Author Topic: Tales From The Clone Wars - VOLUME THREE 02/12/2013 - 15 - JUSTICE, PART FOUR (Read 60797 times)

dana.raye.smith · « **Reply #30 on:** January 19, 2011, 08:31:28 PM »

This is a gripping piece of work. How did I miss this?
Solid characters and stunning visuals along with a well written story.
Great work, and thanks for sharing.

hangarbay94 · « **Reply #31 on:** January 23, 2011, 05:02:37 PM »

Just caught sight of this....

I'll take some time over the next few days to read and then comment...

Well done for getting it to press so fast, I am very impressed!

Kualan · « **Reply #32 on:** January 26, 2011, 08:03:29 PM »

Thanks for the ongoing support, folks! Here (not quite as quickly as Issue Two!) is Issue Three - New Allies!

Looking forward to hearing all your thoughts!

hangarbay94 · « **Reply #33 on:** January 27, 2011, 06:28:00 AM »

WOW! how quickly are you churning these out Kualan?

I've not had the chance to read it yet but will do so shortly!!!!

Phatty · « **Reply #34 on:** January 27, 2011, 08:35:48 AM »

Another brilliant chapter, for sure. I'd have like to have seen more of a battle between the Kel Dor and the Mandalorian, but I also understand the frame in which you must work as well. Looking forward to the next.

beige-4 · « **Reply #35 on:** January 27, 2011, 08:54:46 AM »

great great great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wraithnine · « **Reply #36 on:** January 27, 2011, 10:35:36 AM »

another excellent chapter!

Tamer · « **Reply #37 on:** January 27, 2011, 01:15:19 PM »

I got knocked off the internet today because of over a foot of snow and get back online to see this. Whoopeee!!! Going to the front page. I love the look of the new Mandalorians.

artilarytrooper321 · « **Reply #38 on:** January 27, 2011, 05:08:55 PM »

awesome you might want to make that clone commander and some of his men while your at it

jenki87 · « **Reply #39 on:** January 27, 2011, 08:11:27 PM »

i thought beskar'gam is lightsaber resistant .-.

Kualan · « **Reply #40 on:** January 28, 2011, 07:52:54 AM »

Thanks for the support, folks, glad you like it. And to answer some questions...

Quote from: Phatty on January 27, 2011, 08:35:48 AM

Another brilliant chapter, for sure. I'd have like to have seen more of a battle between the Kel Dor and the Mandalorian, but I also understand the frame in which you must work as well. Looking forward to the next.

Originally I did plan a much longer fight between Kastrofa and the Mandalorian warrior, and it was going to be at the beginning of Issue Four rather than the end of Issue Three, but I moved it to this Issue when I realised that there wasn't much action and that it was mostly lots of talking and plotting between the characters, so I threw the fight in to liven things up a little. The downside to this was that it had to be cut down slightly, as I don't like making the issues too long as it can be off-putting for readers to trawl through too much at a time (though even with the cuts, at 30 pages it's still the second longest issue to date!).

Quote from: Tamer on January 27, 2011, 01:15:19 PM

I got knocked off the internet today because of over a foot of snow and get back online to see this. Whoopeee!!! Going to the front page. I love the look of the new Mandalorians.

Great choice of picture for the front prage treatment, Tamer.

Quote from: jenki87 on January 27, 2011, 08:11:27 PM

i thought beskar'gam is lightsaber resistant .-.

I confess I wasn't aware of that when I made the panel, but by a stroke of coincidence you can see that the lightsaber actually penetrates the warrior's chest through the centre of the armour, where the plating is separated, so either Kastrofa was being very precise or very lucky (but of course, we know there's no such thing as luck

)

hangarbay94 · « **Reply #41 on:** January 28, 2011, 08:07:14 AM »

Kualan,

Wow...............Wow, Wow & Wow!

This really is a wonderfully written piece of work, your dialogue is so easy to read yet perfect for the characters. I loved the Palpatine office scene, perfectly put together. I really envy your skill, simply because I find it so hard to write and it is the story that is the hardest part to get right.

My favourite moment was when Yoda and Windu turn to Obi Wan with inferred expressions, a nice comic moment.

All-in-all this is a wonderfully polished and very enjoyable piece of creative work, I keep saying, we are privileged to have you here on our forum and with every new chapter I can only re-enforce the point.

I for one am totally hooked.

Jules

Kualan · « **Reply #42 on:** January 28, 2011, 07:58:04 PM »

Thank you very much Jules; I agree with you totally about the story-writing itself being the hardest part to get right. I go through draft upon draft before I'm satisfied enough to start making an issue.

I'll do my best to keep up this quicker rate of production, but now that university has started up again it may cut into my time considerably, so an advanced apology if it takes a small while longer for Issue Four.

I do have a preview of the next issue though; with the Battle of Dorin getting underway, there's going to be a big slide in the action-dialogue ratio compared to Issue Three!

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp224/Kualan90/BattleofDorinPromo.jpg

Hope you enjoy!

Clonehead · « **Reply #43 on:** February 04, 2011, 10:36:53 PM »

Wow, that issue rocked even harder than the last one. Yes, I would have liked a longer mando fight but understand why you shortened it. I love those mando designs. The helmet on the copper colored one looks like something I would like to build.