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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #60 on: January 16, 2011, 04:07:24 AM »
SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #61 on: January 16, 2011, 11:35:24 AM »
This is amazing!
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #62 on: January 16, 2011, 02:36:35 PM »
Another great chapter Pat.
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #63 on: January 16, 2011, 03:22:25 PM »
Thanks to everyone who's read and commented on it thus far.  I had plenty of time last night to work on it for once, and it really rolled out easily enough.  I'm thinking 3-5 more chapters to finish off this particular story, and then it's on to plan my very own with my very own world and characters.  Of course, I still have plans to turn this story into a trilogy, but that's awhile off yet.
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #64 on: January 18, 2011, 01:43:33 PM »
Brilliant:)
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #65 on: January 18, 2011, 04:39:39 PM »
Thanks, Warthog!  I hope to try and get another chapter done tonight, but we'll see what happens.
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #66 on: January 19, 2011, 03:08:36 PM »
Good luck.  Am looking forward to it very much.
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #67 on: January 20, 2011, 02:21:40 AM »
Pat, in a word..."AWESOME"... ;)

Your creative writing is becoming more consistent...consistently superb that is, this chapter was a great example of you gripping the reader and keeping them in suspense all the way through, I even felt my adrenalin start pumping as I was reading Han's escape.

I love the Stormtrooper character in this one, you have left some openings for him later on. I am intrigued as to why he didn't feel any fear...another story perhaps! You also made a couple of references to a certain member of staff here, thank you for that, and also Wraith9 crept in there...

I am now going to see if I can find any images of Switchblades ship anywhere, is it a made up designation, or is it actually a real type?

As usual you have painted a wonderful picture in words, it's like a mirror into the Star Wars Universe and I can't wait for the continuation.

Jules
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #68 on: January 20, 2011, 03:16:20 AM »
Pat, you've been Hangarbay'd


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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #69 on: January 20, 2011, 05:37:59 AM »
Jules, thanks for your review!  I hadn't given any thought to the Stormtrooper's reasons for being fearless, and Smashbolt's new ship is indeed a real designation, which I believe you found on your own.  Wookieepedia gets a lot of site views from me when I write!  Thanks for "Hangarbaying" me as well!  I love the look of the Sith Assassin in there.  I hadn't thought to give her any tattoos like that, but I think that really adds an element to her fearsomeness! 
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #70 on: January 20, 2011, 07:24:55 AM »
Quote from: Phatty on January 20, 2011, 05:37:59 AM
Jules, thanks for your review!  I hadn't given any thought to the Stormtrooper's reasons for being fearless, and Smashbolt's new ship is indeed a real designation, which I believe you found on your own.  Wookieepedia gets a lot of site views from me when I write!  Thanks for "Hangarbaying" me as well!  I love the look of the Sith Assassin in there.  I hadn't thought to give her any tattoos like that, but I think that really adds an element to her fearsomeness! 

Pat I just realised I got the name wrong on the artwork....that's what happens when I rush a piece of work...will you ever forgive me!!!
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #71 on: January 20, 2011, 09:10:28 AM »
sweet !!
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #72 on: January 20, 2011, 09:16:35 AM »
Awesome image!
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #73 on: January 20, 2011, 10:52:13 AM »
But of course I will Jules!
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Re: In My Father's Footsteps
« Reply #74 on: January 20, 2011, 01:12:41 PM »
Oh my! An awesome image for an awseome story!
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