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UnitedStatesDemocrat:
Here's the prologue.  Suggestions are welcomed immensely!

P R O L O G U E






   On the desolate planet of Stoga, a place of impossible futres, a community sets in peace.  This small and arid outpost made a living off of moisture farming.  Nobody ever became rich, but never poor.
   The people of the town were peaceful.  Uncorrupted.  They minded their business and everyone got along fine.
   Then one day, about five years before the outbreak of the Clone Wars, a vandalist, a pirate if you would, came into town.  The hoodlum searched for whatever things he could find from family possesions to simple necessities.  Finding an unguarded little hut on the outskirts of town, he went inside...

hangarbay94:
Like it....like it...a.....lo

Nince little morcel my friend, it's got me hooked!

Clonehead:
I like the writing style, Dan. Sounds good.

UnitedStatesDemocrat:
Thank you, guys.  I'm in the process of revising the first chapter, so I can get that up soon.

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