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Toxie's Universe Chapter 25 Party Time
« on: December 18, 2009, 02:39:16 PM »
Ok first post for this on this board but I just updated today.

This is my year and 1/2 long running PN that takes every toyline I can muster and tossess them into one small town.  Toxo-Zombie (from the GI Joe line) is the defacto mayor and the story stars tons of people from Star Wars, Gi Joe, Transformers, Indiana Jones, Microman, Marvel and DC Superheroes and much much more.

The fimilar is there but slightly scewed a bit delivering tons of laughs for all (well that is the intention anyway).  

For those wanting to get the previus chapters here you go:

http://www.zedsjoesite.com/diostory/Comedy/tox/toxtitle.html

The current chapter is the middle of a story (which I hate first posts in the middle of an arch but oh well) called Kingdom Gone, about the GI Joe movie figures wanting to take over for the Original ARAH.  The previous chapters are here (NOTE:  Try to keep this as accessable as possible to new readers so no need to read everything previous to this to understand what is going on, other than anything can appear here anywhere).  

http://www.zedsjoesite.com/diostory/Comedy/tox/kg1/kg1.html

http://www.zedsjoesite.com/diostory/Comedy/tox/jvj/jvj1.html

In this exciting chapter:

Assault on the Terrordrome!!!!!!!

And really that is enough if you think about it LOL

http://www.zedsjoesite.com/diostory/Comedy/tox/mtc/mtc1.html
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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Chapter 15 at last
« Reply #1 on: February 04, 2010, 03:38:56 PM »
At Last the final chapter of Kingdom gone: In this chapter

It is time for the specre's jusdgement on the GI Joes.

http://www.zedsjoesite.com/diostory/Comedy/tox/jud/jud1.html
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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Chapter 15 at last
« Reply #2 on: February 04, 2010, 05:50:42 PM »
  Strange but a lot of fun to read  and I love the street scene. You should be applauded for your originality. Thanks for posting, this is a great addition to the forum!

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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Chapter 15 at last
« Reply #3 on: February 09, 2010, 07:52:26 PM »
  Strange but a lot of fun to read  and I love the street scene. You should be applauded for your originality. Thanks for posting, this is a great addition to the forum!
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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Chapter 15 at last
« Reply #4 on: February 13, 2010, 12:12:23 PM »
Strange and funny is exactly what I wanted it to be,   thanks for the kind words. 

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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Chapter 16 War without end.
« Reply #5 on: March 10, 2010, 06:30:12 PM »
In this exciting chapter:

John Cena gets abused

Toxie Returns (Sort of)

Hellboy investigates something horrible with the Star Wars Trilogy.

And the ever popular much, Much more.....

http://www.zedsjoesite.com/diostory/Comedy/tox/16/01.html

Things with the site should get interesting over the next week as I am overhauling the site and changing up the format to something updated more often (but in smaller chunks). Stay tuned.

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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Site redesign, feedback please
« Reply #6 on: March 14, 2010, 01:41:19 AM »
Desided to change some things up at the old homestead. Anyway got alot of changes added a top graphic and buttons to the important stuff. Also added a background to break up the whole black emtiness feeling. Just starting but wondered what people might think.

http://www.zedsjoesite.com/

LMK what you think so far.

PS I am sure somewhere there is a broken link or two so just alert me if you find one. I tried to check them all but you know how that goes.

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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Site redesign, feedback please
« Reply #7 on: March 14, 2010, 02:52:15 AM »
Zedhatch, I haven't had a chance to look through all of this yet, but I will do later on, I'll post a proper comment then.

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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Site redesign, feedback please
« Reply #8 on: March 16, 2010, 08:26:58 AM »
looks good to me. I would love to see a shipyards link on your ole links page. Gotta love Alba. Wow.

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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Site redesign, feedback please
« Reply #9 on: March 16, 2010, 08:24:00 PM »
Just to note tam, I am planning to update the links page (most likely this weekend but no promises) and was planning to add the shipyards actually.  That is one of the pages I have only updated the header on since starting this.  THere are a couple of broken links in there too that I need to dump out. 

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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Site redesign, feedback please
« Reply #10 on: March 17, 2010, 05:17:24 PM »
I've just checked out the link and the site is looking great so far...I love your presentation on this, it's certainly "outside the box" and shows a lot of creativity.

please keep us updated!

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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Site redesign, feedback please
« Reply #11 on: March 17, 2010, 10:02:34 PM »
Awesome, thanks HB that is exactly what I was going for. 

Next up is the links section (too busy this week to tackle it so I am planning to Sat).

Of course fri I have to do some shooting so that might carry over, who knows.   

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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Site redesign, feedback please
« Reply #12 on: March 18, 2010, 08:50:46 AM »
Zedhatch, keep us posted...oh and I hope you aren't going Shooting for cute widdle bunny wunny's or waindeer!!! Shame on you!

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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Site redesign, feedback please
« Reply #13 on: March 18, 2010, 09:14:26 AM »
Thatta boy. I did some shooting myself this past weekend. Had to modify one of my sks and needed to pop a few rounds.

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Re: Toxies 1:18th Universe Site redesign, feedback please
« Reply #14 on: March 24, 2010, 04:09:25 AM »
OK Tam got the link s down a bit   (Have a bit more to do but most is done.    Anyway Tam do you have any graphics I can put to the link?  Just wondering. 

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