! (Jumps off the ship)

Blitz: See ya' on the ground sir. (Jumps off ship)

Stark: Arright! I'm comi-ahh! (Falls back as the gunships wing hits a rock and breaks off)

Micki: Mayday,Mayday! This is gunship Dagger we are going down I repeat we are going down!

Meanwhile...

Hak: Everybody here?

Sonny: Present!

Blitz: Yeah, I'm alive. Where's Stark?

Hak: Oh no! He must of never made it off!

Sonny: Guys! Look! (Gunship crashes far away from the group)

Hak: We gotta get over there and see if anyones alive!

Meanwhile...

Stark: Uhhh*cough,cough* where's... my helmet? Ahhh, forget it. (Walks over to cockpit)
Micki? Ozone? You guys still alive? (Opens cockpit)

Micki: Huh? *cough* what happened? Is Ozone okay?

Stark: Ummm(looks and sees a dead Ozone) I'm sorry. He's...

Micki: Oh. So, what do we do?

Stark: You injured?

Micki: Uhh, my right arm feels kinda funny, but, I'm okay.

Stark: Got a weapon?

Micki: (Pulls out a DC-15s blaster) I'm always prepped.

Stark: Alright then. Let's head for the base and see if we can regroup with the others.

Meanwhile...

Stark(over radio): Hak? Sonny? Blitz? Do any of you copy?

Hak: Stark! You okay, sir?

Stark: Yeah I'm fine. Listen, get to the base. Me and Micki will meet you there. Got it?

Hak: Yessir.

Stark: Good. You're in charge til I get back. Stark out.

Hak: Okay guys. Stark's fine and he told us to head towards the base. He also said I'm in charge.

Sonny: *sigh*Alright. Then mumbles: You're always in charge.

Blitz: As long as I get to kill some clankers, I'm up for it.

Hak: Alright. I've always wanted to say this... Gamma Squad, move out!

TO BE CONTINUED...

« Last Edit: May 23, 2010, 05:26:11 PM by Irish Ninja 97 »
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #11 on: May 18, 2010, 11:00:13 AM »
awesome story mate great gust appearance by delta squad too!!!
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #12 on: May 18, 2010, 05:31:38 PM »
Thanks Koty and Mr. Awesome Jawa. Part 5 should be up later tonight. I have a school band concert at 7:00.
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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #13 on: May 18, 2010, 05:41:32 PM »
awesome job irish ninja that was really sweet I like how they tricked the baattle droids in the 3rd one.

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Re: Gamma Squad
« Reply #14 on: May 18, 2010, 06:30:06 PM »
Thanks Charlie
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